Magic Douluo in Douluo Continent

Long live the Wuhun Palace, kill Tang San. I am convinced by your twist, the author. I think your book is not ideal. Come on, protagonist.

Haha, speechless, give up, give up. (Even if you don't lick Tang San now, you will definitely lick it later) <Not to mention that Su Yuntao resigned from the Wuhun Palace job for Lingdu>

I have read Chapter 15 so far. In terms of characters, the master thinks very highly of himself. He is putting on airs one second and slaps him in the face the next. Su Yuntao does the same, but the impact is not big. The question is why Su Yuntao and Yu Xiaogang think Bibi Dong has the idea of ​​killing Zhao Xiaoling. Is it possible that Bibi Dong is a person who kills others when he sees others with higher talents than him? How to develop the Wuhun Palace? Secondly, Zhao Xiaoling is still young, only six years old, ignorant and ignorant, which is the age where he can be carved. Moreover, he has a clean background and no big forces behind him. Which big force would let such a talented person go? For such a talented, young and clean background, why do you think Bibi Dong would have the idea of ​​killing him? How can a child who has not developed well threaten Bibi Dong's status?

In fact, this book is not bad, but there are too many loopholes. There are so many that I don't even want to talk about them. The typing was too slow, so I just endured them. There are too many holes. Alas╯╰In fact, the direction and materials of this book are good, but many places were not considered, eh (~_~;), ....................................................................................................................................

I will simply mention one or two, hehe (♡˙˙♡) I analyzed it from the reader's point of view, and added a little bit from the creative point of view: the protagonist is not very expressive, and it can obviously catch the audience's eyes, and the reader's eyeballs, but it becomes blurry as it goes back, has no prominence, the expressiveness is not outstanding, vague, and I don't know what to express, uh (~_~;), there is also this loophole, I really can't say too much, this is probably why there are fewer people as you go back?

The writing is not good, I hope the author will continue to work hard

Flanders Zao Wou-Ki Gu Ben Peiyuan Seraphim Colorful Cat Golden Iron Triangle Soul Hunter Forest Su Yuntao Yu Yuan Zhen Jade Luo Mian Xiang Liu Emperor Sword·Ice Ji Wushuang Emperor Han Tian·Xue Wu Yaoyang Nine True Dragon Crowns Earth Dragon Crown Frost Crown

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I never understood it. Is this time travel? Why can't I understand?

Good looking. I like to lick the protagonist. Good looking. Good looking.