The Rebellious Student of Succubus Academy

The front part is interesting, but the back part is a mess. The main character is pushed around like a toy. The main character was described as a daring person in the earlier part, but he is just like that in the second part. Do you have such a FW protagonist? Is it really useless and stuffy? The settings in the front are fun to copy, but I won't write them later and put them on the shelves to cheat money.

The first part is quite exciting, but the second part completely turns into a traditional urban cool novel. I suggest you add some chicken-eating plots as soon as possible, otherwise it will definitely be boring.

What kind of thoughts did you have in writing this book? It's really good to read, but I really don't understand how you could write such a plot. Forget it, you can add two more chapters every day. Hurry up.

What should I say? The ending was a bit rushed and some holes were not filled in, but overall it was still very good.

Going out to Succubus Academy is a bit boring, which is a pity

It turns into a stallion story later on, but the first part is okay.

I originally read it with a novelty in mind, but after reading the first few chapters, I found that the female characters were written in a way that basically just swapped the genders. In the first few chapters, the male protagonist was subdued. How determined the male protagonist was in the first part, but his character was ruined later on. Generally speaking, the previous plot is okay, but the character design is not. Everyone has their own preferences for carrots and vegetables, and as a straight man, I can't stand it. Run away first.

I seem to have seen something similar? But that one was shared in the group, and the plot was a bit more than this one. In that one, he took the initiative to sell himself in for the treatment of his sister's illness or something, but the plot was similar. In that one, the succubus had different feelings for the protagonist. What kind of forest did he participate in? I was challenged by some kind of assessment, and I was jealous and refused to admit defeat. I did it for a long time, and was asked by the teacher to use it as a teaching material. What was said before or after the assessment, if I persisted and remained unchanged, I would become a brave person or something. It seemed that there was not much plot after the assessment. It feels like this book, it couldn't be the same author, right? 😜

The early plot was pretty good, and the story between the protagonist and Tifana was quite interesting, but in the later stages, it felt like a mutant Marvin, which was boring.

The hole has not been filled, so it's not a big problem.