This Actor Doesn't Look Like a Good Person

Let me comment on this book. In the early stage, I made the author's emotional expression too blunt. By chapter 30, I don't know what the author wants to do. I can see that the author is trying very hard to write about the character of the author's time traveler, and he has also spent all the ink on this aspect throughout the seventy chapters. Yes, this has the opposite effect. The protagonist has too many psychological activities, giving people a very watery feeling. Returning to the topic of emotional expression, the author made a major mistake, "using a word repeatedly", which is similar to "suddenly" in the article. There should not be too many such words, especially for some readers who like to read very carefully. Repeated turning words will make the language feel lacking. That's what people say. I'll choke to death after reading it-- Rigidity is a reflection of insufficient writing power. You may need to endure this state of not being able to write for a period of time. Don't try to fight it fiercely and try to eliminate the problem immediately. Keep writing with the questions in mind. When your writing skills increase to the point where you can control the scene, today's problems will be self-explanatory in the future. Writing text is an experience. It is not a teaching of specific steps and skills. Even if you solve this problem on the day, if you ask yourself how you wrote the sense of the picture and the emotional line, you will most likely not be able to express it in words, you can only talk about the feel. Finally, I would like to make some comments. You can describe the emotional development in detail. As mentioned above, the author is a newcomer. The pain point for newcomers is that they cannot control multiple characters. All authors can describe the "old characters" in detail. There is no need for new characters to appear all the time, which will embarrass the readers. I hope the author sees this post.

It's too poisonous, it's too poisonous, it's so poisonous. There are so many powerful prescriptions that are given away casually. Even if the protagonist doesn't know their value, doesn't the author still know? Since the author knows it, it is too poisonous to write like this. This kind of prescription is given away, and others use it to make connections. Finally, it falls to a knowledgeable person to register the copyright on his mobile phone. If the protagonist uses it privately, it will be considered an infringement. If someone knows about it, he will be sued! Good guy, it's okay if the protagonist's greatest strength is not used, and in the end he takes advantage of others. It's too poisonous. Poison! ! !

Are there any heroine brothers? If so, who?

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It's really not necessary for you to love me and me to love you.

The setting of the male protagonist is not bad, which makes his martial arts and acting skills more proven. But have you written a modern novel that describes the relationship between men and women as fast food love? Although the entertainment industry is quite chaotic, it doesn't mean you have to write the protagonist as this kind of person, right? If you really want to write the protagonist like this, you might as well write a pornographic novel, and you can also write down details. Looking at this article now is like a lump in your throat, and it is indescribably uncomfortable. Is it so difficult to find a positive male protagonist?

I don't care which female star the protagonist sleeps with, please don't get involved directly. Is the author really having sex with these female stars? It's outrageous. And can't you change a fake name? You've even written a masterpiece. How dare you!

Why is the starting point updated? There is no update here😌Even the browser can see it

The protagonist travels back in time to ancient times, becomes a court eagle, recognizes thieves as his father, and survives for such a long time in the midst of all kinds of intrigues. If he travels back to modern times and becomes a saint directly, it is definitely unrealistic. Reading a book is just overthinking. If you take the essence into it, what is the difference between it and the so-called xxn on the Internet now? Watching a movie awakens the "Purple Star", watching a movie hates men, watching a movie does not want to have children, tsk tsk.

I've read a few novels recently, and the weird thing about them is that I don't want to go on and leave a lot of pitfalls in the ending. Although this book is a bit awkward to read, with some problems with the characters and logic, the hasty ending is the most annoying. Now that I have read it, I don't want to read the ending of The Eunuch. I hope the author will not be impotent in the future.