Tokyo: There's Something Wrong with This Narration!

It can be seen that the author carefully conceived the case, but to put it bluntly, the author's level is really limited, and many details of the case still cannot withstand scrutiny. Of course, if the level is really high, it will not be published on the online novel platform. I have now finished the medical beauty case, and I only know what is familiar when I see the protagonist becoming a high school detective. Even the normal cases like the later plots of Conan have been written. In order to solve the daily cases, I started to use outrageous motives and outrageous techniques. In order to be complicated and complex, in order to reverse it so that the readers can't guess it, I used too much force to make layers of dolls. However, the author is still sure about the portrayal of the heroine, but he keeps adding more heroines, and is a little worried about whether he will be able to grasp it later. All in all, the level of the case is probably lower than that of later Conan, and the character image is perfect. Apart from the case, there is not much poison. It is worth watching two cases to see if it suits you. Anyway, I plan to continue watching.

Your plot arrangement is quite awkward. There are several women and teachers who like the original person at the beginning, and there is also a woman who has sex with the original person. These people all like the original person, right? Then after the original body died, the protagonist traveled back in time. In fact, these women didn't know that the original body was dead, and the person they liked was actually dead. Isn't this unfair to them? And the protagonist has also become a substitute for the original person. Those women actually like not you as the protagonist, but the original person. You just become someone else's substitute. This kind of relationship is actually unfair to both parties. I don't understand what the author was thinking and why he wrote such a disgusting emotional drama. . .

Anyway, after reading it, I felt that the protagonist was struggling powerlessly in the whirlpool of power. I felt that I couldn't play with those old guys without cheating. Borrow: Why are your ten years of hard work worth fifty years of skill? The plot of returning to the family later is totally unnecessary. Does the family's downfall and disgrace debunk the protagonist? Damn, the family only cares about profit. The protagonist is originally the leader of three companies. When he returns to the family, he has no hair, and he has to shoulder the responsibility of reviving the family. Time traveler? As for my brain, I still insist on marrying that Mei Yi. What the hell, you have so many girls, and you tell me that you want to get a wife. The protagonist is simply sick. After marriage, how will other girls be arranged? It had to explode. People are not humans and ghosts are not ghosts. Just look at it if you're bored

I originally thought this was a romance novel, but when I read the first half I thought it was a harem novel. Then when I read on, I realized it was a suspense novel.

It's good to watch, but the ending is bad. The reporter and her sister didn't appear at the end, nor did Chihiro's ending. There were a lot of holes left unfilled.

This book is quite novel, but it may be a little disappointing for some people who are purely into HS, and it is also a little disappointing for those who are purely into romance novels. But for people who are not pure Conan detectives, you can barely read it. All in all, this book is part of love part detective part of buying meat part of business part of dual personality Overall, it is very good, but it is worth mentioning that the author has not given up on this book yet. It has the potential of about five to six hundred chapters, or maybe less. In short, I want to cheer up this book and prevent it from being too cold.

What's going on? Why did the status suddenly change to completed? Can the author explain what's going on? I'm a eunuch?

I hope I can fill in the gaps quickly and don't become a Riddler. This kind of wife is unclear when talking to others. She doesn't tell the male protagonist what his conditions are when talking to others. I really like this book and have been following it for a long time.

Driving is smooth, and the female protagonists patched up at the back have nothing to do with their predecessors, and there is nothing toxic about them.

I think it looks good, and it's effortless and refreshing.