
Tokyo: There's Something Wrong with This Narration!
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Traveling through Tokyo, a thirty-year-old soul in an eighteen-year-old body thought he had made a profit, until he got a diary that seemed to be his original body, and a strange narration sounded in his ears... [Tsk, tsk, the kind-hearted wife, the aloof sister, the withdrawn top student, the intellectual elder sister, the melancholy female writer, who will be the target of the diary owner? Or is it a hunter hiding in the dark waiting for the lost lamb to be caught? This book is also called "My Neighbors and Me" Tokyo+Love+Suspense+Narration+Reversal
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Not bad, very interesting writing (see Chapter 301)




I finished reading it in two days. There is no one who can write romance novels as detective novels. Please come up with more!




⭐️⭐️⭐️✨It is a very common little life background type cheat story. It seems to be a two-dimensional story, but in fact it is a detective story, and the writing is quite interesting.




Evaluations (updated on 2023.10.31) 9K daily Writing style: 🌟🌟🌟 Characterization: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Creativity: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Logic: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Some of them look like daily love stories, but are actually criminal investigation mystery stories. There were a lot of scenes with this bad narration in the early stage, but after the suspected experience of 404 Iron Fist, the narration appeared less and less. The protagonist was a front line in his previous life. After time traveling, he became a Tokyo Tenten high school student. At the beginning, he was involved in a murder case. In order to protect himself and under the guidance of his original father, he started one case after another and became the savior of the Tokyo Metropolitan Police Department. The case accounts for half of the content, and the other half is love bulldozing. There are currently close to double digits of opposite-sex characters, and the protagonist is not a herbivorous man. The disadvantage is that the narration is a bit too important when the protagonist is solving the case.













