Can't Get Rid of His Body Temperature

Can't Get Rid of His Body Temperature

by Big Lion Riding A Motorcycle

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About This Novel

The deputy division commander of the H City Criminal Investigation Team has a secret... When he was young, his first love died because of him, leaving no trace of his body. From then on, there was no more innocent boy, only the jade-faced evil spirit remained. Until the serial murder case nine years later... Shi Rongze kicked open the gray door, faced the light, and met the man's eyes. "My Ari, welcome home."

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坚强的尾🔥人56mo ago

keep it up

(The current reading progress is about 50%) I really can't help but comment. The first half of the book is quite well written and very attractive. However, in the middle period, first of all, the chapters are missing and very incoherent. Some things jump before they are explained clearly (not foreshadowing). It is very uncomfortable to read in an anticlimactic manner. Secondly, the heroine's character begins to collapse in the middle period... The more I read, the more angry I become... The heroine is a woman who has escaped from death. And after about 7.8 Years of training (judging from the identity of a private detective and the early performance of the heroine), the heroine in the middle period is completely an ordinary girl. Her actions are completely inconsistent with her career and experience, and she has no vigilance at all. In addition, it can be seen that the heroine has a certain strength and brains in the early stage, but it becomes really annoying later. I will work hard to read it in the end, and I wish the author will get better as he writes.

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