
People Are Covering the Sky, and the System is Perfecting
by Hello Bye
About This Novel
Traveling to the world of Zhetian, I thought I was about to face a terrible dark turmoil, and the future was bleak, so I was about to hug Emperor Ye Tian's thigh tightly. The system awakens at this time, but something is not quite right about the system. System: Go from the cage of the eight realms in the lower realm to the nine heavens and ten lands. Reward: Complete baptism of nine heavens and ten earth rules. "Aha?" Wang Mingyuan looked around and found that he was now in a community in Kyoto on Earth. Thinking that the Zhetian Universe was originally the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths in the future, he whispered: "Am I not in the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths now?" System: "Ding, the mission is completed, and the reward is the complete baptism of the rules of the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths!" Wang Mingyuan: "Fuck!"
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Official(87)Scraped 3d ago
I'm really speechless. If you can't write, then stop writing.
A fool who has a system is just as good as a fool who doesn't have a system. He likes to be a bitch to others, and he's so arrogant and talks to himself. He should find a class.
There is a system, there is magic, and you have taken so many medicines. You are so unscrupulous, and you still want to help Ye Fan? Does Ye Fan lack your skills? After you practice the Ancient Law and become stronger, you can then read the scriptures about the Heaven-Shielding Law. Don't you know that Ye Fan is the protagonist? The center of the storm, come closer
Have you read the original work? Don't you read it while you're writing?
Readers have pointed out any mistakes, but they have not corrected them. I have seen thirteen pictures so far, and two obvious errors have been pointed out but not corrected. First, the original true solution is inherited by Emperor Bone Brother, not Footprint Emperor. Second, the nine-second elixir is not a holy mountain with thirteen fruits. You are really outrageous. With content of this level, whether it is on Baidu or if you read the original text when writing, you will not go wrong. If you make a mistake, you can correct it.
This writing is really not as good as what I have read written by middle school students. Watching your plans really makes my IQ lower.
Self-pleasure
In the early stage, when I was weak, I joined the Jiang family and exposed Kunlun and the Immortal Cauldron. It made me laugh to death. How many lives do you have?
This book is quite outrageous. When I read the latest chapter, the protagonist felt like he was a dog.
What is the difference between writing and primary school students😐
This book is really stupid
It's so outrageous. Your b-system can't even protect your body from being taken away. What should you do if you encounter someone with a telepathic mind? If you don't have system protection from a ruthless person at the beginning, your thinking will be as transparent as a ruthless person. Also, there is a high probability that Kowloon is not caused by ruthless people. This thing is not in this universe for most of the time. She is only half a mortal fairy and most likely can't interfere.
Can it be less watery? The idea is very good and novel, but more than half of the words in a chapter are analysis and various analyses; what readers want to see is the advancement of the plot, not Detective Conan
Speechless, there is a problem with the introduction. According to the setting of Shengxu, the earth is formed from the eight lower realms in the chaotic era, mixed with three thousand Dao Continents and a small part of the nine heavens. Therefore, people on the earth can also be said to be in the eight lower realms.
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Official(87)Scraped 3d ago
I'm really speechless. If you can't write, then stop writing.
A fool who has a system is just as good as a fool who doesn't have a system. He likes to be a bitch to others, and he's so arrogant and talks to himself. He should find a class.
There is a system, there is magic, and you have taken so many medicines. You are so unscrupulous, and you still want to help Ye Fan? Does Ye Fan lack your skills? After you practice the Ancient Law and become stronger, you can then read the scriptures about the Heaven-Shielding Law. Don't you know that Ye Fan is the protagonist? The center of the storm, come closer
Have you read the original work? Don't you read it while you're writing?
Readers have pointed out any mistakes, but they have not corrected them. I have seen thirteen pictures so far, and two obvious errors have been pointed out but not corrected. First, the original true solution is inherited by Emperor Bone Brother, not Footprint Emperor. Second, the nine-second elixir is not a holy mountain with thirteen fruits. You are really outrageous. With content of this level, whether it is on Baidu or if you read the original text when writing, you will not go wrong. If you make a mistake, you can correct it.
This writing is really not as good as what I have read written by middle school students. Watching your plans really makes my IQ lower.
Self-pleasure
In the early stage, when I was weak, I joined the Jiang family and exposed Kunlun and the Immortal Cauldron. It made me laugh to death. How many lives do you have?
This book is quite outrageous. When I read the latest chapter, the protagonist felt like he was a dog.
What is the difference between writing and primary school students😐
This book is really stupid
It's so outrageous. Your b-system can't even protect your body from being taken away. What should you do if you encounter someone with a telepathic mind? If you don't have system protection from a ruthless person at the beginning, your thinking will be as transparent as a ruthless person. Also, there is a high probability that Kowloon is not caused by ruthless people. This thing is not in this universe for most of the time. She is only half a mortal fairy and most likely can't interfere.
Can it be less watery? The idea is very good and novel, but more than half of the words in a chapter are analysis and various analyses; what readers want to see is the advancement of the plot, not Detective Conan
Speechless, there is a problem with the introduction. According to the setting of Shengxu, the earth is formed from the eight lower realms in the chaotic era, mixed with three thousand Dao Continents and a small part of the nine heavens. Therefore, people on the earth can also be said to be in the eight lower realms.









