Konoha: Swallow the Thunder Fruit at the Beginning

I don't know if you have noticed that the Thunder Sword and Fang among the Seven Ninja Swords can allow the holder to fuse with the sword and transform into a lightning form, that is, the Black Hoe Thunder Fang's Thunder Release and Sky-Splitting Thunder Snake.

I don't understand why ninjas don't have more wives if their mortality rate is so high? It's not a big problem to marry a few, right? It's okay to leave one or two people without ninja talents at home to take care of the children. If you do some business, build a good relationship, and have someone to take care of you, there won't be so many orphans...

First of all, the biggest problem is that there are big problems with the position and plot arrangement. First, from the standpoint of Naruto, the confrontation between money and power in the real world is cruel enough. In a standpoint like the ninja world, where force is more obvious, you can either write about pursuing power by any means necessary, but not too crazy, or you can be invincible at the beginning, and then focus on writing daily novels. If you are not strong enough and decisive enough, it will not work. Second, when writing a fanfic, since it has been completed, you must avoid using the original plot as a foreshadowing. It is very low to appear to understand but pretend not to understand. However, it is still possible to create your own creations. There are many authors who have created refreshing settings and plots. Thirdly, there are many people who write about Naruto fanfics. The general plot and setting are already very clear. Basically, it will be over in three or four hundred chapters. If you have strong writing or a complete outline, you can also write up to 800 chapters, and it will be detailed and not procrastinating. If not, unless the plot of the multi-world comprehensive comic is reasonably transferred, it will be very confusing and procrastinating, resulting in the forced intellectual change and setting weakening. Fourth, in the setting of the completed fan plot, reasonableness is the first priority. In the existing setting, setting the outline requires a lot of consideration, which is more complicated and less free than the original work. Therefore, how to arrange the plot reasonably and how to add your own things are very important, including character personality, power arrangement, and strength setting. Don't overwrite the author's consciousness into the text without explanation, which will appear unreasonable. This is the most vulnerable place among fans to be poisoned. Fifth, there are already a lot of Naruto stories. In addition to the main line of force value, there is also an important arrangement of writing styles, such as invincible flow, comedy flow, farming flow, daily flow, comprehensive flow, and other system flows. It can redeem the regrets of the original drama, create new characters, and dig deeper. There are many entry points. It is recommended to read more high-rated Naruto stories and study them, it will be better.

To be honest, the book is a good book, not the popular invincible style or the kind where you can't walk when you see a woman, but I feel uncomfortable being suppressed by Tsunade all the time, even if it happens a few times. In chapter 83, I keep suppressing the protagonist in front of others, which makes the protagonist lose all face. I feel that Tsunade has no sense of propriety. Of course, the protagonist is a gentle and good old man, but I don't like this character very much.

I just discovered that my idea was deleted by the administrator. But I don't know what thoughts I posted about being deleted because of that novel! I'm confused because there's no indication of where exactly the situation occurred for me! That's it every time I charge money to read novels! Suddenly delete the idea for me! Or ban me! This software really messes with people's mentality!

No, look elsewhere

Not to mention anything else, as far as the title of the book is concerned, it doesn't matter whether you eat the Thunder Fruit or not. It doesn't make any sense. The plot is also very bland. If you are a book-hungry person, you can read it.

You can even hit 4-year-old Tsunade with your fist after eating the Thunder Fruit. If I hadn't known to read Naruto fanfiction, I would have thought that Tsunade had already learned the weapon color.

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Author, you said slow heat, I support it, but do you know the difference between slow heat and water... I really like it