The Wonderful Journey of the Elf

"The Poké Ball requires at least 2,000 starting alliance coins." It's too expensive, about 200

What should I say, author, did you copy it? Because some of the contents of your book are basically very similar to one I have read before. Or is it the same author? Please give me a reply from the author. Thank you. I also have the right to report.

Pig's feet renamed themselves "Shit Luck" and made high-level energy cubes out of nowhere. It means that no normal person wants to see it! ! !

A good Pokémon book requires nothing more than: 1 Lively and daily life, Pokémon are real and interesting individuals; 2. An engaging description of combat, including the use of moves, trainers' routines, and consideration of venue factors; These two points are more or less reflected in the article. It is well written, but the following point needs to be strengthened. 3. A clear training idea, writing down the Pokémon's character, characteristics, skills, and characteristics, and then cultivating the trainer's thinking, instead of just upgrading and leveling. How is the experience different from playing games with me?

Shouldn't we choose the one with higher race value first? The reason for feeling poor is really stupid. What does it mean to be easy to make a living? What kind of fighting power does it have to choose an elf without spending money to cultivate it? You can't even tell what is important. If you are strong, you can have money. Where will the money come from if you are weak?

I'm speechless. The main character is either SB or retarded. Someone asked his grandpa to beat your elf to the brink of death. You don't have a temper. When others come to you to steal your elf, the elf knows how to hide even a little bit of temper. I have never seen such a holy lady. She says she loves elf but what she does is so disgusting. She takes level 40 and beats level 80. She is speechless. She doesn't even care about the elf's life or death just for a gym badge. It's all poison from beginning to end

It's okay at the front, but it feels a bit crap at the back.

To be fair, it's a good book, at least it doesn't have any major poisonous points, and being able to write interactive plots at least shows that it has the foundation for an excellent work. In principle, I personally think the elves are okay. Although some of the chosen elves are quite weak, I personally think that both qualifications and training are important, but are some of them too ugly? For example, the Smelly Mud (the emotion is quite acceptable), the Ammonite Beast (tentacle monster?), The Sand King (?? When I chose it, I said that there were a lot of results that were not used a few times and had no sense of existence), etc. I think the biggest problem of this work may be the portrayal of female characters. Several supporting characters are all scheming or tsundere, but they are not well grasped, a little bit poisonous, and unlikable; Finally, I hope the author will persevere and at least read a lot of PM articles. The author's writing style is relatively good.

You can capture fewer elves, and you can write a long chapter for each elf. You must not give me the kind of elf that is ugly, not rare, and has weak abilities. Even if you all create flashes, it will be the same. The rock rat is okay, and Heracross is acceptable. After all, it is considered to have high racial attributes in the insect system. Marylou has also come out, and **** things like Dojumon have also come out. What do you want? Isn't it the handsome and rare elves that Pokmon looks at? Why do you insist on choosing someone with mediocre racial qualifications and ugly appearance? Too bad! ! And I deliberately made it so flashy

(｀⌒´メ), author, you actually broke up the real protagonist Team Rocket duo!