
Desert Island Survival Diary
About This Novel
I was stranded on a deserted island due to an accident. I'm not Bell, and I don't know survival skills. I don't know how to hunt, nor how to make traps; I don't understand plants, and I don't understand whether they have toxins; I don't have any wilderness survival experience. However, I have a thirst for life. Yes, So, I don't give up. Book club group: [130898670], everyone is welcome to join the discussion!
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Official(372)Scraped 11d ago
Make a suggestion,
Most people don't like first-person books because the sense of immersion is too poor. It's always me, me, and I don't feel it. In fact, it's better to write the plot directly, with less me and so on. In this way, standing on the mountain and forgetting about the sky, I feel exhausted, slowly sit down, light a cigarette, exhale, and feel relaxed...,,,,, I Standing on the mountain and forgetting about the sky, I felt exhausted. I slowly sat down, lit a cigarette, and exhaled. I felt relaxed. To compare, I sincerely recommend, maybe it is not complete, but it should be a writing technique. If I use this method in the first chapter, I will feel better. There are too few good books, and bookworms can't eat them.
I like books like this
There is no such book that just starts with big white legs and big breasts, which is disgusting to look at. Carrot, you are the purest author I have ever seen. I hope this book can be updated continuously. Such good books are rare.
How to develop follow-up preparations
Are you planning to keep developing as an isolated island, or are you planning to return to the city later?
There is no season. If you eat wild fruits for two months, the bird eggs will not hatch. The bird eggs in spring and the wild fruits in autumn will all be in the same season. He always describes the food in such detail, and no matter what it is, as long as it is cooked, there is nothing that is not delicious. It seems that you are a professional chef. Even if you are a professional chef, what delicious food can you make when you are short of everything?
Are you stealing other people's books?
Did you read that Desert Island Survival Rules? The content of your book is similar to his, but he updates it faster than you.
The author should also look at the time, season, and how many months he has been surviving. The season has changed. What is the purpose of removing pure grains, and what kind of food is in which season? Author, stop talking nonsense. Can lemons and bamboo shoots be obtained in the same month? I hope the author can improve,
I want to ask, where did that box of money go?
After watching it for so long, my biggest feeling is that humans are the biggest destroyers of nature on this earth!
I just like survival novels. I'm not interested in survival stories about modern cities and zombies, but I'm really good at surviving on an island and surviving in the wild.
Isn't there a broken ship? There should be a diesel engine on the ship. There should be some diesel fuel. Can't you get some diesel fuel and use a lighter's flint to spark it? City people are really stupid
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Official(372)Scraped 11d ago
Make a suggestion,
Most people don't like first-person books because the sense of immersion is too poor. It's always me, me, and I don't feel it. In fact, it's better to write the plot directly, with less me and so on. In this way, standing on the mountain and forgetting about the sky, I feel exhausted, slowly sit down, light a cigarette, exhale, and feel relaxed...,,,,, I Standing on the mountain and forgetting about the sky, I felt exhausted. I slowly sat down, lit a cigarette, and exhaled. I felt relaxed. To compare, I sincerely recommend, maybe it is not complete, but it should be a writing technique. If I use this method in the first chapter, I will feel better. There are too few good books, and bookworms can't eat them.
I like books like this
There is no such book that just starts with big white legs and big breasts, which is disgusting to look at. Carrot, you are the purest author I have ever seen. I hope this book can be updated continuously. Such good books are rare.
How to develop follow-up preparations
Are you planning to keep developing as an isolated island, or are you planning to return to the city later?
There is no season. If you eat wild fruits for two months, the bird eggs will not hatch. The bird eggs in spring and the wild fruits in autumn will all be in the same season. He always describes the food in such detail, and no matter what it is, as long as it is cooked, there is nothing that is not delicious. It seems that you are a professional chef. Even if you are a professional chef, what delicious food can you make when you are short of everything?
Are you stealing other people's books?
Did you read that Desert Island Survival Rules? The content of your book is similar to his, but he updates it faster than you.
The author should also look at the time, season, and how many months he has been surviving. The season has changed. What is the purpose of removing pure grains, and what kind of food is in which season? Author, stop talking nonsense. Can lemons and bamboo shoots be obtained in the same month? I hope the author can improve,
I want to ask, where did that box of money go?
After watching it for so long, my biggest feeling is that humans are the biggest destroyers of nature on this earth!
I just like survival novels. I'm not interested in survival stories about modern cities and zombies, but I'm really good at surviving on an island and surviving in the wild.
Isn't there a broken ship? There should be a diesel engine on the ship. There should be some diesel fuel. Can't you get some diesel fuel and use a lighter's flint to spark it? City people are really stupid









