
Eleventh Player
by Fate. Dream.
About This Novel
Nan Wan was inadvertently selected to become a beta game player and lived on the verge of death every day. Three years later, she discovered that everything was a scam and the real survival game had just begun.
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Official(38)Scraped 3d ago
See Chapter Ninety
There are so many bugs that I don't know where to start. The first is the name of the protagonist. The heroine is sometimes called Nan Wan, and sometimes called Bai Moumou. The second is the character of the heroine. The heroine was just an underdeveloped player at the beginning. She seemed to be hiding deep enough and hoarding goods well. However, later it was revealed that the heroine was of vampire blood and had killed thousands of systems. She was extremely powerful and improperly connected, like two books. The third is the dungeon design. The heroine has been to the dungeon so many times that it no longer feels fresh. For example, the city that never sleeps is already known in her eyes, and readers do not feel attracted when reading it. Fourth, many of the plots are inexplicable. What the heroine suddenly does is completely unfounded. The author attributes everything to intuition, which I think is extremely inappropriate. And this is also the biggest bug in the novel.
Why are the books I want to read never finished?
I think the heroine's character is very good. She was very reserved from the beginning and she seemed to have some funny elements. Come on!
very good. Why was it cut?
Just discovered this book. After a brief look, I found it to be very good. I just don't understand why the author cut it?
Please add more! ! !
You are really good at writing. Every time you get stuck, it just makes people scratch your head🤔
The author should examine himself three times a day
The author should examine himself three times a day. CodeZiHu, update Hu, check Hu. If he doesn't update, he won't explain why. I accept updates slowly and accept no updates, but I can't accept it. I don't take readers seriously. There is no reason to stop updating.
good
If you have time, please check the article. There are a lot of typos and the heroine often misspells them, but the plot is good.
nice! !
Update soon ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Outrageous
It was outrageous. I thought I was sick or something happened. But the other one was better. It was around 11 o'clock yesterday. This one didn't say anything about the situation. It just sat there. Even if I stopped updating for a while and I had no inspiration, I still have to explain to the readers. I don't have the most basic respect for the readers. I'm so speechless.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(38)Scraped 3d ago
See Chapter Ninety
There are so many bugs that I don't know where to start. The first is the name of the protagonist. The heroine is sometimes called Nan Wan, and sometimes called Bai Moumou. The second is the character of the heroine. The heroine was just an underdeveloped player at the beginning. She seemed to be hiding deep enough and hoarding goods well. However, later it was revealed that the heroine was of vampire blood and had killed thousands of systems. She was extremely powerful and improperly connected, like two books. The third is the dungeon design. The heroine has been to the dungeon so many times that it no longer feels fresh. For example, the city that never sleeps is already known in her eyes, and readers do not feel attracted when reading it. Fourth, many of the plots are inexplicable. What the heroine suddenly does is completely unfounded. The author attributes everything to intuition, which I think is extremely inappropriate. And this is also the biggest bug in the novel.
Why are the books I want to read never finished?
I think the heroine's character is very good. She was very reserved from the beginning and she seemed to have some funny elements. Come on!
very good. Why was it cut?
Just discovered this book. After a brief look, I found it to be very good. I just don't understand why the author cut it?
Please add more! ! !
You are really good at writing. Every time you get stuck, it just makes people scratch your head🤔
The author should examine himself three times a day
The author should examine himself three times a day. CodeZiHu, update Hu, check Hu. If he doesn't update, he won't explain why. I accept updates slowly and accept no updates, but I can't accept it. I don't take readers seriously. There is no reason to stop updating.
good
If you have time, please check the article. There are a lot of typos and the heroine often misspells them, but the plot is good.
nice! !
Update soon ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Outrageous
It was outrageous. I thought I was sick or something happened. But the other one was better. It was around 11 o'clock yesterday. This one didn't say anything about the situation. It just sat there. Even if I stopped updating for a while and I had no inspiration, I still have to explain to the readers. I don't have the most basic respect for the readers. I'm so speechless.






