Pirate Hunting Space System
About This Novel
The traveler who traveled to the pirate plane carried a time bomb that could kill him! With the beating of his heart! The time bomb also jumps! Ten years... Ten years... The shadow of the evil god hidden in the dark fruit in the body is gradually revealing its bright fangs. Those who travel through time will also face the time of judgment of fate! It was his body that was taken away from him! Or swallow the evil god! Become the supreme power! Destiny has come to a fork in the road again.
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Official(4)Scraped 23d ago
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Your article is really speechless! 1 The writing is too invincible 2 Where does a newcomer get his sword spirit? 3 Infinite resurrection in space 4 You bit a wolf's leg and it turned into a knife? Where did the wolf go? 5 The writing is so messy that I can't seem to figure out the environment or characters!
If you are a novice author, I suggest you use this book as a better practice.
1. The logic of the article is poor. One moment they were on a pirate ship and the next moment they entered the Giant Forest. Are those pirates fools? No one knows about traveling in front of them? 2. It's not that he is invincible at the beginning. I want to know how the protagonist who just got the fruit ability defeated Hawkeye. After all, Hawkeye is also a big shot who can compete with the Yonko! 3. There is no description of how the protagonist trained his physical skills in the Giant Forest. He would be able to master swordsmanship when fighting against Akin and the others. If Zoro could develop his swordsmanship so easily, he would not have reached swordsmanship only when he met Luffy.
After reading the first few chapters, I didn't want to read anymore.
I traveled 17 years and I still know that I was in the world of One Piece. What were I doing in those 17 years? Didn't you know that after watching the fake One Piece, you can do whatever you want if you have power in the world of One Piece? In 17 years, you had no power at all and you were bullied by a few sailors.
There's a problem
I read the beginning, so it may not be accurate. The idea was pretty good, but I felt like the combat power collapsed inexplicably if I didn't think of it better, and it was quite annoying to turn back later.
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Official(4)Scraped 23d ago
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Your article is really speechless! 1 The writing is too invincible 2 Where does a newcomer get his sword spirit? 3 Infinite resurrection in space 4 You bit a wolf's leg and it turned into a knife? Where did the wolf go? 5 The writing is so messy that I can't seem to figure out the environment or characters!
If you are a novice author, I suggest you use this book as a better practice.
1. The logic of the article is poor. One moment they were on a pirate ship and the next moment they entered the Giant Forest. Are those pirates fools? No one knows about traveling in front of them? 2. It's not that he is invincible at the beginning. I want to know how the protagonist who just got the fruit ability defeated Hawkeye. After all, Hawkeye is also a big shot who can compete with the Yonko! 3. There is no description of how the protagonist trained his physical skills in the Giant Forest. He would be able to master swordsmanship when fighting against Akin and the others. If Zoro could develop his swordsmanship so easily, he would not have reached swordsmanship only when he met Luffy.
After reading the first few chapters, I didn't want to read anymore.
I traveled 17 years and I still know that I was in the world of One Piece. What were I doing in those 17 years? Didn't you know that after watching the fake One Piece, you can do whatever you want if you have power in the world of One Piece? In 17 years, you had no power at all and you were bullied by a few sailors.
There's a problem
I read the beginning, so it may not be accurate. The idea was pretty good, but I felt like the combat power collapsed inexplicably if I didn't think of it better, and it was quite annoying to turn back later.
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