Lord Survival: Start as a Red Alert Commander
About This Novel
Because of an accident, Jiang Yuan started the Lord Survival Game! At the beginning, the initial unit Jiang Yuan received was-human race! Alienation occurs at critical moments and becomes a red alert commander! All fear comes from insufficient firepower. Jiang Yuan: "Now, it's time for my enemies to be anxious."........................
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Official(17)Scraped 19d ago
This is a novel, not a composition. The author is too long-winded with numbers just for the sake of water. On the other hand, he must always pay attention to the sales volume of his products. After Jiang Yuan's observation, he found that the sales volume of bullets is the best. After all, as long as the equipment is in place, these players will always use his bullets, so bullets can be said to be a fast consumable. Without bullets, these equipments can be said to have no effect, so it can be regarded as a channel for us to sell and obtain energy points! ... ... After a whole day of observation today, Jiang Yuan was surprised to find that the sales of bullets were indeed very good. After all, as long as a firearm is obtained, it can be used all the time. But one thing is certain, bullets are also a very fast-consuming product. Once the bullets are gone, there is no doubt that the firearm in hand is just a useless iron block. So once these players use up all the bullets, they, the lords, will have to continue to look for Jiang Yuan to buy bullets. Therefore, one thing is certain for Jiang Yuan. Before other players have no way to produce these bullets, Jiang Yuan will be able to form a monopoly sales channel.
There are a lot of words, which somewhat affect the perception after reading them.
Too many typos, too many, too many, too many.
There are too many typos, too many.
I can only say, author, what do you think? There are so many typos. I have to read the article again. I haven't even changed it. Can't the first person and the third person be separated? I thought it was a problem with the reading software. I hope the author will find out and improve it early.
Too many typos
There are too many typos and I hope they can be improved.
There are too many typos, especially the protagonist's name.
There are too many typos, especially the protagonist's name.
It's a bit uncomfortable to watch
The sentences are not fluent and the punctuation marks are messy. It doesn't feel like it was written by a human.
Too many typos! ! ! ! ! ! !
There are a lot of typos, I hope the author can correct them
There are a lot of typos, at least a dozen in three chapters.
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Community(0)
Official(17)Scraped 19d ago
This is a novel, not a composition. The author is too long-winded with numbers just for the sake of water. On the other hand, he must always pay attention to the sales volume of his products. After Jiang Yuan's observation, he found that the sales volume of bullets is the best. After all, as long as the equipment is in place, these players will always use his bullets, so bullets can be said to be a fast consumable. Without bullets, these equipments can be said to have no effect, so it can be regarded as a channel for us to sell and obtain energy points! ... ... After a whole day of observation today, Jiang Yuan was surprised to find that the sales of bullets were indeed very good. After all, as long as a firearm is obtained, it can be used all the time. But one thing is certain, bullets are also a very fast-consuming product. Once the bullets are gone, there is no doubt that the firearm in hand is just a useless iron block. So once these players use up all the bullets, they, the lords, will have to continue to look for Jiang Yuan to buy bullets. Therefore, one thing is certain for Jiang Yuan. Before other players have no way to produce these bullets, Jiang Yuan will be able to form a monopoly sales channel.
There are a lot of words, which somewhat affect the perception after reading them.
Too many typos, too many, too many, too many.
There are too many typos, too many.
I can only say, author, what do you think? There are so many typos. I have to read the article again. I haven't even changed it. Can't the first person and the third person be separated? I thought it was a problem with the reading software. I hope the author will find out and improve it early.
Too many typos
There are too many typos and I hope they can be improved.
There are too many typos, especially the protagonist's name.
There are too many typos, especially the protagonist's name.
It's a bit uncomfortable to watch
The sentences are not fluent and the punctuation marks are messy. It doesn't feel like it was written by a human.
Too many typos! ! ! ! ! ! !
There are a lot of typos, I hope the author can correct them
There are a lot of typos, at least a dozen in three chapters.
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