Struggle in Struggle

I bought a bunch of things, and I also saw a lifelong experience card for Dou Di. You can't even beat a woman. Go up and ask for gentleness and gentleness. Don't bring such a trap! Why don't you just go up there and be a surrogate dog? After buying so many things, are you telling me that you are an invincible writer or something?

1. Please design the highlights of this book and focus on them. I feel like this article is missing something... What is the main theme... 2. The time-travel scene settings are not rich and the connection is unnatural. There are thousands of worlds. Don't stick to the perspective of the protagonist who travels through the scene. Embed more concepts of small characters... Too many protagonists will inevitably become cliche... 3. The character creation is too rigid. Don't talk too much if you can, be concise and straightforward, but not too direct, as the content will appear too dry... (The above is just my personal opinion. I have been there, passed by, and seen it...)

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Why not update the author? Still there?

Support the author greatly, come on

Well, I wrote a novel about the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation. Why didn't it pass the review? (Short story, each chapter is about 500 words)

The author is great, can he add some punctuation marks when the characters speak? It feels awkward not to add it, but most novels now add it (I have never seen any of them, except this one). Also, the name of this novel does not look like a time-travel novel at all. I hope the author can make some changes. (Pleading expression)

When I was writing mathematics, people said that the content did not match, so I had to do this.

Great👍, come on😊

The code words are not particularly important, so be careful not to work too hard. Don't put your health in harm's way over a novel.