Start with a Flying Character-equipped Car
About This Novel
The new book "The Immortal Cultivator in the Secret World" has been released. Please support me. When choosing a final topic for the aerodynamic engineering major at Zhongzhou University, Su Sheng was secretly tricked by his love rival, the professor's son, and was selected for the "Aeronautical and Flying Vehicle Technology Research" topic. It happened that Su Sheng came from the earth with the "immortal cultivation system". From then on, the Blue Star technology tree completely turned into a thick crooked tree. When flying symbols are burned onto the car. The CEO of a car company was furious: "This guy is not a son of a man! Come on, give him money, and we will also install flying charms!" The chairman of an energy group angrily scolded Niang Xipi: "Hurry up and give Su's father money so that he can take away his magical powers!" When the communication array covers the whole world. The president of a communications company was filled with sadness: "One year, a whole year, I didn't receive even a dime of phone bills." The boss of a mobile phone manufacturer made a direct decision: "If you want money, give money, if you want shares, give shares. I have only one request!" When the opened small universe turns into a virtual reality game world, when teleportation arrays are spread all over the world, when alchemy skills are used to develop cancer cures, when weapon refining skills are used to develop invincible mechas, when beast control techniques give birth to divine dragons and fire phoenixes, when spiritual planting techniques cultivate wheat yields of 100,000 jins per acre, when... In an interview with the media, Su Sheng said: "Fairy magic? Magic? Slander, 100% slander. Don't believe in rumors. We must believe in science. Science is the ladder of progress for human civilization!" After saying that, Su Sheng teleported away. ... Finally one day, people discovered, "You're fooling us with this shitty technology. This is obviously cultivating immortality!"
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Official(21)Scraped 25d ago
A little suggestion
How can I put it, the subject matter is good, but the writing is a bit embarrassing, especially the beginning, a shoe box, I go, this is too perfunctory, in fact, you can reward a few more talismans at the beginning, such as luminous talisman and flying talisman, you are done You can customize some iron ingots, such as Luban locks, with a place in the middle to put a talisman. This is much more elegant. When you want to mass-produce vehicles in the future, you only need to make a groove on the car that can be put in. It will be as cool as you like. In this way, others will not think that you are inconsistent with common sense. Instead, they will think that they do not understand it and have short knowledge. Moreover, you can just wait for a while and at least set up a few decent machines. The subject matter is good, but the writing is too embarrassing. Of course, this is also my personal opinion, and the author should not mind it too much.
mutual encouragement.
The book is quite good. To be honest, I also have a hobby and like writing novels. Just like the author said, I like it. I just simply like writing. But later, due to some family matters, I didn't have time to write. I couldn't write a book myself, so I could only work part-time as a gunman for others to earn some extra money. Writing novels is very demanding and tiring. Because there are no results, many authors cannot persevere. I still remember that I opened a book last year and achieved some success. In the comment area, readers approved, questioned, issued suggestions for changes, monitored some typos, or some wrong sentences, and put forward some opinions. To be honest, I was really moved that night. I kept updating all night long. It is a wonderful feeling to be recognized by readers. There are good things and there are bad things. It is relatively natural to have doubts, curses, and all kinds of ugly and dirty words, which are infuriating, but after experiencing it a few times, I have naturally learned to ignore it. I still remember how many times I asked myself when I was scolded when I started writing my first novel. Should I still write it? Should I keep writing it? It was a feeling of emptiness, of being disappointed in myself and not doing well enough. Looking at the abusive comments in the comment section. At that moment, I felt that no matter how strong a person is, they actually have a fragile side. I have doubts about whether my persistence is meaningless. Fortunately, there was one lovely reader among the ten who supported me and allowed me to continue. Even though I don't have time to write my own book now, I still haven't given up. I have been preparing the outline. I don't forget my original intention. I just like writing, and I also like the feeling of being alone and quiet. I hope the author will stick to what he likes and encourage each other.
hey-hey!
The first blood is mine, hahahahaha!
Good looking, good luck to the author
Very beautiful, come on, just don't have a harem
Why are there so few people? Let me test the poison first
I'm here to comment if it doesn't look good. Fellow Taoists, I'll go first.
come on
Come on! The author still needs to work harder!
This is quite awesome
The protagonist makes a lot of money Can the money printed by the machine be as fast as his?
I'm just reading a novel. You tell me the truth? ? ? Author, do you want to reduce the number of words?
It's very nice, but the whole text is too watery. Water water water water water water water water
New book? Broken down? Direct eunuch?
Science is the ladder of human progress
Rating
Community(0)
Official(21)Scraped 25d ago
A little suggestion
How can I put it, the subject matter is good, but the writing is a bit embarrassing, especially the beginning, a shoe box, I go, this is too perfunctory, in fact, you can reward a few more talismans at the beginning, such as luminous talisman and flying talisman, you are done You can customize some iron ingots, such as Luban locks, with a place in the middle to put a talisman. This is much more elegant. When you want to mass-produce vehicles in the future, you only need to make a groove on the car that can be put in. It will be as cool as you like. In this way, others will not think that you are inconsistent with common sense. Instead, they will think that they do not understand it and have short knowledge. Moreover, you can just wait for a while and at least set up a few decent machines. The subject matter is good, but the writing is too embarrassing. Of course, this is also my personal opinion, and the author should not mind it too much.
mutual encouragement.
The book is quite good. To be honest, I also have a hobby and like writing novels. Just like the author said, I like it. I just simply like writing. But later, due to some family matters, I didn't have time to write. I couldn't write a book myself, so I could only work part-time as a gunman for others to earn some extra money. Writing novels is very demanding and tiring. Because there are no results, many authors cannot persevere. I still remember that I opened a book last year and achieved some success. In the comment area, readers approved, questioned, issued suggestions for changes, monitored some typos, or some wrong sentences, and put forward some opinions. To be honest, I was really moved that night. I kept updating all night long. It is a wonderful feeling to be recognized by readers. There are good things and there are bad things. It is relatively natural to have doubts, curses, and all kinds of ugly and dirty words, which are infuriating, but after experiencing it a few times, I have naturally learned to ignore it. I still remember how many times I asked myself when I was scolded when I started writing my first novel. Should I still write it? Should I keep writing it? It was a feeling of emptiness, of being disappointed in myself and not doing well enough. Looking at the abusive comments in the comment section. At that moment, I felt that no matter how strong a person is, they actually have a fragile side. I have doubts about whether my persistence is meaningless. Fortunately, there was one lovely reader among the ten who supported me and allowed me to continue. Even though I don't have time to write my own book now, I still haven't given up. I have been preparing the outline. I don't forget my original intention. I just like writing, and I also like the feeling of being alone and quiet. I hope the author will stick to what he likes and encourage each other.
hey-hey!
The first blood is mine, hahahahaha!
Good looking, good luck to the author
Very beautiful, come on, just don't have a harem
Why are there so few people? Let me test the poison first
I'm here to comment if it doesn't look good. Fellow Taoists, I'll go first.
come on
Come on! The author still needs to work harder!
This is quite awesome
The protagonist makes a lot of money Can the money printed by the machine be as fast as his?
I'm just reading a novel. You tell me the truth? ? ? Author, do you want to reduce the number of words?
It's very nice, but the whole text is too watery. Water water water water water water water water
New book? Broken down? Direct eunuch?
Science is the ladder of human progress
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