A Dream Journey Starting from Shaolin

Author, are you Han or a minority?

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I don't understand how obsessed the author is with being a monk. Pig's Knuckle is obviously a Taoist disciple, but he obsessively learns all the Buddhist exercises, but turns a blind eye to the Taoist exercises. This religious tendency is too obvious, and it's blatantly disgusting to the Taoist sect.

Your combat power collapsed as soon as you appeared as Naruto.

Hey, I feel like the author is a bit stuck at this point. He relies on characters to complete the plot, and the process of getting along with whom, or the main characters of the novel. I think it is completely possible to go out of the whole ninja and travel around the world, the process of traveling around the world, or something else is the important thing to write, instead of relying on some characters and plots to write around them. There is a tendency, and it is easy to write crookedly. It is best to take a break, think about how to write, and have a plan. Otherwise, in the end, it will just be a mess of bad writing, and it will be wrong. There are also mutual mentoring, which is a flow in itself, and exchange of skills. It should be to use the things of this world to exchange with others to get better things, rather than using your own things. There is no thing in this world to exchange with others, and you should be grateful to each other. If you put it this way, your system is a new one, but it is more valuable. Don't be too involved with the characters in the plot, otherwise you will forget the theme. It is here to become stronger and absorb nutrients, rather than the protagonist being better than the supporting role, and being around them all the time. There are other things I won't talk about. After all, I think the author's writing style is not that style, it's more dark.

There is a problem with the different world setting The characters and actors are exactly the same, are you kidding me? You can write something similar, but not the same

Nine of your ten chapters are in different worlds, so why do you still have a main world in your setting? It's better to just travel through all the worlds. This kind of setting is a bit broken! When I read your novels, nine out of ten of them were in another world, and they were not interesting at all.

I found that many book friends don't like Naruto World. Let's talk briefly here, Because I like the Eight Gate Dungeon in Naruto very much. This technique has a very strong bonus to the protagonist's warrior profession in the main world. And I think it would be interesting to transfer the Buddhist magic that the protagonist learned in other worlds to the world of Naruto and collide with his original ninjutsu, just like the Buddhism's eastward journey in the Tang Dynasty. But since book lovers don't really like the anime world, I will also cut off the anime world in the previous outline and focus on the world of martial arts and mythology. I hope all book friends will support me! 😘😘

The word "pin" appears, so disgusting

Isn't the national custom fragrant? Why did the Japanese life that I was living so well in my childhood suddenly disappear? . . .