Swallowing Starry Sky's Alternative System
About This Novel
After traveling through time, I just want to hug Luo Feng's lap, become immortal, and then turn a planet into my own private territory, so that I can have unbridled hey hey! But in the blink of an eye, why did he become a behemoth? (With multiple worlds, I basically only write about Swallowing, The Age of Desolation, and the sequel to Swallowing.)
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Official(12)Scraped 7d ago
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I feel that this book is very similar to The Thousand-Body Sacred Scripture: The Beginning of Devouring the Starry Sky. Is the author your friend?
I have some opinions
Why do most of the time-travelers mentioned in the book not rely on City Lord Luo? It's because the protagonist who devours most of the fan works I've read is so unbelievable that he doesn't need to lick City Lord Luo.
I have a problem
Why do you always emphasize the mentality of ordinary people? Do you have foresight, a time traveler, and a powerful golden hand (you have a powerful talent at the beginning)? What is this? ? ? ? ? You actually don't want to strive to make it difficult for yourself to practice until you become immortal? (Then why do you want those talents when you know the danger?) Just wait for Luo Feng, right?
Too strong to persuade people to quit, I just dropped out of 56766. I am also very good at it.
Shouldn't you have ten times the absorptive capacity if you have ten times the genes? I'm afraid your tenfold genes were given away by charging your phone bill.
At first I thought the writing was a bit bad, but the rest of the content was okay, but damn, you just stopped updating, you can't make money like this!
There is a question: it is written very clearly in the original work of Swallowing Starry Sky that when you break through immortality, all clones will be converted into divine bodies. Only when you break through the Venerable and the Lord of the Universe, there is an issue with the conversion rate.
In fact, the Douluo world at the beginning is not necessary. Tang San is easy to kill before he becomes a god, but it is difficult to find a world like Douluo where the rules are easy to access. Keeping Douluo will be very helpful for the protagonist's future development.
Avoid pitfalls
It is too repetitive, too dissuasive, and too blunt (only the first few chapters are reviewed, because I couldn't stand the rest, so I will evaluate it based on the golden three chapters.) No curse words will be left, it will be in the next book.
I rejected this first one, it was so ugly.
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Community(0)
Official(12)Scraped 7d ago
author
I feel that this book is very similar to The Thousand-Body Sacred Scripture: The Beginning of Devouring the Starry Sky. Is the author your friend?
I have some opinions
Why do most of the time-travelers mentioned in the book not rely on City Lord Luo? It's because the protagonist who devours most of the fan works I've read is so unbelievable that he doesn't need to lick City Lord Luo.
I have a problem
Why do you always emphasize the mentality of ordinary people? Do you have foresight, a time traveler, and a powerful golden hand (you have a powerful talent at the beginning)? What is this? ? ? ? ? You actually don't want to strive to make it difficult for yourself to practice until you become immortal? (Then why do you want those talents when you know the danger?) Just wait for Luo Feng, right?
Too strong to persuade people to quit, I just dropped out of 56766. I am also very good at it.
Shouldn't you have ten times the absorptive capacity if you have ten times the genes? I'm afraid your tenfold genes were given away by charging your phone bill.
At first I thought the writing was a bit bad, but the rest of the content was okay, but damn, you just stopped updating, you can't make money like this!
There is a question: it is written very clearly in the original work of Swallowing Starry Sky that when you break through immortality, all clones will be converted into divine bodies. Only when you break through the Venerable and the Lord of the Universe, there is an issue with the conversion rate.
In fact, the Douluo world at the beginning is not necessary. Tang San is easy to kill before he becomes a god, but it is difficult to find a world like Douluo where the rules are easy to access. Keeping Douluo will be very helpful for the protagonist's future development.
Avoid pitfalls
It is too repetitive, too dissuasive, and too blunt (only the first few chapters are reviewed, because I couldn't stand the rest, so I will evaluate it based on the golden three chapters.) No curse words will be left, it will be in the next book.
I rejected this first one, it was so ugly.
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