
Demon Fox: Start with One Person to Open the Treasure Chest
by Six Paths Of Samsara Toronto
About This Novel
The new book "Shared Talent: Traveling Through the Heavens and Worlds Simultaneously" has been uploaded. It has 120,000 words and is ready to be read! Ji Haoyue traveled through the world of the fox demon matchmaker and became Dongfang Haoyue, the eldest young master of the Dongfang family. Facing this world where monsters are rampant, and facing the crisis of the Dongfang family being destroyed twenty years later, Dongfang Haoyue feels that she is under great pressure. Fortunately, Dongfang Haoyue has awakened the standard gold finger for time travellers, which allows him to travel through the world and open treasure chests to obtain rewards, as well as add points, making Dongfang Haoyue immediately confident in life in the new world. "I, Dongfang Haoyue, must rely on my own efforts to achieve immortality and stand on the top of the world!" Dongfang Haoyue said. The main world is the fox demon world, the first world is Under One Person, the world to be written is Zhetian, Dou Po, Dragon Clan, etc. Each world will be written in detail. The worlds I have experienced: Under One Person, Young Song Xing, the fox demon little matchmaker part, Dragon Clan.
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Official(182)Scraped 23d ago
So disgusting
What's going on? Why do you want to take on a disciple out of nowhere? Are you so awesome? In the first two sentences, he said that he didn't like this character, but later he accepted him as his apprentice, and he accepted him at the first meeting? What the hell? Inexplicably, a 13-year-old started to take on apprentices. How awesome! You said that you met that guy (I forgot his name), and even after we got together for a while, I didn't feel so disgusted when you accepted him as a disciple.
There are too many chapters in the world traveled through
I have written more than a hundred chapters about time travel and time travel. It is not interesting, boring and aesthetically tired. Moreover, most people who read this book want to see fox monsters. It is more than a hundred chapters. The world of fox monsters has not yet unfolded, and I am speechless.
Why did it become so poisonous after it was put on the shelves?
I thought it was very toxic when I accepted Hu Weisheng as my disciple. You are only 13 years old. You pretend to be a little adult all day long and are old-fashioned and arrogant. You are so good at writing. Why do you act like this when you come to Fox Demon? Did it go viral as soon as it was released? The paid plot is not as good as the free plot. I gave up on it.
It's okay for one person, but the young singer in the back feels like a different person, I'm speechless =_=
Hmm I can barely pass it, but the pig's feet skills are a bit too mixed. I don't know what I'm practicing. It's just a hodgepodge of skills that I want to learn. After all, there is always a goal to practice (some are for immortality, some are for seeking enlightenment, and some are for traveling far away). Even the protagonists in the fox demon world also have things they want to protect and cherish. Looking at your content, I feel that it is as gorgeous as a running account but has no connotation. It is like taking things as they come, without distinguishing priorities. Everyone in the world of fox demons looks flesh and blood, which makes watching the anime feel very real and immersive. Even Jin Renfeng, although his personality is not that good, at least he can work hard for the goal, although he may be unscrupulous.
The first few dozen pictures are quite nice, but the later ones really pissed me off.
I have a suggestion for the author. Your book was very attractive at the beginning. When I wrote about sending my sister to Wang Quan, I felt a little embarrassed but I felt it was understandable. You can write about marrying Wang Quan but don't write it in detail. No one wants to read this. Until you write a story in which the protagonist sends a poor boy to a wealthy lady, it will make me want to read it. Really, there is no need for you to write these things. It's very poisonous. You can mention it later. You can't participate in it, you know?
Add points to more than forty skills, miscellaneous but not refined, forcibly sharing attribute points, suppressing strength, and being like a mentally retarded pig's trotters. Not all normal people have 3-4 main upgrade skills, attack, defense, and escape. Leave the rest for emergencies. As long as the realm is improved, it is not too easy to practice low-level skills. The resources of the two worlds are still not as strong as the fox demon. It is rubbish.
no mercy
Everyone (but not all) came to see you perform unparalleled in the world of fox monsters. The most attractive thing about Zhutianliu is the mashup of combat power system. The visual effect is equivalent to the villain's crazy output on you, and then it is useless. Then you say the last sentence, "Nano technology, boy". You are here for this one, not really for the infinite other worlds. If you want to see the love of a separate world, you can definitely find a single If you want to watch a solo world travel story, you can find a fanfic of one person. At least I want to watch the protagonist open up unparalleled in the world of fox demons. It has been so long now, and the protagonist is still packing things in the boy's song shop, and even went back to the fox demon in the middle. There is nothing to write. I'm tired, and I left. The boy song shop is completely in the clouds, there is nothing interesting at all, and I don't know where the fun is. I just write about this world and drag it on for half a month, right? In fact, in many books, some readers don't want to read this paragraph, so they want to keep it for a while, and then continue reading after this paragraph. But in fact, if you keep reading for too long, you will stop reading it because you don't want to read it.
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Official(182)Scraped 23d ago
So disgusting
What's going on? Why do you want to take on a disciple out of nowhere? Are you so awesome? In the first two sentences, he said that he didn't like this character, but later he accepted him as his apprentice, and he accepted him at the first meeting? What the hell? Inexplicably, a 13-year-old started to take on apprentices. How awesome! You said that you met that guy (I forgot his name), and even after we got together for a while, I didn't feel so disgusted when you accepted him as a disciple.
There are too many chapters in the world traveled through
I have written more than a hundred chapters about time travel and time travel. It is not interesting, boring and aesthetically tired. Moreover, most people who read this book want to see fox monsters. It is more than a hundred chapters. The world of fox monsters has not yet unfolded, and I am speechless.
Why did it become so poisonous after it was put on the shelves?
I thought it was very toxic when I accepted Hu Weisheng as my disciple. You are only 13 years old. You pretend to be a little adult all day long and are old-fashioned and arrogant. You are so good at writing. Why do you act like this when you come to Fox Demon? Did it go viral as soon as it was released? The paid plot is not as good as the free plot. I gave up on it.
It's okay for one person, but the young singer in the back feels like a different person, I'm speechless =_=
Hmm I can barely pass it, but the pig's feet skills are a bit too mixed. I don't know what I'm practicing. It's just a hodgepodge of skills that I want to learn. After all, there is always a goal to practice (some are for immortality, some are for seeking enlightenment, and some are for traveling far away). Even the protagonists in the fox demon world also have things they want to protect and cherish. Looking at your content, I feel that it is as gorgeous as a running account but has no connotation. It is like taking things as they come, without distinguishing priorities. Everyone in the world of fox demons looks flesh and blood, which makes watching the anime feel very real and immersive. Even Jin Renfeng, although his personality is not that good, at least he can work hard for the goal, although he may be unscrupulous.
The first few dozen pictures are quite nice, but the later ones really pissed me off.
I have a suggestion for the author. Your book was very attractive at the beginning. When I wrote about sending my sister to Wang Quan, I felt a little embarrassed but I felt it was understandable. You can write about marrying Wang Quan but don't write it in detail. No one wants to read this. Until you write a story in which the protagonist sends a poor boy to a wealthy lady, it will make me want to read it. Really, there is no need for you to write these things. It's very poisonous. You can mention it later. You can't participate in it, you know?
Add points to more than forty skills, miscellaneous but not refined, forcibly sharing attribute points, suppressing strength, and being like a mentally retarded pig's trotters. Not all normal people have 3-4 main upgrade skills, attack, defense, and escape. Leave the rest for emergencies. As long as the realm is improved, it is not too easy to practice low-level skills. The resources of the two worlds are still not as strong as the fox demon. It is rubbish.
no mercy
Everyone (but not all) came to see you perform unparalleled in the world of fox monsters. The most attractive thing about Zhutianliu is the mashup of combat power system. The visual effect is equivalent to the villain's crazy output on you, and then it is useless. Then you say the last sentence, "Nano technology, boy". You are here for this one, not really for the infinite other worlds. If you want to see the love of a separate world, you can definitely find a single If you want to watch a solo world travel story, you can find a fanfic of one person. At least I want to watch the protagonist open up unparalleled in the world of fox demons. It has been so long now, and the protagonist is still packing things in the boy's song shop, and even went back to the fox demon in the middle. There is nothing to write. I'm tired, and I left. The boy song shop is completely in the clouds, there is nothing interesting at all, and I don't know where the fun is. I just write about this world and drag it on for half a month, right? In fact, in many books, some readers don't want to read this paragraph, so they want to keep it for a while, and then continue reading after this paragraph. But in fact, if you keep reading for too long, you will stop reading it because you don't want to read it.
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The plot is 3 stars, the protagonist's character is 4.5 Stars, and the writing is 2.5 Stars. Overall rating: 🌟🌟🌟3 stars This is a rare Chinese comic book that I got for free. The writing is pretty good (´∀`*). Whether it's the plot or the character description, although it doesn't feel particularly brilliant, it's not annoying or too toxic. There is a story among them, I haven't watched the original drama of "Song of Songs", but the writing made me continue to read it, and the overall reading was very smooth. The character of the protagonist and the use of Goldfinger are also well written. What makes me feel a little uncomfortable is that there is too little written about the world of fox monsters. Combined with the title, it feels a little bit like trying to sell the meat of a sheep's head ≥﹏≤, and it seems that the protagonist's charade is still quite big, and I am a little worried about whether it will collapse later... In terms of the choice of the world, the next dragon has not read the original work, so I don't have much interest in reading it. I am currently planning to raise another one... Attached is an introduction: Current Progress Dragon Clan Ji Haoyue traveled through the world of the fox demon matchmaker and became the eldest young master of the Dongfang family, Dongfang Haoyue. Faced with this world where monsters are rampant, and the crisis that will destroy the Dongfang family twenty years later, Dongfang Haoyue feels that she is under great pressure. Fortunately, the Dongfang Haoyue Party awakened the standard gold finger for time travellers, which allows them to travel through the world and open treasure chests to obtain rewards and add points. This made Dongfang Haoyue immediately confident about life in the new world. I, Dongfang Haoyue, must rely on my own efforts to achieve immortality Immortal, standing at the top of all heavens and worlds!" Dongfang Haoyue said. The Taoist world, the fox demon world, the first world is under one person, the world to be written covers the sky, Dou Po, Dragon Clan, etc. Each world will be compared. Fine Experienced worlds: Under One Person, Young Song Xing, Fox Demon Matchmaker Part, Dragon Clan.




Recommended index[⭐⭐⭐] ①The mature eight-year-old boy is really outrageous ② There is a problem with the setting. The author set that the treasure chest can be opened by staying within 100 meters for three hours. However, as written in the text, it means that you can only open it by sticking to the plot person for three hours. At Tianxiahui Headquarters, if you take a nap, won't all the treasure chests be opened? Does the author really know how far it is? ③ Under one person, the world inexplicably traveled thousands of miles to save Chen Duo. Basically, one person and the same person have to save Chen Duo. I am already tired of aesthetics. And you must have a reason to save him. Even if you go to an area near her because of something, it is better than this unclear thing. You rush to save her even though you are thousands of miles away. The plot is too unreasonable. ④The plot of Yue Tingxia is inexplicable, just because I like Yue Tingxia, I accept the bearded student as a disciple. It is simply illogical. The author also explains that after killing the enemy, the protagonist starts to act emotionally, which is a big deviation.














