
I Really Haven't Cultivated Immortality
by Black Nib
About This Novel
Resurrection of spiritual energy? One day, Blue Star, which has never been born as a myth, seems to have ushered in a magnificent mythical world, and countless people cheered for it. The young Gao Yang was, fortunately or unfortunately, one of the first to step into a strange new world. The illusory and grotesque world of dreams, the spiritual world full of dangers, and the weird and unspeakable world of spirits. Let's see how a young man can create a mysterious path.
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Official(17)Scraped 7d ago
The setting is OK, the writing is average
The pace is too fast, the plot develops too quickly, there is no character description, the characters have no characteristics at all, and the background of the whole book is okay.
The protagonist feels like he's not very smart
spirit world
Soul, dream spirit, all spirits, gods, this is the extraordinary dawn of Wen Chao Gong
What are you writing about? The setting is very interesting, but the writing is really ordinary.
It's Sabine time. Pull out the peanuts and go to sleep. Haha, you're not stupid. Wow, oh wow.
It didn't work when I first started watching it. I couldn't immerse myself in the protagonist at all. How could I still watch it?
,,,
Why does it feel like a record of experiences and stories about alien creatures?
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The subject matter is really good, and the ideas are also very good, but the professional information is too omitted. It can be said that there is only a name. There is basically no fighting process. The protagonist's training process is briefly mentioned. There is basically no growth in the small world. The more than two hundred mountain people are still the same. The Blue Star Martial Arts School is basically useless and cannot feel that it has any effect. The protagonist's personality is ever-changing and has no definite character. He always likes to expand.
Sounds good to me, come on author.
I really like this type of novel.
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Community(0)
Official(17)Scraped 7d ago
The setting is OK, the writing is average
The pace is too fast, the plot develops too quickly, there is no character description, the characters have no characteristics at all, and the background of the whole book is okay.
The protagonist feels like he's not very smart
spirit world
Soul, dream spirit, all spirits, gods, this is the extraordinary dawn of Wen Chao Gong
What are you writing about? The setting is very interesting, but the writing is really ordinary.
It's Sabine time. Pull out the peanuts and go to sleep. Haha, you're not stupid. Wow, oh wow.
It didn't work when I first started watching it. I couldn't immerse myself in the protagonist at all. How could I still watch it?
,,,
Why does it feel like a record of experiences and stories about alien creatures?
Comment
The subject matter is really good, and the ideas are also very good, but the professional information is too omitted. It can be said that there is only a name. There is basically no fighting process. The protagonist's training process is briefly mentioned. There is basically no growth in the small world. The more than two hundred mountain people are still the same. The Blue Star Martial Arts School is basically useless and cannot feel that it has any effect. The protagonist's personality is ever-changing and has no definite character. He always likes to expand.
Sounds good to me, come on author.
I really like this type of novel.















