
Yuanle
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Three cases of faceless female corpses attracted the attention of the news. Just one case should be finished before school starts.
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Official(1)Scraped 6d ago
You can add more detailed descriptions and use environmental descriptions to set off the scene when the old man found the body. For example, he was so frightened that he sat on the ground after discovering it. The surroundings were dark and so quiet that he could hear a pin drop on the ground... Also, try to avoid typos or not at all.
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Official(1)Scraped 6d ago
You can add more detailed descriptions and use environmental descriptions to set off the scene when the old man found the body. For example, he was so frightened that he sat on the ground after discovering it. The surroundings were dark and so quiet that he could hear a pin drop on the ground... Also, try to avoid typos or not at all.







