
The Supreme Swordsman of One Piece
by Nai He'an
About This Novel
One Devil Fruit can create a bloodline boundary; A piece of Neptune-type meat can make up for the loss of cells caused by over-extraction of chakra; A piece of soul crystal can increase soul power; Faced with everyone's enthusiasm and pursuit, Zhong Hao forcefully uttered two words: "Not selling" This is a story about a time traveler using the power system of other worlds to bully the indigenous people. (PS: The introduction is weak...)
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Official(65)Scraped 1mo ago
Isn't it a bit ridiculous to use Naruto's power system to fight against the Pirates' power system? Naruto seems to have always had lower power than the Pirates except in the late stages when all kinds of bugs appear! For example, if you compare Akainu with Fire Release and the like, you will know. As for swordsmanship, let alone swordsmanship, except for Konoha White Fang who specializes in swordsmanship, others use swordsmanship to make up for their shortcomings in close combat. They all fight with ninjutsu, right? In the world of pirates, ninjutsu feels like it has no future. Unless you can directly develop the kind of power that can destroy the world at every turn in the late stage, then there is really nothing to say. The above These are all personal feelings, don't criticize if you don't like it!
Does the heroine have
If you want to accept some good ones in the harem, please accept some of good quality, such as Robin from One Piece, the Empress, Tsunade from Naruto, Konan, and Bleach's Flower Sister. You can consider all of them, but if you are writing about a harem, not only do you have to be able to control the protagonist, but the heroines also have to be able to write all kinds of emotional scenes. You can go and read the manga "All Things Frozen" to learn how to master other people's emotional scenes. By the way, are there any other worlds besides these three worlds?
This is:: One Piece: The Supreme Swordsman is the word "Pirates". I hope there are more "Pirates"
When it comes to the heroine, don't write about Nami, Robin, and the Empress. It feels so ridiculous! If you don't want a harem, the harem won't look good. It's been 8 years since I watched One Piece. I hope the plot from the original author of One Piece will not change. So I read novels and looked for a lot of One Piece series. Just found one that satisfies me. . . . . I hope the author will be satisfied with this book. Please forgive me for my poor expression skills. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. Don't be pretentious about pig's feet. I won't offend anyone unless they cause trouble. It's okay if there are too many. Don't have peach blossoms when you see a beautiful woman. It's disgusting. Okay, that's it! Thank you author
Does your cover look like Hattori Hanzo from Heroic Soul Blade?
Can you please not take people through time travel? I don't really like taking people through time travel.
Heroic Soul Blade
Isn't this cover featuring Hattori Hanzo from Heroic Soul Blade?
The cover is inexplicably familiar, it seems to be Hattori Hanzo from Heroic Soul Blade!
This cover features Hattori Hanzo from Heroic Soul Blade.
Author, do you play this game?
Timeline is too long
Naruto's timeline is too long. You can temporarily stop Naruto's time when you enter Death and Pirates. In short, it is well written but there are still shortcomings. I hope it can be corrected.
Hattori Hanzo
This leather face is okay, give him a good review, Heroic Soul Blade Hattori Hanzo
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Official(65)Scraped 1mo ago
Isn't it a bit ridiculous to use Naruto's power system to fight against the Pirates' power system? Naruto seems to have always had lower power than the Pirates except in the late stages when all kinds of bugs appear! For example, if you compare Akainu with Fire Release and the like, you will know. As for swordsmanship, let alone swordsmanship, except for Konoha White Fang who specializes in swordsmanship, others use swordsmanship to make up for their shortcomings in close combat. They all fight with ninjutsu, right? In the world of pirates, ninjutsu feels like it has no future. Unless you can directly develop the kind of power that can destroy the world at every turn in the late stage, then there is really nothing to say. The above These are all personal feelings, don't criticize if you don't like it!
Does the heroine have
If you want to accept some good ones in the harem, please accept some of good quality, such as Robin from One Piece, the Empress, Tsunade from Naruto, Konan, and Bleach's Flower Sister. You can consider all of them, but if you are writing about a harem, not only do you have to be able to control the protagonist, but the heroines also have to be able to write all kinds of emotional scenes. You can go and read the manga "All Things Frozen" to learn how to master other people's emotional scenes. By the way, are there any other worlds besides these three worlds?
This is:: One Piece: The Supreme Swordsman is the word "Pirates". I hope there are more "Pirates"
When it comes to the heroine, don't write about Nami, Robin, and the Empress. It feels so ridiculous! If you don't want a harem, the harem won't look good. It's been 8 years since I watched One Piece. I hope the plot from the original author of One Piece will not change. So I read novels and looked for a lot of One Piece series. Just found one that satisfies me. . . . . I hope the author will be satisfied with this book. Please forgive me for my poor expression skills. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. Don't be pretentious about pig's feet. I won't offend anyone unless they cause trouble. It's okay if there are too many. Don't have peach blossoms when you see a beautiful woman. It's disgusting. Okay, that's it! Thank you author
Does your cover look like Hattori Hanzo from Heroic Soul Blade?
Can you please not take people through time travel? I don't really like taking people through time travel.
Heroic Soul Blade
Isn't this cover featuring Hattori Hanzo from Heroic Soul Blade?
The cover is inexplicably familiar, it seems to be Hattori Hanzo from Heroic Soul Blade!
This cover features Hattori Hanzo from Heroic Soul Blade.
Author, do you play this game?
Timeline is too long
Naruto's timeline is too long. You can temporarily stop Naruto's time when you enter Death and Pirates. In short, it is well written but there are still shortcomings. I hope it can be corrected.
Hattori Hanzo
This leather face is okay, give him a good review, Heroic Soul Blade Hattori Hanzo
















