This Lord is Too Loyal
by Shinno Chibi
About This Novel
Loyalty is not absolute, it is absolutely disloyal. Viscount Linn, who traveled to the world of the divine right of kings, has always been a devout believer who thoroughly implements the will of the goddess. Pope: The goddess said that the church should eradicate all evil in the world! Such as skeletons. [You repelled the tide of skeletons, confiscated the church land, divided the land rights equally, and implemented the purpose of eradicating all evil. The goddess bestowed upon you the holy glow] Pope: The goddess said that it is duty-bound to crusade against such alien races! Such as vampires. [You eliminated the vampires and eliminated the taxing Paladins. Those who suck people's fat and people's anointing are also vampires, the definition is correct, holy aura +1] Pope: The goddess said that donating money can redeem the soul. Such as the Atonement Scroll. [You stole the money obtained from the Atonement Scroll and used it to relieve the victims of the territory. You successfully redeemed your soul with money, and your holy glory +1] ... Finally, Lin En bathed in the radiance of the goddess and came to the highest point of the holy mountain, holding up a long sword and pointing at the world below, looking upright and righteous. "You all seem a little disloyal, I'm going to kill you!"
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Official(16)Scraped 17d ago
The exploited often do not realize that they are being exploited, and a change in their thinking is the beginning of order change.
I would like to give a suggestion to the author. You'd better not make the protagonist surrounded by yin and yang, and don't put women around the protagonist every few chapters.
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If you have any ideas or inspiration, please post them here~~
The first hundred chapters are okay, but the rest seems to be too fast, and the wit is too obvious. Considering that it is a new author, Samsung should encourage me to change the pace and slow down a bit. The character of the protagonist is a bit too idealistic, the emotional drama between women is too fast, and there are too many harems, so if you are a woman, you have to do it🙃. In addition, many supporting characters are just tools without any ideas🤧.
It is very unreasonable that the protagonist Goldfinger is protected by an indigenous god. The goddess is really kind and righteous. She kills the fake priest as soon as possible instead of looking for the protagonist, an atheist, to force faith. And the extraordinary power does not add to itself, the creation of the void is made of handiwork
Your sin is as great as a mountain reaching into the sky or a sea full of abyss.
It looks pretty good. In terms of technology, I feel... There is a kind of "I believe in thinking" power in it, but the details of this power cannot be expressed clearly. Well, I personally think it's okay
Typos and confusing sentences
I'm quite curious, author, can you see the typos and sentences I caught for you? I'm not sure. Anyway, it didn't look right, so I marked it. If you can see it, can you reply to me? I've ordered them all. Your book is very nice. Although the pace seems a bit fast, it's very enjoyable to read😘
The author writes quite well (make up the word count)
Ah, why should we take it for granted? There is something wrong with a modern person traveling through the past and having to govern according to modern people's vision and methods.
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Official(16)Scraped 17d ago
The exploited often do not realize that they are being exploited, and a change in their thinking is the beginning of order change.
I would like to give a suggestion to the author. You'd better not make the protagonist surrounded by yin and yang, and don't put women around the protagonist every few chapters.
Crowdfunding book writing area
If you have any ideas or inspiration, please post them here~~
The first hundred chapters are okay, but the rest seems to be too fast, and the wit is too obvious. Considering that it is a new author, Samsung should encourage me to change the pace and slow down a bit. The character of the protagonist is a bit too idealistic, the emotional drama between women is too fast, and there are too many harems, so if you are a woman, you have to do it🙃. In addition, many supporting characters are just tools without any ideas🤧.
It is very unreasonable that the protagonist Goldfinger is protected by an indigenous god. The goddess is really kind and righteous. She kills the fake priest as soon as possible instead of looking for the protagonist, an atheist, to force faith. And the extraordinary power does not add to itself, the creation of the void is made of handiwork
Your sin is as great as a mountain reaching into the sky or a sea full of abyss.
It looks pretty good. In terms of technology, I feel... There is a kind of "I believe in thinking" power in it, but the details of this power cannot be expressed clearly. Well, I personally think it's okay
Typos and confusing sentences
I'm quite curious, author, can you see the typos and sentences I caught for you? I'm not sure. Anyway, it didn't look right, so I marked it. If you can see it, can you reply to me? I've ordered them all. Your book is very nice. Although the pace seems a bit fast, it's very enjoyable to read😘
The author writes quite well (make up the word count)
Ah, why should we take it for granted? There is something wrong with a modern person traveling through the past and having to govern according to modern people's vision and methods.
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[Farming][Western Fantasy][2 or more female protagonists][Seedlings] The Pope glanced at the witch standing on Linn's left, "This is no longer an ordinary heretic, we must strike hard." "You say he is a pagan? I think you are the pagans," the goddess said while holding Linn's hand. ------------ It's a bit high and low now, I hope it can ease back.
[3]Use scientific methods and industrial technology to manage territory
The male protagonist is about farming, grain and grass. The plot is a bit old but the writing is good. Brief description of the content of the book: The protagonist travels to a different magical world, becomes a viscount and has his own territory, and begins to develop technology in his own territory.
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