As Someone Who Can See the Barrage, I Am Definitely Not a Villain

Most of the poisonous points have been modified. Please read it again and see if it is OK?

The poison is not very poisonous, but there are too many places where I feel uncomfortable. The characters written by the author feel like they are not real people, and there is nothing worth remembering. It feels like a puppet, conflicting for the sake of conflict in many places, without any thoughts of its own, and with no distinct personality. But considering it's Aotian, it doesn't matter if he just barely.

I feel that the world must have chosen a protagonist for a purpose, which means that there cannot be only one plan (there must be an alternative protagonist), and the protagonist's luck should also be accumulated slowly (slowly getting stronger and stronger through development choices, and finally unstoppable) (although it was already extremely high at the beginning), that is to say, as long as you don't It's the late stage, and it's really easy to change the protagonist. In other words, the early stage is the best opportunity to resist fate. Especially in this article, from the current perspective of the real protagonist, the possibility of replacing the protagonist is really high. And if you don't replace the protagonist at this time, why do you think you can resist fate in the later stage? Of course, reading other book reviews, the protagonist has a very cowardly character (I don't know how such a character could appear in such a background), and it is normal for him not to dare to resist. So it feels like it would be better if the protagonist didn't successfully resist fate in the end (maybe)?

The author said that most of the poisonous points in this book have been revised. I have not read the book before the revision, only the revised one. But to be honest, I feel that the biggest poisonous point is the heroine. Although she is Feng Aotian, she has no brains and no emotional intelligence. She is a slave who was bought back. I really don't know where she got the capital to drag her. It's really the heroine's problem that she can't bear it or not.

Let me first mention that attracting people into the harem is just wishful thinking of Xiao Fenmao at this moment. Luo Yuan is not interested in the harem. The little pink Maura has her own criteria for entering the harem. As for why she did this, maybe she sensed something, maybe she saw a glimpse of the future, maybe it was the concession she had to make in order to save Luo Yuan. To reveal a small part of the future content: Little Pink Hair has a very magical talent, but it has not yet awakened. And this talent is the basis for her ability to kill the protagonist in the fourth world line. As for this talent, it also has a very basic function, which is to seek advantages and avoid disadvantages, and this function is passive and carried from birth. The most important point is that seeking advantages and avoiding disadvantages can be used on the people you identify, helping the people you identify to choose the best choice.

This author's writing is very bad. It's just that Feng Aotian's creation is simply too broken. It's like a pot of good soup, and a mouse droppings fell into it. The male protagonist is too licking. Author, are you going to write a dog-licking article? The protagonist bought two maids, and one of the maids had to become an ancestor. Although the theme of this movie is that he doesn't want to be a villain, even if you are not a villain, you can't kneel and lick him like this.

For Feng Aotian's character and IQ, please refer to Long Aotian...

Goodbye, goodbye, walk slowly, no farewell, thank you.

After all, qq is already like this, why do you want to force it, spiritual castration, spiritual eunuch to penetrate into the hearts of the people, the hearts of the people -100🤡🤡, Moreover, in this kind of writing, the general routine is either to change one's destiny by collecting barrage benefits, or to eradicate enemies. Judging from the author's appearance, he should wash, then lick, and finally stick. The subject matter is good🤡 but your wording is not good, which can cause misunderstanding and appear very poisonous. Of course, after all, it is normal for a newbie to write a book, but the kind of posts and comments you write are attractive, but what you wrote about "low emotional intelligence" do you think it could be translated into adult language as a eunuch? So you, the eunuch protagonist, are not very attractive. It's not like your hegemony article has other attractions. In addition, your writing style and plot may be quite poisonous, because if you think it is good, it may be very poisonous, or you may not even read it after you finish writing it.

Cutie has no brain. Make up the numbers