Become a Detective in Conan
About This Novel
Kurosawa Fuji traveled to the world of Detective Conan, but he didn't understand Detective Conan. He was killed by his girlfriend and determined to become a famous detective in this town where people die every day. He originally didn't want to believe in love, but he met her...
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Official(2)Scraped 6d ago
The book is very small and seems to be conservative and ordinary at present, and the big advantages and problems cannot be seen. I have a slight problem after scanning it. A novel is not a script. It is best not to often start a paragraph with a person's name, especially when each paragraph is very short, such as: XXX came to XXX place... Seeing this situation, XXX couldn't help but say... XXX smiled and replied... Everyone's name is still a four-letter full name, which gives people a bad impression and also shows a lack of literary accumulation. Use the third person when you should; omit when you should; use less paragraphs when you should... Don't always write about people's actions and dialogues.
Please recommend a new book. If you have any comments, please point them out directly. The author mainly wants to listen to his advice. ﻌა
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Official(2)Scraped 6d ago
The book is very small and seems to be conservative and ordinary at present, and the big advantages and problems cannot be seen. I have a slight problem after scanning it. A novel is not a script. It is best not to often start a paragraph with a person's name, especially when each paragraph is very short, such as: XXX came to XXX place... Seeing this situation, XXX couldn't help but say... XXX smiled and replied... Everyone's name is still a four-letter full name, which gives people a bad impression and also shows a lack of literary accumulation. Use the third person when you should; omit when you should; use less paragraphs when you should... Don't always write about people's actions and dialogues.
Please recommend a new book. If you have any comments, please point them out directly. The author mainly wants to listen to his advice. ﻌა
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