Delta, Asara is My Good Brother

The pace is tight and exciting 😣 Well worth watching

One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, ninety

What do you think of this book? Just look at how long you can write it for the sake of delta hobby. It is destined to be a flop. Even if you write some mindless urban literature, a few more people will read it.

After reading Chapter 20, I found that there were not many comments. I am also playing Delta recently. I think the author is also a fan, so I can't help but complain. 1. The logic is very confusing. The author wanted to set up a world where all people are in the delta, so he said it was created by gods. But why do I still need to use a computer when writing and playing games? It's outrageous to even have any language or even eye contact with the human-machine. You might as well just write about eSports! There are many other logical conflicts. For example, after Dazhou becomes something similar to an academic career, what percentage of people in the world will play it? The author crashed the car several times while playing the game. Please think about the probability for yourself. Don't do such outrageous things just to write this plot. 2. There are too many personal things mixed in emotionally. I remember the author said that Harvard coins are linked to reality, and the operators inside do not have safes. So here we go, there is a plot where the protagonist lets Shushu go. What the author may want is a harmonious and loving delta, but your setting makes this impossible. CS exists in reality, not to mention that Harvard University is linked to real careers. The reason we let Shushu go in the game is because it has no good stuff at all, and you won't get anything by kicking him (good stuff comes with insurance). I feel like he's begging for mercy in a game, so there's no need to kick him. But the author's setting makes it impossible to let Shushu go in the book, because all the things that come out are outside. You can live if you want, but the things must be turned in. And it depends on your mood. When you have nothing left, most people will choose to resist. So I suggest the author stop and think about it before writing instead of just getting excited. Either change it to a pure e-sports online article, or write a different delta world. Rather than being completely illogical in an illogical world. You might as well watch the live broadcast, right? People who come to read your book are all Delta lovers, but if your book doesn't attract anyone, who will stay? Does it just depend on the routines you wrote that are available online? 666 With teammates?

Shennong has been poisoned to death. You can't stand it without thinking.

You have to read this book without thinking, many places are too outrageous