The Pokémon of National Destiny: Starting from the Poison Guard, it Sweeps Across!

The writing, the battles, the imagination, and the emotional lines with Pokémon are all very good (really very good), but I feel extremely uncomfortable reading the book. -Author, my fifth point is that I sincerely suggest you change your style. Your writing is really good. It's really a pity- 1 Repeated game in the early stage: every villain is a plot of taunting-raising-defeating 2. The names of people in the later period (more than one) are all ex (if you want to belittle others, please give a name that has only a mocking meaning instead of x hints. I accept snp). I gave up here once, but your plot is really comfortable to watch (occasionally being criticized by a name is really yxys) 3. The other GJs are all enemies (one of the failures of the setting is that the punishment after failure in the early stage is to eliminate the contestants - I think so. I forgot a little - you can refer to other national games and let them face the questioning of senior officials and civilians after failure. Reduce the national games and so on. The game between high-level officials does not depend entirely on the protagonist) 4 "Real" Pokémon, Schrödinger's reality (meaning it's all the author's decision, it's not a big deal) 5 This is qqyd and I don't have too many expectations, but if the author follows the rules and doesn't engage in hs or childishness, rz villains will definitely be more popular than they are now (after all, your subject matter has already fallen into the trap, and there is nothing eye-catching at the beginning) The subject matter and the imaginary plot are indeed very good. Don't tell me that qqyd likes to watch this kind of thing. Why don't they post it at 7 o'clock?) Qqyd has too many articles about driving. It is unrealistic to use this method to attract readers. After all, the tracks are full and this kind of thing is not popular at 7 o'clock. Based on your writing style and imagination, your article actually has high potential. If you weren't so indulgent, it would definitely be middling if you put it at seven points. (I don't dare to speak big words. After all, seven o'clock is too many masterpieces and it depends on the actual situation) Summary: The author's writing is very good, but he used the wrong way to attract traffic, and it turned out to be a failure. On the contrary, it made people who like to watch this kind of thing feel average, and also stepped on other people's mistakes. I rarely review books (this is the 4th book I have reviewed and the only one I paid to read), which is really a pity

100,000 words in the early hours of Sunday night. Is there anyone who can post it? Please contact me and add v.

Keep up the good work, author! A little more.

There are just a lot of typos 🤐 (ten words, ten words)

After reading a few pictures, I feel like there are a bunch of retarded people out there, and they think too low of the country. Even if there is no Pokémon anime in Battle of National Destiny, at least we should study Pokémon when they come out. Hey, the protagonist's assigned skill is first said to be waterproof and then slapped in the face. What a retard.

Sometimes he is invincible and cannot be killed by any skills, sometimes he is instantly killed, and later even thunder and 100,000 volts cannot kill him.

It's so poisonous. It can be seen that the author has no research on Pokémon and is just riding on the popularity.

This month's data is just a little bit off. I beg you all to follow up on it. It's just a little bit off! ! ! Thank you all in advance here!