
Traveling Through the Wilderness: Join the Chat Group at the Beginning
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[All Heavens and Worlds, Chat Groups, Multiple Female Protagonists] Li Changsheng traveled to the ancient world and awakened his enlightenment. Join the Wanjie chat group at the beginning. [Old Taoist from Wudang Mountain: The person who entered the group this time was actually not a human being. I am Spider-Man: Anyone who enters the chat group is a member of our group. Little island owner of Peach Blossom Island: Newcomer, what is your current cultivation level. Prehistoric Liushu: The chat group shows me eleven stars. Young Master of Wuhun Palace:? ? I am Spider-Man:? ? ? Old Taoist from Wudang Mountain:? ? ?
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Official(70)Scraped 23d ago
Open high and go low, I have no interest in watching it at the beginning. A person from the ancient and true immortal realm goes to the low martial arts world to ask for skills. It is probably not as good as the nuclear bomb version of the ancient world. The saint steps ten meters at a time?
The key to the fact that the best innate spiritual treasures can still be cultivated by humans is that even Daluo Jinxian is not worth at most two stars.
The nanny story, the timeline, the protagonist's attack methods, comprehension is a thing that is super powerful and understands the rules. Come on, why should you tell them the plot for no reason? Isn't it good to be a wretched boss?
Everything was well written before, but if I write it smaller, there suddenly becomes an ambiguous plot. It feels like it's not something that a Daluo Jinxian can do. Their xinxing has been sacred every day for at least hundreds of thousands of years. He was having an affair with a female member of the group whom Jin Dan could not meet. The time when he helped the little medical fairy resurrect his parents. The Queen asks for help. Is it difficult to move a million people and add a clan to the country with Daluo Jinxian's cultivation level? Don't have to wait. Isn't that just a matter of reaching out and it's all done?
What a piece of shit, you have such a god-defying understanding. You still need a foundation to understand the techniques... Tian: I really have no cards, and I was overthrown by such a little rubbish.
Come on
Nowadays, we read less and less Honghuang novels. After all, most of them are about cultivating or picking up spiritual roots and magic weapons and then playing the Way of Heaven or Hong Jing. What's even more exaggerated is that merit is a good thing for those who practice and have skills, but it turns out to be poison to the protagonist, and he is speechless. Merit is omnipotent, but it depends on how the protagonist uses it. In this way, Hong Jing is a bad person, and the way of heaven is also a bad person, and the merit is also poison. I also suggest that authors don't write novels with a single heroine or no heroine. Time-travel novels are a pleasure. As a result, if you are a pure cultivator, you might as well go to the Great Wilderness. You also added a chat group novel. There is little market for this kind of writing. If you write more, it will be eunuch. No matter it is multiple heroines or harem novels, as long as there is a plot, it is good. If there is no plot, forget it. There are also many eunuchs.
I just make a few comments
Anyway, it's nothing. There are so many people deducting stars in your comment section, so why don't I give a five-star review to the head office? Anyway, everyone looks the same. To be honest, you, your understanding is against the heavens, and that narrator, it would be better for you to be like this [You have understood the Nine-Yang Divine Art with your understanding, and used the Nine-Yang Divine Art to create a new technique, which you named - "The Great Sun Sutra"!
The prison-suppressing power of the idol and the sky-swallowing demon power are a bit difficult to write. They are already at the 11th level. You should first understand yourself at any time. That is the method.
Um
Finally it's not a stupid article licking Bibi Dong
The first part is pretty good, but the later part gets worse and worse.
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Official(70)Scraped 23d ago
Open high and go low, I have no interest in watching it at the beginning. A person from the ancient and true immortal realm goes to the low martial arts world to ask for skills. It is probably not as good as the nuclear bomb version of the ancient world. The saint steps ten meters at a time?
The key to the fact that the best innate spiritual treasures can still be cultivated by humans is that even Daluo Jinxian is not worth at most two stars.
The nanny story, the timeline, the protagonist's attack methods, comprehension is a thing that is super powerful and understands the rules. Come on, why should you tell them the plot for no reason? Isn't it good to be a wretched boss?
Everything was well written before, but if I write it smaller, there suddenly becomes an ambiguous plot. It feels like it's not something that a Daluo Jinxian can do. Their xinxing has been sacred every day for at least hundreds of thousands of years. He was having an affair with a female member of the group whom Jin Dan could not meet. The time when he helped the little medical fairy resurrect his parents. The Queen asks for help. Is it difficult to move a million people and add a clan to the country with Daluo Jinxian's cultivation level? Don't have to wait. Isn't that just a matter of reaching out and it's all done?
What a piece of shit, you have such a god-defying understanding. You still need a foundation to understand the techniques... Tian: I really have no cards, and I was overthrown by such a little rubbish.
Come on
Nowadays, we read less and less Honghuang novels. After all, most of them are about cultivating or picking up spiritual roots and magic weapons and then playing the Way of Heaven or Hong Jing. What's even more exaggerated is that merit is a good thing for those who practice and have skills, but it turns out to be poison to the protagonist, and he is speechless. Merit is omnipotent, but it depends on how the protagonist uses it. In this way, Hong Jing is a bad person, and the way of heaven is also a bad person, and the merit is also poison. I also suggest that authors don't write novels with a single heroine or no heroine. Time-travel novels are a pleasure. As a result, if you are a pure cultivator, you might as well go to the Great Wilderness. You also added a chat group novel. There is little market for this kind of writing. If you write more, it will be eunuch. No matter it is multiple heroines or harem novels, as long as there is a plot, it is good. If there is no plot, forget it. There are also many eunuchs.
I just make a few comments
Anyway, it's nothing. There are so many people deducting stars in your comment section, so why don't I give a five-star review to the head office? Anyway, everyone looks the same. To be honest, you, your understanding is against the heavens, and that narrator, it would be better for you to be like this [You have understood the Nine-Yang Divine Art with your understanding, and used the Nine-Yang Divine Art to create a new technique, which you named - "The Great Sun Sutra"!
The prison-suppressing power of the idol and the sky-swallowing demon power are a bit difficult to write. They are already at the 11th level. You should first understand yourself at any time. That is the method.
Um
Finally it's not a stupid article licking Bibi Dong
The first part is pretty good, but the later part gets worse and worse.









