
Traveling Through the Heavens Together, I Am Making Fun of Myself
by Shengxik
About This Novel
After becoming the controller of the chaotic universe, Yuan Chen is still pursuing a higher level of realm. But who would have thought that the real golden finger would appear after becoming the controller? Fortunately, he also saw the future direction. Zongman Yuan Chen: "How can you say I'm cheating? Can the system I built myself be called cheating?" Film and Television Yuan Chen: "What is the Ten Thousand Souls Banner? Remember, this is the Human Emperor Banner. If you dare to say something wrong again, I will send you in~" Mortal Yuan Chen: "It's impossible to live in peace with someone hanging on my body, not even in this life!" Quanmei Yuanchen: "That's how it is when creating a law. It will always be struck by lightning. If it doesn't strike, I mean the law is not good." ... Manghuang Yuanchen: "Well, another supreme and ultimate path, transcendence is in sight..."
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Official(46)Scraped 2d ago
In the first world of One Piece, when I saw Theory of Destiny, I felt speechless. When writing about fate, don't write about fan fiction. Unless there is a strong person's layout, such as the chess pieces of Gu Yue Fang Yuan's world. Or the level is the highest, such as the gate of eternal life weapon Ling Fang Han. What other world is worthy of talking about destiny? If the fate correction is so strong, if you just save Gu Yuena and do nothing else, and you die later, does that mean that even if the red hair is killed by you, you can't kill him? Usopp made you ashes, can you still be resurrected? Or is it that this fate is half-assed, you can't save people, but you can kill people?
Just like history, in modern society, you go to primitive people to learn how to eat and hunt. The writing is as messy as history
chaos
It flew up in chaos and acted like crazy. The manga looks uncomfortable
What are you writing? How can a group of low-level worlds get the power to correct the world? How can a group of low-level worlds get their destiny? You can't ruin the plot. Why is the world still so low-level? ? ? You can't write without the plot, right?
There is one more thing I don't like. Since they are systems in different worlds, or if they are completely incompatible, even the controller of the universe will become a completely ordinary person after traveling to another system. If they can be interoperable, it means that the two worlds have something in common and can transform the original perceptions. Then there will be no situation where one world is a boss and the other world is trash. For example, the protagonist of the first world is a fairy dragon, and he comes to the world of One Piece. The system actually helped him master the primary Overlord Qi. Even if the original systems were not interoperable, at least they can now communicate with each other. So with his level, it would be impossible for him to still be the primary Overlord Qi, at least he would jump to the intermediate level all at once. When the author writes this way, it feels like the protagonist is completely strengthened by the system, which feels very inconsistent. If things are going through the same flow, we should always learn by analogy and transform knowledge into each other.
It's been several days since I read it, why haven't I updated it yet?
Quick update from the author, I'm going to skip Emperor Beixuan, he's too nanny.
In fact, I would rather the author write the perfect sub-plot into a separate novel.
good
It would be perfect if you write less Japanese comics, please do more
It feels like chaos to me! The first pirate was so frustrated
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Official(46)Scraped 2d ago
In the first world of One Piece, when I saw Theory of Destiny, I felt speechless. When writing about fate, don't write about fan fiction. Unless there is a strong person's layout, such as the chess pieces of Gu Yue Fang Yuan's world. Or the level is the highest, such as the gate of eternal life weapon Ling Fang Han. What other world is worthy of talking about destiny? If the fate correction is so strong, if you just save Gu Yuena and do nothing else, and you die later, does that mean that even if the red hair is killed by you, you can't kill him? Usopp made you ashes, can you still be resurrected? Or is it that this fate is half-assed, you can't save people, but you can kill people?
Just like history, in modern society, you go to primitive people to learn how to eat and hunt. The writing is as messy as history
chaos
It flew up in chaos and acted like crazy. The manga looks uncomfortable
What are you writing? How can a group of low-level worlds get the power to correct the world? How can a group of low-level worlds get their destiny? You can't ruin the plot. Why is the world still so low-level? ? ? You can't write without the plot, right?
There is one more thing I don't like. Since they are systems in different worlds, or if they are completely incompatible, even the controller of the universe will become a completely ordinary person after traveling to another system. If they can be interoperable, it means that the two worlds have something in common and can transform the original perceptions. Then there will be no situation where one world is a boss and the other world is trash. For example, the protagonist of the first world is a fairy dragon, and he comes to the world of One Piece. The system actually helped him master the primary Overlord Qi. Even if the original systems were not interoperable, at least they can now communicate with each other. So with his level, it would be impossible for him to still be the primary Overlord Qi, at least he would jump to the intermediate level all at once. When the author writes this way, it feels like the protagonist is completely strengthened by the system, which feels very inconsistent. If things are going through the same flow, we should always learn by analogy and transform knowledge into each other.
It's been several days since I read it, why haven't I updated it yet?
Quick update from the author, I'm going to skip Emperor Beixuan, he's too nanny.
In fact, I would rather the author write the perfect sub-plot into a separate novel.
good
It would be perfect if you write less Japanese comics, please do more
It feels like chaos to me! The first pirate was so frustrated














