
Warriors in the Comic World
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When Shen Hao fell while running, he traveled back in time to the World War II era and became Captain America's comrade. However, what he didn't expect was that after sleeping that day, he traveled back in time again and became the younger brother of the boss Luo Feng of the Devouring Starry Sky. Shen Hao said in confusion: Is there a more careless time traveler than me? Ps: The Marvel world of this book + the swallowing starry sky = complement each other
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Official(341)Scraped 23d ago
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If you have anything you want to complain about or make suggestions, please post it inside the building, and any outside posts will be deleted😄
Who is Luo Feng?
I have read a hundred or two hundred pictures. I suggest you read this without thinking too much. Just read what you write and don't think too much.
There are too many points to complain about. The author does not have the ability to connect the two worlds in a fast-paced transition (there will definitely be people who say you can write it. I am a reader, I am just giving my perspective after reading it). The plot is completely copied from the original work, and the rest of the time is spent on soy sauce. I originally thought I would just endure it, but after reading hundreds of pictures, the plot is too confusing and I can't stand it anymore
About traveling back and forth between two worlds
The protagonist travels back and forth between the two worlds, and no one else is surprised. . This is very fake. . The author previously introduced that the time difference between the two worlds is 12 hours. . Moreover, it is soul-piercing, which means that the physical body is still there. I have not introduced before that time stops in another world. For example, let's say the protagonist stays in the Devouring World for 12 hours. . What does the protagonist do when he is in the Marvel world? Even if you are sleeping. . You can't sleep 12 hours every day, right? . Since there is no introduction that the world stands still. . It shows that time is still flowing on both sides. . . Then here comes the problem. Don't the people around the protagonist and the two worlds have any doubts? . . . It is recommended that the author set up a main world, and the other world can be set up as a "clone" with independent thinking and personality, but all memories are shared. Otherwise, please explain: when the protagonist is in this world, time will not flow in the other world. A little complaint A little suggestion If you don't like it, don't spray it
Better to devour the plot a little more
The plot of this book, Devouring, is more innovative than other books. It turns out that the laws of time and space are not mentioned much in Devouring, but this book summarizes the understanding of this aspect. It also makes me look forward to how difficult it is to "make" time and space. I hope that there will be endless possibilities for innovation, and I also hope that readers will not criticize. Novels and novels are inherently unrealistic content, and what they write is illusory content. No matter how exciting it is, you can also understand the word "editing" in this way! However, it should also be based on other books for reference, and there is insufficient filling. This will take time to review. This is a personal evaluation and that's it! I wish the author to work hard, never give up, good health, and be happy and worry-free every day! Hee hee, the Chinese New Year is coming soon, can you give me an update? I don't know if I can see it, so I forgot to comment! [Emot=default,22/]
The author focuses on the key points! ! ! ! !
I saw that the author had a misunderstanding when the protagonist understood the nine pictures of the Chaos Monument of the Universe in Chaos City. Luo Hua guessed that the last five of the nine pictures were about the fusion of time and space. I don't know if the author thought that it would become the main fusion of time and space laws in the universe, but I can tell you responsibly that this is wrong. There are two ways to become the Lord of the Universe: The first is the most common way for most people to master the two laws of time and space at the same time (note that it is mastered at the same time, not fusion!!!). If you think about it carefully, the Lord of the Universe only masters time or space, so they are called the Lord of Time and the Lord of Space. As for the Overlord of the Universe, in fact, if you seriously calculate, the realm is still at the level of the Lord of the Universe. It is only distinguished because of mastering the secret knowledge and having a higher degree of understanding of another higher law. Only the Lord of the Universe can reach a new realm by mastering the two laws of time and space at the same time. As for the fusion of time and space... No one did it at all in the original work. As for the law of fusion you mentioned, it is the way of the beast god (the two superior laws of time or space + the fusion of the inferior laws). The fusion of the superior laws + the inferior laws is also the master of the universe. Think about it, the fusion of the upper and lower laws is the master of the universe. How is it possible that the fusion of the two upper laws of time and space still results in the same state? I hope the author won't get confused later. I don't want to see the protagonist's strength being the master of the universe after working hard to integrate the laws of space and time.
Is there a world other than Marvel and Galactus?
Please join us from other worlds! !
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Official(341)Scraped 23d ago
Tucao recommends exclusive building!
If you have anything you want to complain about or make suggestions, please post it inside the building, and any outside posts will be deleted😄
Who is Luo Feng?
I have read a hundred or two hundred pictures. I suggest you read this without thinking too much. Just read what you write and don't think too much.
There are too many points to complain about. The author does not have the ability to connect the two worlds in a fast-paced transition (there will definitely be people who say you can write it. I am a reader, I am just giving my perspective after reading it). The plot is completely copied from the original work, and the rest of the time is spent on soy sauce. I originally thought I would just endure it, but after reading hundreds of pictures, the plot is too confusing and I can't stand it anymore
About traveling back and forth between two worlds
The protagonist travels back and forth between the two worlds, and no one else is surprised. . This is very fake. . The author previously introduced that the time difference between the two worlds is 12 hours. . Moreover, it is soul-piercing, which means that the physical body is still there. I have not introduced before that time stops in another world. For example, let's say the protagonist stays in the Devouring World for 12 hours. . What does the protagonist do when he is in the Marvel world? Even if you are sleeping. . You can't sleep 12 hours every day, right? . Since there is no introduction that the world stands still. . It shows that time is still flowing on both sides. . . Then here comes the problem. Don't the people around the protagonist and the two worlds have any doubts? . . . It is recommended that the author set up a main world, and the other world can be set up as a "clone" with independent thinking and personality, but all memories are shared. Otherwise, please explain: when the protagonist is in this world, time will not flow in the other world. A little complaint A little suggestion If you don't like it, don't spray it
Better to devour the plot a little more
The plot of this book, Devouring, is more innovative than other books. It turns out that the laws of time and space are not mentioned much in Devouring, but this book summarizes the understanding of this aspect. It also makes me look forward to how difficult it is to "make" time and space. I hope that there will be endless possibilities for innovation, and I also hope that readers will not criticize. Novels and novels are inherently unrealistic content, and what they write is illusory content. No matter how exciting it is, you can also understand the word "editing" in this way! However, it should also be based on other books for reference, and there is insufficient filling. This will take time to review. This is a personal evaluation and that's it! I wish the author to work hard, never give up, good health, and be happy and worry-free every day! Hee hee, the Chinese New Year is coming soon, can you give me an update? I don't know if I can see it, so I forgot to comment! [Emot=default,22/]
The author focuses on the key points! ! ! ! !
I saw that the author had a misunderstanding when the protagonist understood the nine pictures of the Chaos Monument of the Universe in Chaos City. Luo Hua guessed that the last five of the nine pictures were about the fusion of time and space. I don't know if the author thought that it would become the main fusion of time and space laws in the universe, but I can tell you responsibly that this is wrong. There are two ways to become the Lord of the Universe: The first is the most common way for most people to master the two laws of time and space at the same time (note that it is mastered at the same time, not fusion!!!). If you think about it carefully, the Lord of the Universe only masters time or space, so they are called the Lord of Time and the Lord of Space. As for the Overlord of the Universe, in fact, if you seriously calculate, the realm is still at the level of the Lord of the Universe. It is only distinguished because of mastering the secret knowledge and having a higher degree of understanding of another higher law. Only the Lord of the Universe can reach a new realm by mastering the two laws of time and space at the same time. As for the fusion of time and space... No one did it at all in the original work. As for the law of fusion you mentioned, it is the way of the beast god (the two superior laws of time or space + the fusion of the inferior laws). The fusion of the superior laws + the inferior laws is also the master of the universe. Think about it, the fusion of the upper and lower laws is the master of the universe. How is it possible that the fusion of the two upper laws of time and space still results in the same state? I hope the author won't get confused later. I don't want to see the protagonist's strength being the master of the universe after working hard to integrate the laws of space and time.
Is there a world other than Marvel and Galactus?
Please join us from other worlds! !
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