The Life of Elves Starting from the Flying Mantis

Take a look at Bobo's description. What is a bug?

I have probably just read the first few chapters (I was persuaded to quit), and I have picked out the following problems: 1. The intelligence level of the non-protagonist passerby elves is too high, and I personally feel it is completely unnecessary. 2. Regarding the dialogue between the elves, to be honest, the author can go back and read the dialogue in the previous chapters. It is really embarrassing to read. 3. The plot is outrageous: For example, as you said at the beginning, a cow-horse Bibi bird with Bobo can prey on the protagonist's flying mantis tribe. I can't understand why an elf with a race value of 500+ will be beaten by such a group of weak chickens? ? ? As mentioned later, there is even Dudu? ? ? (There is another one I forgot) I think you should at least respect reality, and it would be okay if it were replaced by Dabi Bird and Duduli. 4. It feels like the language is too complicated. (Okay, I'm just talking about the number of words in this article, focusing on the above items) It's not my fault. If the author is really serious about writing this fanfic, he could consider slowing down the update rate first and polishing the previous chapters. Hope to see

You're sick, right? If you don't write well, you have to poison me.

I think the author's writing is pretty good. It doesn't matter if you are subdued. You can arrange a good trainer, preferably a beautiful woman, and develop with the trainer first, and then make an accident to free the protagonist. Please give me more updates. Thank you.

Flying Mantis (appearance) is still very "majestic", but writing it this way does not give a sense of substitution, because ordinary people encounter danger in the Pokémon world, and their ability to protect themselves is very weak, and they can only rely on elves.