All My Exercises Are Self-created

Didn't you create your own technique from me? Is there anything related to the practice?

The author has a big flaw. The protagonist is very smart but the writing is very clumsy. I only read a few chapters and I knew that the protagonist's friend looked like a loyal minister in ancient times. So the question is, would a smart person not think that his friend would find a way to make him serve the court? Or you have acquiesced, and you still want to be an official, then the author should not have paved the way by saying that he wants to understand the world, which is contradictory and very embarrassing. I think my IQ is not high. If the author wants to write a high-IQ article, it is better not to dig a hole for himself. I like this kind of IQ article very much, but the author did not write a smart protagonist, huh! The narcissistic protagonist is very prominent, so I won't read the rest of it. I wish the author's book a success.

The writing is okay later on, but the plot has a lot of problems For example Bei Ming's technique can cause turmoil in the world and make rivers of blood flow. Just deliver it out casually Before writing, think about the impact on the pattern. Don't be happy for the moment without thinking about the consequences Although the author decides the direction of the world But the basic logic still needs to be there Of course A newcomer's first book Not bad

The introduction does not match the content of the book! He wanted to see the world instead of the temple, and he was tricked by his friends when he first arrived in the capital. From the dialogue in the restaurant, it can be seen that the protagonist is a bit naive. If this is the case, I think if one of his friends had bad intentions, the protagonist would not know how he died. Moreover, I was cheated by my good friend, the emperor and the prince, and had no choice but to become an official. Then don't keep stressing about going to the north. After reading Chapter 11, I didn't see the love between children in the world, so I gave up.

It's a good book, but no one has commented on it.

I don't know what will happen next, I hope it doesn't collapse

The author also worked very hard. Very good.

The front part is fine, but the back part is really bad.

Too jumpy. . . . . . . . . .

The first few chapters are good, but the later chapters are boring.