I Have Forty-eight Pieces of Teigu, but I Just Want to Rely on Myself

First of all, the protagonist in Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba traveled across time because the earth was hit by the moon, and then the protagonist in this book also traveled through time because the earth was hit by the moon😕😕 Does the author have a deep obsession with the earth being knocked away by the moon? 🙃

I suggest starting with low abilities and moving up to Charlotte, starting from scratch, Demon Slayer, Seraph of the End are also good, you can write the game life, anyway, your time travel card is a randomly traveled world, Magic Forbidden Directory, Guilty Crown, God Eater, Versatile Mage, Grandson of the Sage. If you want to write Chinese comics, you should be a full-time master, Peking Opera Cat, Spirit Cage, My Girlfriend Who Is Heavenly Tribulation, My Big Senior Brother has a problem with his brain, The Book of One Hundred Demons, The Chronicles of Demon Gods. You can also write about the daily life of the Immortal King. You can't really write about Douluo, it's really a headache to watch.

I have a little wish I wonder if the author will become a belt in Kamen Rider later? It's best if it's original. Don't use Wang Xiaoming's belt. That belt is a bit disgusting (~_~;) especially when it turns pink at the back.

The previous one was better, but the writing seems to have gotten worse this time. This process is repeated from beginning to end: the character says something/does something, then a long section of setting or science popularization, then says something/does something, then a large section of setting or science popularization, and the cycle is endless. This kind of narrative method feels very tiring and boring to read. Most of the people who read comprehensive comics are old two-dimensional people, and many settings don't need to be written in such detail. Say one sentence to write a section of popular science, say one sentence to write a section of popular science. This method will make the dialogue and scenes very fragmented, and make people feel as boring as a running account, and the number of words is suspected to be too high. For the setting part, just open a PS and say a few sentences. Don't put the setting in every chapter and every paragraph, please.

The system is broken, and the Crimson Eyes can defeat people who are infinitely close to the super dangerous species. I couldn't defeat an overhyped person in Wandering Kenshin, and I was also drunk. Not to mention the slow progress, the world's power is not equal. The weakest protagonists stayed in the Crimson Eyes for 8 years and wrote nearly 90 chapters. The first four years were free, but in the next four years they were able to instantly kill the first-level dangerous species. They actually fought Kenshin for a long time at the Wandering Kenshin Moment. This was a situation where they had not learned any decisive battles. Moreover, at the beginning, the protagonist, who had killed someone who was close to the special dangerous species, actually stood up in fear of Kenshin's murderous aura. This kind of situation is usually only possible when the person is severely frightened! Bad review

Currently, the writing in Zhanhong World is very good. It is currently the most comfortable Zhanhong fanfic. It doesn't matter if you have a harem or not. Ace Ed must be my favorite Yu Jie in the anime, and the author, please give me a lot of support.

In a chronicle novel, the first few dozen chapters do not advance the plot. They are all about the psychology of the protagonist, which is confusing.

Come on, does the male protagonist look like Mr. Gojo?

Will Ed accept it? I always like it (funny)

What can I say? It was so boring to watch. Most of it was just a mental journey plus some nonsense plot. I only saw the part where I traveled through time and summoned the heroic spirits for the third time. The plot was so awesome that I actually had a cerebral thrombosis. The first time I traveled through time and the part where I went back to Zhanmei were just ink marks. Fullmetal Alchemist was just average. Anyway, I can read it in Shuhuang, but I got a headache from reading it.