Zhetian: I Use the Door of Eternal Life to Prove the Great Road

Overall, I can only say that it is okay, but the lack of details is considered a drawback. 1. One moment in the Zhetian world, the dagger can only leave white spots on the neck, and the next moment in the Dragon and Snake world, the feet will be scratched by stones. 2. The author must have never read Dragon Snake. Baidu just wrote it. He is holding a pill and sitting on his crotch to play with life and death. It is absolutely impossible to say: "Spare my life, I will accept you as my master." Even Wang Chao can only make a bet and use his strength to convince his family and get people to help him. Yan Yuanyi and others also wrote worse than the original work.

The copy is too long. Originally, Dragon Snake is not that high. I wrote dozens of chapters, but I lost interest after reading it.

Instead of writing about a dragon and a snake, why are you writing such a long, stinky and long story? There are over 40 photos of this one which I can't stand anymore. I came here to cover the sky, not to see dragons and snakes.

The story about Dragon and Snake has gone on to reach the Emperor of the Galaxy. The protagonist is clearly invincible in Dragon and Snake, so why hasn't he returned yet? If you write about a world where you are completely invincible and have no opponents, then why write about the heavens? Only by leaving room for expectation can there be value!

It's acceptable to rely solely on fantasy to practice the exercises. . . I saw another sect going through the tribulation. . . No one came to take a look. . . Bring wisdom!

Others actually sent a low-level character to attack the protagonist's high-level character, and even wanted to capture him alive. They didn't even bring powerful weapons. They also thought that the protagonist's physique was the best in the world, which was too abstract.

I hope the heroines are An Miaoyi, Saint Yaochi, Yang Yi, Queen Mother of the West (Holy Lord), Yao Xi, Zixia, Princess Yueling, Princess Yuedi, Princess Moon, Yi Qingwu, Fan Xian, Qi Meng, Qi Huoshui/Qi Qi, Xia Yilin, Yan Ruyu, the daughter of the Golden Emperor, the Dragon Girl, Princess Silkworm, and the daughter of the Qilin Emperor (Fire Spirit). I find other fanfics that only feature Yan Ruyu as the heroine boring. I've seen the Donghua version, and An Miaoyi, Zixia and Yaoxi are all prettier than Yan Ruyu. It's really boring to go to another world and not appreciate the beautiful scenery.

Yi Tuo, the protagonist is in the higher-level world of Zhetian, but he goes to the lower-level world of martial arts to learn martial arts. Although the protagonist does not have the Nine Dragons to pull the coffin during this period, he spends so much time learning low-level things. If you follow the plot, the first skill is created by Tianzun. Why, the method created by Tianzun in 10,000 or 20,000 years is not as good as the martial arts that was created in thousands of hundreds of years? It's like if you want to calculate 200, you add them one by one. It takes several pages to calculate. When you see that you can use multiplication to calculate, will you still use addition and subtraction?

Just like those mythological and weird novels in the past, if you want to become a disciple, you have to kneel down and kowtow three times to test your character. Only after various tests can you learn the skills. And it's too cheap to spread it like this casually. Moreover, most of the so-called elites are trash, capitalists, careerists, robbers, etc., Each one is worse than the last, and each one is more inhuman than the last. Many novels spread the law casually, but wouldn't it be okay to spread it privately to those who can understand it? I just want to see that the world is full of light. The earth is the kingdom of heaven and God. As for the filth and filth, just wipe them away.

How to show off, how to forcefully show off, hahaha