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Ma Baoguo is the only person who can stand up and drink with martial virtue. He is not tall; his face is black and blue, and there are often scars between the wrinkles; he always looks like he has a bruised nose and a swollen face. When he talks to people, he always talks about the Lightning Whip and Hunyuan Kung Fu, making them half-understand. As soon as Ma Baoguo arrived at the shop, all the drinkers looked at him and smiled, and some shouted, "Ma Baoguo, you have a new scar on your face!" He didn't answer, but said to the cabinet, "Warm two bowls of rat tail juice," and then poured out nine coins. They shouted loudly and deliberately, "You must have lost the competition again!" Ma Baoguo opened his eyes wide and said, "Why do you accuse someone of innocence out of thin air..." "What innocence? The day before yesterday I saw you being hung up and beaten by two teenagers in the gym." Ma Baoguo blushed, with veins on his forehead popping out, and argued, "Being attacked by surprise cannot be considered a defeat... Sneak attack Attack! ... Can a person in the martial arts be considered a loser?" The words came one after another, such as "not practicing martial ethics" and "peace is the most important thing", which made everyone burst into laughter: the atmosphere inside and outside the store was filled with joy. I heard people talking behind their backs that Ma Baoguo had also learned martial arts, but in the end he was just a showman and could not make a living. So he became poorer and poorer, until he was almost begging for food. Fortunately, he was good at pretending, so he pretended to be the "Tai Chi Master" as the leader and accepted apprentices in exchange for a bowl of rice. Unfortunately, he was very good at it. He said he knew the "connection, transformation and release" skills, so he went to challenge Wang Qingmin, a fighting enthusiast. As a result, within a few seconds, he was knocked out with one punch. This happened several times, and no one called him master anymore... After Ma Baoguo drank half a bowl of rat tail juice, his red face gradually recovered, and someone else asked again, "Ma Baoguo, do you really know how to Kung Fu?" Ma Baoguo looked at the person who asked him, showing an air of disdain to argue. They then asked, "How come you can't even beat two children?" Ma Baoguo immediately looked depressed and uneasy, with a layer of gray on his face, and said something: "According to the traditional kung fu points, he has already lost. He admitted it without hitting him on the nose. If I had used this punch, I would have broken his nose with one punch!" At this time, everyone burst into laughter: the atmosphere inside and outside the store was filled with joy. At these times, I could laugh along, and the shopkeeper would never blame me. Moreover, when the shopkeeper met Ma Baoguo, he would always ask him this question, which made people laugh. Ma Baoguo knew that he could not talk about kung fu with them, so he had no choice but to talk to his children. One time he said to me, "Do you know Hunyuan Kung Fu?" I shook my head slightly. He said, "Hey... Use your two hands to break one of my fingers." After hearing this, I stepped forward and broke his finger with one hand. Ma Baoguo howled for a long time and cursed angrily, "You kid doesn't have martial ethics, so reflect on it! Don't be so clever, you little clever one!" I became more and more impatient, and walked away with my mouth open. Seeing that I had no regrets, Ma Baoguo sighed again, showing great regret. "Is it okay to attack my 69-year-old old comrade? This is not good..."😏😏😏

Many people said that the main character in this book is always invisible and stays in his old home, which is very uncomfortable. But I think this is the best way to write it. I think the protagonist is positioned as someone who prefers comfort, doesn't like to cause trouble but still values ​​emotions. From this point of view, I think most of the protagonist's actions are in line with this positioning. It also makes this book seem like it's not brainless. At least now I think the character development of the protagonist is pretty good. The protagonist has his own principles for doing things - nothing to hide, nothing to show, nothing to do. Although this online novel still has the characteristics of ordinary online novels, for example, there are many water words, and some words are a bit vulgar. But it has indeed moved away from the kind of cool writing that most of the cool writing only stimulates adrenal hormones and makes our brain nerves temporarily lively with pleasure. Overall, it's good. The writing style needs to be improved. The author should not think about catering to the public and do his or her own original thoughts. What kind of book do you want to write? What kind of protagonist should you create? I am just an ordinary person who has been reading books for seven or eight years. I feel really comfortable when I read a book like this. Now I'm tired of seeing those mindless and pretentious articles. Although many of the plots in this book are quite cliche, the attitude is indeed quite novel, so it is quite fresh. I recommend you take a look. I hope everyone can work together. If you feel that what I said is wrong, comments are welcome.

If you like it, I will post more photos^O^/

One year is the calligrapher, two years is the calligraphy spirit, three years is the calligraphy king, four years is the calligraphy emperor, six years is the calligraphy master, seven years is the calligraphy master, eight years is the calligraphy saint, nine years is the calli emperor, 15 years is the calligraphy demon, 20 years is the calligraphy fairy, and 30 years is the calligraphy master. Everyone can be treated with the title of you, senior, etc. I am the book emperor, I dare to ask who else! There are few people in the world who can match me.

So far, it's pretty good, but I have a question🤔Now that the protagonist's martial arts has gone further, it's a ceiling that hasn't been seen in the world for hundreds of years (as of now). After twenty years of reading, the current progress is up to seventy or eighty chapters. Once you get there, you will be invincibleㄟ(▔,▔)ㄏ If there is no novel style to attract readers, most of them will not be able to write. Countless authors have already fallen here

The author writes well. Please support me... It's not clear yet whether the protagonist in the author's novel takes a ruthless or sentimental route, but I feel that it's okay to be loyal to family and friends and ruthless to enemies. Although your parents sent you to the Shaolin Temple at that time for your safety, now that your sister has gotten married and recognized each other after returning home, you still have feelings for her after all. If you are ruthless, don't go home, right? It's just my little suggestion. The author doesn't want to suggest it, thank you.

Let's see if there is anyone who has been reading for longer than me.

I have read almost all the novels over the decades. Because of the crackdown on urban life, the supernatural has become useless. Many books have no passion. The passion I am talking about is not porn, but the kind of passion that can bring yourself into it. There are only a few old books to read. What kind of books are the authors writing now? For example, Seizing the Holy Eucharist, Drawing Blood from Girls, and Handsome and Invincible. If you can't write three sentences without being handsome, you won't be able to write them. Looking at the new book rankings, it's really hard to explain. Movies and TV shows are all about young people, and they are beginning to invade novels.

Don't Ba Ba love you? Do you want to do this to me?

When I first read the title, I thought it was a new topic, which I thought was quite interesting. Now that I have read it, I feel that the author is still a bit newer. As a bookworm of ten years, I would like to make some suggestions. 1. Everyone's tastes have been cultivated and they don't like water injection. Repeating one sentence over and over again will dissuade some readers. If you can finish one chapter, there should be no second chapter. You also mentioned three, four, and five, which is a taboo. Simplify some expanded content. You can get thirty or forty book coins for one chapter, and the reputation is good. 2. Since you have to make good settings, it is really confusing to suddenly come out and encounter a new copy. You should make the world view bigger at the beginning. 3. Don't appear in a silly manner, which is off-putting. Too many low-IQ language highlights will lower the level of the entire book. That's it!