Is Boos in Kuaishuan in Love Today?
by Taoyao Notes
About This Novel
As a man who has experienced three thousand worlds, Xia Fanxing was wiped out because he did not have a decent male vote, so he started over again. A certain summer, "Is the food not delicious? Is it because I don't have enough male favorites? Or am I unhappy being single? If I don't go, I'll kill myself!" Three consecutive tortures from the soul. She was the all-round richest man in the 250th century for three consecutive times. She was soft and easy to bully in front of others, but decisive in killing behind others. Unfortunately, she was a beauty who died single for too long, so she was deceived in order to prove herself. What's more, someone's beauty is worth everything, and he can be in the hall or the kitchen! Afterwards, she said, "You know, the surging Yangtze River water is just like the tears I shed!" After boarding the pirate ship, a certain summer was about to cry but had no tears! A certain Xie smiled charmingly: "My wife, mine is Yellow River water, it will only make you sweat every day!" A certain Xia: "No, I just want to go back and inherit the three thousand male favorites in my harem!" "Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Host, Yin family is sorry for you, let you be fucked by the golden pig's hooves!" The system bit its lip pitifully [1V1, Shuangwen A burst, this is the love-hate entanglement of a sultry man with a controlled appearance and a foodie girl! ! 2020, Cuties, are you ready? It's time to get in the car oh oh oh~! Newbie online, please give me some advice! ]
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summer night stars
What a beautiful name! You must be a real novice! Hehe, you wrote it very seriously! I hope you can keep up the good work and update, waiting for you🔥! Don't forget, I am your first milk! ! ! ! [Emot=default,13/]#Reading novels at home is to contribute to the country# Come on China!
Newbie reporting, please give me your advice for the rest of my life.
Trytry is an experienced reader who loves to read all kinds of novels (except horror), and he is also a novice author. If there is any part that is not well written, please readers can give comments and suggestions so that I can revise it immediately and gain experience! Thanks! ! New articles are online, so keep them up and update them three to four times a day! Of course, if there are special circumstances, we may update it or try hard to get it right! !
plot issues
In fact, your writing is quite good, but the plot is too tight. You can polish it a little more, and make the writing more ups and downs. You can't see where there is any good plot or anything like that. For example, you can write it in a scene where the heroine fights wits and courage in the harem, and it will have that inexplicable appeal and funny scene! This may attract readers more and make you feel more smooth and fluent when writing! (Personal opinion, don't be angry if you don't like it!! Hehe!) In short, keep up the good work and have a bright future!
Haha, I'm back again. Seriously, classmate, if you enter the pit, you will have sugar to drink, it will be sweet and no residue! !
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 24d ago
summer night stars
What a beautiful name! You must be a real novice! Hehe, you wrote it very seriously! I hope you can keep up the good work and update, waiting for you🔥! Don't forget, I am your first milk! ! ! ! [Emot=default,13/]#Reading novels at home is to contribute to the country# Come on China!
Newbie reporting, please give me your advice for the rest of my life.
Trytry is an experienced reader who loves to read all kinds of novels (except horror), and he is also a novice author. If there is any part that is not well written, please readers can give comments and suggestions so that I can revise it immediately and gain experience! Thanks! ! New articles are online, so keep them up and update them three to four times a day! Of course, if there are special circumstances, we may update it or try hard to get it right! !
plot issues
In fact, your writing is quite good, but the plot is too tight. You can polish it a little more, and make the writing more ups and downs. You can't see where there is any good plot or anything like that. For example, you can write it in a scene where the heroine fights wits and courage in the harem, and it will have that inexplicable appeal and funny scene! This may attract readers more and make you feel more smooth and fluent when writing! (Personal opinion, don't be angry if you don't like it!! Hehe!) In short, keep up the good work and have a bright future!
Haha, I'm back again. Seriously, classmate, if you enter the pit, you will have sugar to drink, it will be sweet and no residue! !
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