Journey to a Different World after Sexual Transformation
by Cai Yue Meow
About This Novel
Time traveled! Do you think this is the beginning of a passionate royal journey? Sorry, it's not possible. Why does my golden finger reduce the opponent's IQ? The most important point is, why did I become a woman? But fortunately, there were two big white girls next to him, etc. They couldn't be... They were indeed big brothers who traveled through time together. My journey to another world!
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Official(4)Scraped 6d ago
Didn't see it. . .
I hope I can write it well, and don't be sorry for the sex change. It's been a long time since I've seen a sex change theme.
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personal opinion
I am a new author like you, but as a bookworm of five years, I felt that the beginning of this book was very confusing. Three boys were directly introduced, and I couldn't figure out which one was the protagonist. Secondly, the whole story was revealed at the beginning, and the characters said it before the time traveled and the body was revealed, and the details of the plot were completely in the text. It is said in the article that it is too detailed and does not dig holes to give people a sense of mystery. This is also my fault. It is necessary to think in more detail, but don't write in too much detail. It makes people seem to be able to guess what is going on but it seems very obscure. I think the idea of the article here is quite good. This kind of world background is relatively rare.
It looks good, but it makes me dizzy the more I look at it.
The language is repetitive and verbose, and the main line is unclear.
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 6d ago
Didn't see it. . .
I hope I can write it well, and don't be sorry for the sex change. It's been a long time since I've seen a sex change theme.
Get it
<span style="color: green">You haven't been beaten in three days</span>
personal opinion
I am a new author like you, but as a bookworm of five years, I felt that the beginning of this book was very confusing. Three boys were directly introduced, and I couldn't figure out which one was the protagonist. Secondly, the whole story was revealed at the beginning, and the characters said it before the time traveled and the body was revealed, and the details of the plot were completely in the text. It is said in the article that it is too detailed and does not dig holes to give people a sense of mystery. This is also my fault. It is necessary to think in more detail, but don't write in too much detail. It makes people seem to be able to guess what is going on but it seems very obscure. I think the idea of the article here is quite good. This kind of world background is relatively rare.
It looks good, but it makes me dizzy the more I look at it.
The language is repetitive and verbose, and the main line is unclear.
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