Doomsday Call of All Realms
About This Novel
The world calls!
What Readers Think
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Official(36)Scraped 10d ago
Um
Don't ask me why I posted a review. I can only say that this novel is too poisonous. I have been writing novels for six years, and this is the first time I have been poisoned like this. Damn it, I only give you one point because it is not easy for you to write novels.
Poison spot
The main character's voice doesn't change, which is too poisonous. Is there a Shennong? Did he change back later?
Too skinny
The author is so naughty that young readers can't stand it, so they can only say goodbye with regret!
Not enough writing, no apocalyptic feeling
Like other books such as Apocalypse... It gave me a feeling of the apocalypse. The protagonist lived in the apocalypse for ten years with only black iron or a summoner. After returning to the past, his behavior was completely unlike someone who had lived in the apocalypse for ten years. He just felt like an excellent ordinary person.
Didn't the male protagonist see blood in his previous life? He has lived there for more than ten years, so he must have seen scenes of hell, right? How many dogs can there be without blood and flesh?
Dear readers, I have something to ask for.
Because this book involves some sensitive words, the editor will not recommend it, so it is impossible to get a score. But I still want to know what you think of what I wrote. This is very important for a newcomer. Improving writing skills can solve some problems. Only readers will know the author's faults. Please give me some advice when you read this book review.
Author author!
I would like to ask if there is any QQ fan group?
The writing and plot of your novel are quite conventional. Can you come up with some ideas of your own? Lay a foreshadowing and dig it out right away
The description technique is not even comparable to that of a junior high school student. Do the adjectives and punctuation marks you use match the previous text? When you write a novel, you still need to read it again and revise it. How did you get it recommended?
Strength to persuade to retreat
I was poisoned, goodbye. I didn't expect that the protagonist would be either vulnerable or vulnerable after eating the hormone fruit. I give you a point because it is not easy for you to practice. Even my Taoist heart, which I have cultivated for 200 million years, has been broken by you.
Big plot twist
To be honest, the previous content of yours is really not very good, but the style of the later content has changed, as if it were a different author. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง
Rating
Community(0)
Official(36)Scraped 10d ago
Um
Don't ask me why I posted a review. I can only say that this novel is too poisonous. I have been writing novels for six years, and this is the first time I have been poisoned like this. Damn it, I only give you one point because it is not easy for you to write novels.
Poison spot
The main character's voice doesn't change, which is too poisonous. Is there a Shennong? Did he change back later?
Too skinny
The author is so naughty that young readers can't stand it, so they can only say goodbye with regret!
Not enough writing, no apocalyptic feeling
Like other books such as Apocalypse... It gave me a feeling of the apocalypse. The protagonist lived in the apocalypse for ten years with only black iron or a summoner. After returning to the past, his behavior was completely unlike someone who had lived in the apocalypse for ten years. He just felt like an excellent ordinary person.
Didn't the male protagonist see blood in his previous life? He has lived there for more than ten years, so he must have seen scenes of hell, right? How many dogs can there be without blood and flesh?
Dear readers, I have something to ask for.
Because this book involves some sensitive words, the editor will not recommend it, so it is impossible to get a score. But I still want to know what you think of what I wrote. This is very important for a newcomer. Improving writing skills can solve some problems. Only readers will know the author's faults. Please give me some advice when you read this book review.
Author author!
I would like to ask if there is any QQ fan group?
The writing and plot of your novel are quite conventional. Can you come up with some ideas of your own? Lay a foreshadowing and dig it out right away
The description technique is not even comparable to that of a junior high school student. Do the adjectives and punctuation marks you use match the previous text? When you write a novel, you still need to read it again and revise it. How did you get it recommended?
Strength to persuade to retreat
I was poisoned, goodbye. I didn't expect that the protagonist would be either vulnerable or vulnerable after eating the hormone fruit. I give you a point because it is not easy for you to practice. Even my Taoist heart, which I have cultivated for 200 million years, has been broken by you.
Big plot twist
To be honest, the previous content of yours is really not very good, but the style of the later content has changed, as if it were a different author. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง
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