
One Day I Got a Sister
by Dim And Dim
About This Novel
I finally reunited with my parents, but why did I get an extra sister?! No! She is younger than me, so I have to give her everything, what if she competes with me for food... Are you right...
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Official(7)Scraped 6d ago
I feel so empty, so I write one
I don't have any ideas to improve the quality. I'm just talking about this novel. At first it felt like a campus theme, but later it felt like a daily theme Then it felt like it was a comedy novel. After a while, it started to get serious again and started to be funny again. I felt that it felt like something else soon, haha. (Feel free to post a few pictures)
set up
The male protagonist feels worthless. He has been a killer for more than ten years and can't even speak a foreign language. His attitude towards women is like a dog licker. He is said to be the most powerful but it is not shown in any way. There are also various small problems in the setting of other characters. The one in school who strikes lightly is still a martial arts student, isn't it true? The role of the younger sister is okay, no big problems
Sister Sai Gao
Why do I feel like the main character is a bit weak? The background is obviously very powerful
It's a first-person book. Let's change it.
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Make the protagonist look like a **
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Official(7)Scraped 6d ago
I feel so empty, so I write one
I don't have any ideas to improve the quality. I'm just talking about this novel. At first it felt like a campus theme, but later it felt like a daily theme Then it felt like it was a comedy novel. After a while, it started to get serious again and started to be funny again. I felt that it felt like something else soon, haha. (Feel free to post a few pictures)
set up
The male protagonist feels worthless. He has been a killer for more than ten years and can't even speak a foreign language. His attitude towards women is like a dog licker. He is said to be the most powerful but it is not shown in any way. There are also various small problems in the setting of other characters. The one in school who strikes lightly is still a martial arts student, isn't it true? The role of the younger sister is okay, no big problems
Sister Sai Gao
Why do I feel like the main character is a bit weak? The background is obviously very powerful
It's a first-person book. Let's change it.
. . . . .
Make the protagonist look like a **



















