I Have a Virtual Universe

First: You are too naive, especially the attribute panel. The frequency is too high. You can only write about the data that has changed, and then write more generally after a few chapters. Second: What do you think about the character Miao Yunxi in the early stage? You can completely solve it within 30 chapters, but you have to keep delaying and paving the way, and then the character becomes disgusting. Third: Regarding the Detective Bureau, I just want to talk to the author. You think it is too simple. I can only say that it is based on the police station during the reform period. The core team was all airborne by the state and was controlled by the army in the early stage. It is impossible for a director and a so-called secretary to be a bureau. Is that possible? Fourth: There wasn't even a little girl before you put it on the shelves. I initially thought that Miao Yunxi, the character's early boss, had a problem with the plot arrangement before it was put on the shelves. Fifth: A golden finger question. A planet, just a primitive star, has super creatures? There are no other resources, let alone other high-tech planets. A high-tech planet is better than buying barbecue. There are many questions, but I still say to the author, come on

What I don't like the most is that when the protagonist becomes stronger, a group of powerful people appear on the earth.

I suggest the author to read more about the conservation of energy. Is there no need to use energy from virtual to reality? The protagonist can appear just by messing with it. The opponent's energy is also infinite and he has already controlled the earth. Why should he run? If he runs, he can control 3/1. The subject matter can be said to be very good. You wrote the country's structure too small. Now the protagonist is almost invincible. How to play the game later? Do you just write it to death?

In the novel, the IQ of the state machine is not good, and the protagonist's IQ is not good either. Only the villain's IQ is online, which is heartbreaking to watch.

The main character is too stupid, the villain plug-in is stronger than the main character

Fortunately, I have read more than 100 chapters. When the villain encounters the target in the coffee shop, why not check where the target is? How many people are in contact with the target? The target captured the protagonist and took him behind the scenes. What did the protagonist do? ? ? After resisting forced confession and killing, the protagonist and the mastermind behind the scenes are on the same team, right? ? ?

I can't stand the dog-licking stories. I have no strength and no relationship between men and women, so I started to be a dog-licking. It's disgusting and I can't stand it anymore. 886

After being persuaded to quit, I finally found a decent book and it's gone again😊 Alas😔

It's funny, isn't there high technology in the virtual world? If any new energy technology is sold directly to a company, there will definitely be billions and millions of resources. If it is not invincible, what is there to be afraid of?

All in all, I felt very uncomfortable watching it.