My Eldest Wife

I would like to make a few suggestions: 1. I hope that the plot of the Sanctuary will not be simply copied from the Earth chapter, but will purely challenge the family and encircle and suppress Qin Yu. Is it interesting? Don't portray all the people from the nine great families as arrogant, snobbish, impulsive and reckless men. None of the characters created are impressive. The character creation is too one-dimensional. You can have some intrigues among the nine aristocratic families, taking advantage of each other, fighting for annexation and domination, and also leave some room for the growth of the protagonist and the prince. 2. The plot should be appropriately expanded. There are many places that can be used, such as the situation in the depths of Qingyan Forest and the monster clan, enriching the plot and role of Xiaoyu, the plot of the underworld organization, the internal exploration of the Dragon Burial Cave and the Immortal Burial Cave, the depths of the Red Fire Continent and the Five Sacred Mountains. The exploration of that terrible place (the adventure of Xiao Hai and Qin Yu), the exploration of the bottom of the earth, the invasion of extraterritorial organizations, the war of races (demons, humans, demons), Xiao Yuan, who is the inheritor of the Immortal Slaughter Sect, the prince pretending to be sick is actually the breakthrough of the strongest person who has awakened the royal bloodline, and so on. A grand main line is needed to connect these foreshadowings in series. 3. The protagonist Qin Yu is too weak. Can he be toughened up? Refer to the Perfect Desolate Emperor and the Heaven-Zheying Ye Emperor. 4. Issues with exercises and instruments. The protagonist still doesn't have a single skill or magic weapon that he can use. He can defeat all magic with one punch. The iron rod should be a tribulation weapon or an imperial weapon. Why is it not ready for use and not activated yet. 5. The combat power system is a bit unreasonable. There is no distinction between early, middle and late stage in the True Saint stage. Dean Lei is a veteran and peak True Saint, and he is at least in the late True Saint stage according to his age. It is quite difficult to deal with Ji Liuhe who has just entered the early stage of True Saint. Isn't it funny?

It was too watery, and fighting was no longer attractive, and Qin Yu was stretched to the extreme. I hope the ancient saint and Yan Ruoxue will fight for Qin Yu. It will probably be interesting. In the final finale, Yan Ruoxue died fighting for Qin Yu. Qin Yu survived by hiding aside and became the emperor, and later married the ancient saint. This is also based on how many women Qin Yu's father has? At least Ji Yuhong, Qin Yu's mother, Grandma Qin...

The author is now writing using chatGPT. No wonder it's becoming more and more popular. You can use chatGPT4 to write it.

Can you please stop writing so much nonsense? After following it for so long, it's becoming more and more boring. It's not as good as those novel advertisements in WeChat. Every time we fight, we write about thousands of ways, about endless power, and about countless radiances. Don't you get tired of writing just these few words back and forth? Is there no other word to describe it? There are also some third-person narrations, as shown below, such as "What? Is he going to do it!" "He actually did it!" "Is this strength!" If you are just trying to make up the word count, you don't need to. You can write a move into a chapter, and just fight and grind. What's the point of writing so much nonsense? Originally, the previous part was pretty good before I entered the Holy Land. I stayed up all night watching it. What kind of bullshit is written in the second part? The urban novel is written as a rubbish immortality novel, rubbish among rubbish! Abandoned the book

It is estimated that there will be a total of 10,000 chapters, two chapters a day, which will take 5,000 days, or 13.7 Years. By then it will be 2035. The author should treat the readers with the eyes of a cultivator. After all, for cultivators, 10 years is extremely short.

There is nothing innovative in this book. The male protagonist always looks like a loser. The rating is actually 9.7. You've gone too far.

I would like to advise Internet readers who have not fallen into the trap yet not to be fooled by this unscrupulous author. He ignored logic, was inconsistent, deliberately stretched the novel, and was extremely shameless. It's a bad novel. If you don't have a few hundred dollars, you can't finish it. Sky-high price! First use hundreds of free chapters that are quite exciting to attract readers. When you are addicted, start reading for a fee! Just shamelessly tricking everyone and making money! !

Let's all report it together. We'll use everyone's money to boil a frog in warm water. Just reading two chapters a day doesn't count. It's a waste!

Let's all report it together. With everyone's money, I'll boil a frog in warm water for you. I'll read two chapters a day. There's still some water in the question!

I found a book on QQ Reading, Xiao Qiyi's My Excellent Young Lady Wife, which is very similar to this book