The Judicial God Who Started as a Super God

If it's a harem novel, it doesn't matter if you use deception or lies. The protagonists of harem novels six or seven years ago were all the same. Either they were arrogant and pretended to be aloof, or they relied on lies and deception to open a harem; it's already 2021, but this novel has already confirmed a single female protagonist, and she even uses lies and deception to deceive someone who is bigger than herself. The relationship between a highly intelligent heroine who has lived for 30,000 years, and more importantly, the heroine has been deceived twice and the author wants to cheat a third time. It is too childish for the protagonist to hug his legs and act like an idiot. If the style of the novel is an invincible flow of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger without a heroine, then it doesn't matter if she lies throughout the whole process. But if you write about daily emotional screen recordings, if you are full of lies, either the character or the plot will collapse.

First of all, I personally don't think there's much of a problem with the protagonist's character. It's not weird to chase and lick someone you like, but it's the pretentious and aloof kind that's the most disgusting. The character is acceptable. But... Here's the problem, your system is just rubbish, it has no ability to summon and exchange. And you told a big lie. How to garden? And you yourself know what He Xi hates! A tramp, a poor man, and now a liar... This won't work unless you can really build a civilization behind you, even if it's what you call a family. Otherwise, I can tell you 100% that your goddess blew it. Also, I found that super gods like to pull the tiger skin of Pangu civilization. But to be honest, I think Shurima fits this worldview very well. The Ascended Warrior is much more reliable than any Fairy Sword and Fairy Man. Think of your Aatrox or other Ascended Warrior. It's much better than the Pangu ones that haven't been set yet. As for the sword demon Atuo? Haha... Can it compare with the real sword demon? Not only must you be able to write a story, but you must also be able to design and foreshadow it... Well... That's about it. It's okay to pull off the tiger's skin. What's important is how to get out the super-ancient civilization behind you. After all, they have no template to copy.

The protagonist is like a loser, insulting Yang Jian, because King of Glory likes to play with Yang Jian, and your Yang Jian here feels disgusting to me

What can I say? This book is poisonous because the protagonist is a dog licker. How can I put it this way? I'm not disgusted because I didn't do anything that went beyond the moral bottom line, and writing it this way is better than writing it down as soon as the protagonist's aura shines.

To put it mildly, Erlang Shen asked you to write this, and I don't want to comment too much.

The main character is a bitch and is disgusting as hell.

Yang Jian got a puppy from the rune system. Yang Jian named the puppy Roaring Sky Dog, but this puppy is still not that powerful, after all, it is still in its infancy.

Let's talk about the characters. From the time Erlang Shen was born to becoming the God of Justice, he never bowed his head to anyone. He relied on his own ability and wisdom to get through. The author wrote that Erlang God should at least be a little bit like Erlang Shen. But what I can see is that if I don't explain it, there is no protagonist, so I will be speechless😓

It doesn't matter whether you have a single female protagonist or not. You can just downplay it, and readers won't hold on to it. In the end, you personally went to help pimp her. No wonder others say you are giving away girls. This is a big poisonous point in fan fiction, right? Really strong head

Erlang Shen is a character who has done everything in his life, but you actually wrote the protagonist as a moron? Licking a dog? Damn, can the protagonist get to know Erlang Shen well before writing about him? Who do you think he is, the God of Justice?