Red Broken Dragon Clan
by No Bones
About This Novel
The new book has been released, I hope everyone can support it, the new book "Hunter in the World of Dragons" Yun Mo is an ordinary boy. After experiencing a series of events that subvert common sense, he discovers that he is no longer human. After being told that he was not a human but a hybrid, a school called Cassel Academy asked him to enroll in a dragon-slaying career. After some temptation, he agreed to enroll. Thus began his passionate dragon-slaying journey. PS: This book has a single female protagonist, Hui Liyi. Book club group 580201882 welcomes everyone
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Official(24)Scraped 11d ago
Three points. I have seen more than 80 chapters of comments and suggestions on how to get into this trap.
1. Main plot direction: Establish a good relationship flow with multiple protagonists and supporting characters in the original text in advance. The current main plot is good and has no poisonous points. Branch heroine: Ling Shuang Ling Yue's wandering guests in the early stage and many external factors make it easy for readers to dissuade the protagonist and Ling Shuang from getting together (although the protagonist has no thoughts about it). The single heroine Hui Liyi mentioned in the introduction actually only appears in the Bai Lai chapter. 2. The writing style is bad. After looking at it, it is indeed a new author. The language, action, and expression description belong to the middle and lower reaches. For example, a paragraph of text description: "Yun Mo..., Yun Mo..., Yun Mo..., Yun Mo..." There are too many nouns and verbs repeated in this paragraph. And there are some typos in some text descriptions. The psychological description can be written in separate paragraphs. There is no need to add it in the middle or at the end of the text. It looks awkward. Add appropriate modifications when describing the language. "..." Yunmo xxx said, "..." Xxxx continued: "..." Xxx heard this: "..." 3. What to look forward to in the future: The writing style needs to be improved, the plot needs to bring together more protagonists and Eri, and the plot direction should be moderate. 4. Come on, friends who want to get into the trap can do so. This book can help you stay healthy.
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on!
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on!
The biggest failure is writing Ling Shuang
Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire
If nothing else, I was attracted to this heroine.
This book is still okay, especially the female protagonist. I hope it will always be a single female protagonist in the future.
It is recommended not to read it before
The writing about the Ling Shuang siblings is a bit too poisonous Don't watch if you are weak against poison. (Personal opinion)
Dragon Clan's Crimson Broken!
Why do people who write dragon fan fiction end up with perverted murderers! Why are the protagonists all students of Shilan Middle School?
When I watched Dragon Clan, I really wished that Eri could be saved, so it's great to be saved in a fanfic!
Don't look
I've already entered the palace to see the emperor, rub it.
Very pretty
Author, is Chu Zihang's father Chu Tianjiao really dead? Did you also arrange it? As one of the few relatives who has taken care of the protagonist since childhood, the protagonist's uncle died like this. I didn't see any description in the back. Is he really dead? This is not a complete plot.
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Community(0)
Official(24)Scraped 11d ago
Three points. I have seen more than 80 chapters of comments and suggestions on how to get into this trap.
1. Main plot direction: Establish a good relationship flow with multiple protagonists and supporting characters in the original text in advance. The current main plot is good and has no poisonous points. Branch heroine: Ling Shuang Ling Yue's wandering guests in the early stage and many external factors make it easy for readers to dissuade the protagonist and Ling Shuang from getting together (although the protagonist has no thoughts about it). The single heroine Hui Liyi mentioned in the introduction actually only appears in the Bai Lai chapter. 2. The writing style is bad. After looking at it, it is indeed a new author. The language, action, and expression description belong to the middle and lower reaches. For example, a paragraph of text description: "Yun Mo..., Yun Mo..., Yun Mo..., Yun Mo..." There are too many nouns and verbs repeated in this paragraph. And there are some typos in some text descriptions. The psychological description can be written in separate paragraphs. There is no need to add it in the middle or at the end of the text. It looks awkward. Add appropriate modifications when describing the language. "..." Yunmo xxx said, "..." Xxxx continued: "..." Xxx heard this: "..." 3. What to look forward to in the future: The writing style needs to be improved, the plot needs to bring together more protagonists and Eri, and the plot direction should be moderate. 4. Come on, friends who want to get into the trap can do so. This book can help you stay healthy.
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on!
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on!
The biggest failure is writing Ling Shuang
Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire
If nothing else, I was attracted to this heroine.
This book is still okay, especially the female protagonist. I hope it will always be a single female protagonist in the future.
It is recommended not to read it before
The writing about the Ling Shuang siblings is a bit too poisonous Don't watch if you are weak against poison. (Personal opinion)
Dragon Clan's Crimson Broken!
Why do people who write dragon fan fiction end up with perverted murderers! Why are the protagonists all students of Shilan Middle School?
When I watched Dragon Clan, I really wished that Eri could be saved, so it's great to be saved in a fanfic!
Don't look
I've already entered the palace to see the emperor, rub it.
Very pretty
Author, is Chu Zihang's father Chu Tianjiao really dead? Did you also arrange it? As one of the few relatives who has taken care of the protagonist since childhood, the protagonist's uncle died like this. I didn't see any description in the back. Is he really dead? This is not a complete plot.
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