I Just Became Hua Jin, Do You Think This is the Peerless Douluo?

How did you come up with the name of the male protagonist? I basically only read Huayu and Douluo. After reading two chapters, the name of the male protagonist in my mind always automatically replaced Yang Mi. I have an indescribable feeling. I really can't help but sigh out.

Soul beasts raise human cubs. I remember that soul beasts are born to attack humans. The century-old soul beast you killed for the first time has a soul bone. Just consider it your luck and launch a heroic rescue of Orange... Not to mention that the original novel does not have this plot. Orange is not a big-chested and brainless fool. He will not carry a soul guide to protect himself when he goes out? And Orange is also a soul master, so he doesn't need your protection. Tangerine's character is not that of a weak and timid woman. The other party is a ruthless character who will never sit back and wait for death, knowing that he will die.

The plot is much better than other fan fictions. The only drawback is that the fighting part is too watery. It is outrageous for a level 30 soul master to defeat the soul emperor with three punches and two kicks without using any soul skills. There is no description of any soul skills in each fighting part. The opponent was completely beaten while standing. The author would greatly improve the fighting part and it would be even better.

The most poisonous thing is the book with this kind of beginning. First of all, the protagonist is a time traveler who has seen Douluo Continent. Then he is a person in the 21st century. He knows Kung Fu at every turn, such as mercenary kings and so on. In this era, no matter how awesome you are, if you meet a few people with machetes with bare hands and don't run away, you are considered awesome.

Needless to say, the Emperor's Beast is indeed a must-have as long as there is a female protagonist, and this one must be my Emperor's Beast! Ah

Who is the heroine? Is it a single heroine?

Raised by a spirit beast, I wonder if the author wrote this paragraph after kicking a donkey. As soon as I came out of the canyon, I encountered Orange and was besieged by spirit beasts. Is it because I don't understand the meaning of you writing this paragraph? Are you just giving away your daughter? This kind of plot is too sweet. How can an auxiliary soul master go hunting soul beasts alone to arrange this plot? You are like this.

There are "Tao" before and after the dialogue, and it is very dense. It is uncomfortable to listen to the book. Some authors really don't know how to swim (they almost have a way to die).

I just read a little bit. Let's not talk about asking deaf people to imitate mouth movements and speak. How do you make deaf-mute people learn to speak by reading books?

How many heroines are there in the author and who are they?