Flowers Bloom and Fall into Nothingness

Ling Luo looked at her clothes and looked at herself in the mirror. He spoke softly: "It's impossible to code words." Then he turned around and walked away, leaving a shadow behind for the author.

It's a novel theme. Although it's only Chapter 5, some of the characters' personalities have already been developed. Leng Qiuluo is bitchy and domineering (I can't love her well). Hua Xizhi, although I think she's a little confused lying on the glass shards, let's call her crazy about love. There's also Hua Xiyao's tsundere (isn't tsundere good?), Leng Shenyi's girl control. But the others are not well-shaped. Mo Xi and Lu Yaobai have a bit of a facial expression. It is better to say that they are the gentle male supporting characters in many works, and there are also knowledgeable and sensible female supporting characters (there are also many tsundere female supporting characters). You can try to make their personalities more distinct and life-like. You can add some contradictions appropriately, and then express their other side. Of course, it is not to shout at the top of your lungs, but the character will collapse. In short, you still have to grasp the degree. (I'm just one author, I still have to look at two authors) Recommended votes are given, keep it up, and look forward to your future works

Hehehe, it's been a month since I clocked in, okay

It is indeed written by two people, and their styles are very different. I am a little curious whether the two authors will fight when they write in big words.