Reborn Group Favorite: Koi Fubao is so Sweet

I made a simplified version of the Su family's family tree, so let's take a look at it.

There is no big problem if you read the article without thinking. The author is probably a novice. There are a lot of typos and there are some problems with the layout. But overall it's okay, not too cliche, but the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist develop too quickly and are too unreasonable. It's pretty good for a novice to write like this, but I've read a lot of writing by veteran authors, so it's a bit more strict. Everyone has their own preferences for carrots and cabbages. If I offend you, please forgive me.

Let me explain here that in terms of music, chess, calligraphy and painting, the heroine memorized poems by famous people, and the music was also composed by famous people. However, these authors did not exist in their dynasty, so the heroine only briefly introduced them, or directly said that they were made by experts. The heroine did not take these poems and songs as her own. The heroine said that she was not the one who did it. The heroine explained each time. Then there is Chapter 21, where the heroine and Princess Ning Jing were tied in a poetry competition. The heroine memorized the poem, but the princess composed the poem by herself. Reciting the poem was obviously not as good as writing the poem by herself. The heroine won the first place with this poem, so she tied with the princess. Moreover, the princess is a talented woman, so she can write good poems, but this does not mean that she can be compared with the poems that the heroine memorized. In ancient times, poetry competitions generally involved comparing poems written by oneself, and competing against other people's poetry, so it is obviously better to write poems than to memorize poems. I know all this from watching TV series or searching on Baidu, so I wrote about the tie between the heroine and Princess Ningjing in Chapter 21.

It can be said that the Su family is looking forward to the stars and the moon to have a girl like Su Tang. After all, the entire Su family has only one girl. Su Tang is really a group favorite.

That's ridiculous. It's written like a running account and has no logic at all.

I like this book, I will never tire of it, I am willing to read it carefully

I just want to know whether Mo Beiyu is good or bad? !

If you like group pets, you can read this book. It's super nice and sweet.

Why did you suddenly charge me a fee? I feel sorry for my poor family.

Apart from the fact that the heroine has a large family and is the favorite of the group, the setting is very good, but the writing is not very mature, there is no plot to speak of, and it is a bit long-winded.