Then My Immortality Has Been Cultivated in Vain, Isn't It?
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"I have become a monk, and I have to wear a body armor and carry a combat rifle when I go out in the field. Then my cultivation as an immortal is not in vain?" "You don't need to be angry at all of this. How big is your Qi sea? Look at the golden elixir monk, the Qi sea is enough to bombard with spells, but he still carries 1,000 five-ton bombs in the storage ring! "This is the power of industrialization, and people who don't use it die. " ---- Already completed are the 2.68 Million-word old book "Arc of Fire", which has been ordered by 65,000 people, and "The Sunset", which has 1.52 Million words and has been ordered by 30,000 people. ---- Because I really haven't written about cultivating immortals before, it's a bit confusing to cross the border from the military field to cultivating immortals in modern times. Starting from Chapter 55 of the second volume, I adjusted my writing style and returned to familiar territory, which made it look better.
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Could you please stop licking the feet of our deer god with your head?
If you continue like this, you will be stepped on for the rest of your life, showing off your clown-like demeanor.
That's bullshit. The protagonist set by the author has less than 100 yuan and has to survive for a month until his salary is paid. He said he wanted to eat cheaper at night, so he planned to spend 2 yuan on a bottle of mineral water and a 1.5 Pack of instant noodles. In the case of renting a house and working at the company during the day, this behavior is really screening readers.
Boring light novel. Put on the appearance of a fairy.
Pretty interesting
It's just very wordy, with a lot of psychological descriptions, and the protagonist's growth is slow.
Hahaha, big white cat
What about dubbing? Come after hearing the news and leave disappointed
How is this book? The comment section is full of people with personal opinions and direct attacks on the author. How is the writing? I'm still thinking about whether to join it or not.
It's not bad, it's at the food and grass level. Except that the appearance of the wolf female master was a bit too Japanese-comic-y.
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Official(8)Scraped 11d ago
Free membership gift
Those in need can pick it up themselves. If you get it, please let me know. It will be sent regularly every month.
Could you please stop licking the feet of our deer god with your head?
If you continue like this, you will be stepped on for the rest of your life, showing off your clown-like demeanor.
That's bullshit. The protagonist set by the author has less than 100 yuan and has to survive for a month until his salary is paid. He said he wanted to eat cheaper at night, so he planned to spend 2 yuan on a bottle of mineral water and a 1.5 Pack of instant noodles. In the case of renting a house and working at the company during the day, this behavior is really screening readers.
Boring light novel. Put on the appearance of a fairy.
Pretty interesting
It's just very wordy, with a lot of psychological descriptions, and the protagonist's growth is slow.
Hahaha, big white cat
What about dubbing? Come after hearing the news and leave disappointed
How is this book? The comment section is full of people with personal opinions and direct attacks on the author. How is the writing? I'm still thinking about whether to join it or not.
It's not bad, it's at the food and grass level. Except that the appearance of the wolf female master was a bit too Japanese-comic-y.
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[Blue Boutique] The new book of Shenwu Liuliu has changed the theme this time. I have been writing about war themes before, but this time it seems to be changing the market and changing the theme of modern immortality, which is currently relatively hot. The protagonist enters an internship company, and later discovers that this is actually a place for cultivating immortals. The protagonist's spiritual roots are detected, and he begins to join the department to cultivate immortals. However, the immortal cultivators in this world do not fight with flying swords and magic weapons, but use thermal weapon mechas just like modern warfare. As a result, the protagonist goes round and round and seems to have returned to the author's usual war theme, but this time covered with a layer of modern cultivation, the writing can be even more outrageous. However, this combination seems a bit awkward, and it is not as smooth as the previous books. It may need to be worked on later.
⑦ Xun Zai! Fighting in modern society requires body armor... 🔥 🔥 🔥 The writing has improved, it's okay.
Hehe, the count will not write about military affairs this time, but will instead write about the original fantasy track. Wang Yi, a pig-footed man, cultivates immortality and strengthens himself at the same time, and is accompanied by a lot of beauties. It's exciting to think about it~~~
Creativity: 🌕🌕🌕🌗 Writing style: 🌕🌕🌕🌕 Settings: 🌕🌕🌕🌖 In modern fairy tales, the world is divided into three realms and six realms. The protagonist lives in the human realm and is protected by the Nine Cauldrons. The consciousness of ordinary people will be corrected by the Nine Cauldrons and they will not be aware of extraordinary existences. The protagonist, who was looking for a job at the age of 23, successfully joined the Xiuxian Company, and started off as a waste material with a golden finger. The world view is quite interesting, and the part about cultivating immortals is well integrated with reality, but it feels like no one has written about this subject recently. PS: Liuliu's new work, considering that the last two works have been completed normally and the credibility score has also increased, I will believe it this time. [Comprehensive score: 76.5]
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