Datang: Mc Cube Immortal Shocked Li Er

I have read about a dozen chapters now. The writing is quite good, but there is one point. Sometimes the writing is deliberately weak. For example, the protagonist keeps clarifying that he is not an immortal at the beginning. Later, the village chief kneels and says that he will not get up if he does not forgive the child. It is obvious that he can directly say that he forgives, but the result is that the person who does not know is not guilty, which does not mean that he is an immortal. There is also a stone house built after the pool was built in the back. He obviously knew that what he did was unreasonable in reality, but the author chose to write the protagonist thinking what the fuss was about. Isn't it just the basic operation of MC players. Maybe the author himself wanted to write a superficial story to show that the protagonist is awesome and awesome, but to the readers, it looks like he has become a bitch and still builds a memorial. There is no need to write like this. Write it normally and don't make the protagonist seem like there is something missing in his mind.

What the protagonist does and the items he takes out are regarded as miracles by immortals in the eyes of others. The protagonist has to explain more, and it seems that it is easy and cheap to conjure things up. Without explanation, it is okay, and Shizuo's brain patching can also be a fun point. Without explanation, it directly becomes poisonous. Don't do it just because it is very simple in the game, but in reality it is an operation that subverts the rules of the world view. Don't write it so that Shizuo thinks it is easy to get, and it is not worthy of being rare at all.

I feel that the pace is a bit too slow. There is a lot of content about playing house with children, and it always repeats "the huge waves in my heart" and "the shock that can't be added". Too much and a bit boring. Each item has to be shocked for a chapter or two, which is okay at first, but becomes a bit difficult to bear after more. I also hope that there will be no love lines in the follow-up. The death rate and the rate of being trolled in novels written with love lines these days are too high. It would be perfect if you follow the plot to speed up the pace and find something exciting other than show items.

The routine at the beginning is that the protagonist reveals the mechanism, the natives are shocked, then reveal the accounting when encountering problems, and the natives worship again, it is a classic and cool story, but the idea of ​​MC adding history is good, if you update it quickly, you can still pass the time without thinking.

It's okay for now. Don't be a nanny or a dog licker for the emperor in the future. Don't be brainless. You must have the arrogance of a time traveler and become Steve. Being a god is not too much. You must have majesty.

The excavation is based on one cube and one grid. If a real person looks at a one-meter-high staircase, the total height is three meters, and a staircase with a side of one meter will feel intimidating. This has nothing to do with courage. You can refer to a certain city dungeon, which will be extremely depressing, and there is also the air. The author did not make this patch. A one-meter-high staircase is about 4-5 steps if converted to an ordinary staircase. It is basically impossible to cross one meter high with just two legs. Of course, I just want the author to pay more attention to the details.

I'm an author who can't write a book without being shocked. He's been slow to update and is still writing about the car and windlass. I suggest you read the beginning and then throw it away.

That feeling is coming, it feels like the author is going to write some weird operation, and now something is wrong.

I like to read books about the MC system traveling through ancient times. The book about the Northern Song Dynasty was amazing when I read it for the first time. Unfortunately, it was unfinished later on. Other MC books are just average. This book... It's strange that I can still read this book, but why can't I give a single reason for recommending it? The writing style is weak, and it is hard to accept that the details of life and death are at stake. The IQ is ordinary, and the plot has just left the novice village. Readers who like to watch MC, please stay tuned.

In the second year of Zhenguan, the Turks were not wiped out. Did you make him the Khan of Heaven? And was the ax used by Cheng Yaojin really true? I really started writing after watching some music and TV series.