After I Became the Underworld, Global Terror Descended
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Mo Lin was named the Underworld Secretary in Yeqiu, and returned to the earth with the ghost-suppressing book. The earth has been taken over by evil spirits. "Brother, don't go out at night. There are ghosts and ghosts outside. It's too scary." "Ghost? Sorry, I'm not afraid. The more ghosts there are, the more excited I am." "This guy is full of ghost energy. He is at least an evil spirit. Let me catch him." The upright old man held an unknown talisman and pasted it on Mo Lin's head. "Are you suffering from snake spirit disease? You are the ghost, and your whole family is ghosts." Mo Lin took off the talisman and cursed at the old man. The old man was left alone and messy in the wind, "This ghost is so fierce, he is not even afraid of the talisman." ..... Mo Lin returned to Earth and started his ghost hunting schedule... Ten years later, Mo Lin walked through a street with hundreds of ghosts and was hailed as the strongest ghost master.
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⑩Same, I 🍅have read too much for free, and I can't get used to this kind of frustrating novel. The protagonist has strength, but talks a lot of nonsense when facing gangsters. It's frustrating to watch. You can be cautious, but don't get too carried away. I was attracted by the beginning on Douyin, but you just showed me the result? As long as the protagonist is decisive, I won't find this novel lj. (Representing only personal thoughts)
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Chapter 684 Another one? The wind howls! Mo Lin's face instantly became solemn. Why did this guy get out? Shouldn't he be searching for the secret of eternal life in it? Why did it come out so quickly? It's so abnormal. When Wei Liang saw Mo Fengxiao, his face instantly turned pale. "Who... Who is this?" Wei Liang could feel that the strength of the person coming was very terrifying. Even more terrifying than the woman named Shang Xun in front of him. I go... What kind of monster is this? Wei Liang swallowed unconsciously. "Merlin." Mo Fengxiao's voice was very calm. He slowly walked towards Mo Lin, with a playful smile on his face. "I didn't expect you to be alive." Mo Fengxiao's eyes swept over Shang Xun, and then fell on Mo Lin. "I thought you were killed by this woman." Chang Xun frowned and looked at Mo Fengxiao coldly. "Who are you?" "Me?" Mo Fengxiao smiled, "My name is Mo Fengxiao, Xin Ziruo's fourth disciple." Hearing the words Xin Ziruo, Shang Xun's eyes changed slightly. "Xin Ziruo?" "What? Do you know my master?" Mo Fengxiao asked. "I don't know her." Chang Xun said coldly, "But I have heard of her." "Oh?" Mo Fengxiao was a little surprised, "Have you heard of my master? Who are you?" Shang Xun didn't answer. She didn't want to talk nonsense to Mo Fengxiao. Mo Fengxiao didn't care, his eyes fell on Mo Lin again. "Molin, do you know why I'm here?" "Kill me." Mo Lin said coldly. "Smart." Mo Fengxiao nodded, "You killed the Eight Immortals and Ghosts and took away my master's identity as the lucky person. My master will always remember this account." Mo Lin frowned, "Your master took the identity of the lucky person from me. When did it become mine?" "That's not important." Mo Fengxiao shook his head, "The important thing is that you must die today." Wei Liang heard this from a distance and was trembling with fear. "This... This person also wants to kill Mo Lin?" Wei Liang didn't know what to do at all. First it was Shang Xun, and now there was Mo Fengxiao. Both of them want to kill Mo Lin. Mo Lin is still bound by the Silver Cord and Golden Bell and cannot escape at all. It's over. It's really over now. The blood loss went to grandma's house. Mo Fengxiao glanced at the silver-cable golden bell that bound Mo Lin, and his eyes changed slightly. "Silver cord and golden bell?" Mo Fengxiao frowned and looked at Shang Xun. "Why do you have this thing in your hand?" Shang Xun didn't answer. Mo Fengxiao sneered, "Are you from Fairy Yunxia?" Shang Xun's eyes suddenly turned cold. "I'm not hers." "Not hers?" Mo Fengxiao was a little surprised, "Why is that Silver Cord Golden Bell in your hand? As far as I know, the Silver Cord Golden Bell belongs to Fairy Yunxia." Shang Xun's face became increasingly ugly. The Silver Cord Golden Bell is indeed her sister's thing. Her sister gave it to her. The purpose is to let her kill Mo Lin with the Silver Cord and Golden Bell. "No matter what, Mo Lin is my prey." Mo Fengxiao said coldly, "You'd better not steal from me." "Your prey?" Shang Xun sneered, "I found him first." "So what?" Mo Fengxiao's tone became dangerous, "You want to rob me?" Chang Xun said nothing. She and Mo Fengxiao looked at each other, and the atmosphere became tense. When Mo Lin saw this scene, he was secretly relieved. The two men seemed to be at odds. He knew very well that this was his only chance. Mo Lin began to quietly use the power in his body, trying to break free from the shackles of the Silver Cord and Golden Bell. The binding power of the Silver Cord Golden Bell has indeed weakened a lot. Just when Chang Xun hesitated, the power of the Silver Cord Golden Bell began to weaken. If he could break free while the two men were confronting... "What are you doing?" Shang Xun's voice suddenly came. Mo Lin's movements stopped instantly. Chang Xun looked at Mo Lin coldly, "Don't even think about taking the opportunity to escape." Mo Lin frowned and said nothing. Was discovered. Mo Fengxiao sneered when he saw this scene. "It seems you haven't decided who will kill him yet." Mo Fengxiao walked towards Mo Lin, "Then let me do it." He raised his right hand, and a terrible ghostly energy surged out of him. The treasures of the Eight Immortals and Ghosts simultaneously erupted with a terrifying aura. When Wei Liang saw this scene, he turned pale with fright. "This... What kind of power is this? What a terrifying aura!" Wei Liang's heart skipped a beat. Shang Xun's eyes also became solemn. She could feel that Mo Fengxiao was indeed very strong. It was stronger than she expected. "Wait." Chang Xun suddenly spoke. Mo Fengxiao stopped and looked at Shang Xun with a frown. "What? You want to stop me?" "I didn't want to stop you." Chang Xun said coldly, "I just wanted to ask you something." "What's the matter?" "Do you know the person destined for the Purple Green Sword?" Chang Xun's words stunned Mo Fengxiao. "The person destined for the Purple Green Sword?" Mo Fengxiao frowned, "Why do you ask?" "I heard that the destined person of the purple-green sword can pull out the purple-green sword." Chang Xun said coldly, "Do you know who the destined person is?" Mo Fengxiao was silent for a while, then looked at Mo Lin. "What are you asking him for? Could it be..." Mo Fengxiao's eyes suddenly changed. "Is he the destined one?" Shang Xun didn't answer. Her silence was the best answer. Mo Fengxiao stared at Mo Lin with shock in his eyes. "Mo Lin is the destined person of the Purple Green Sword?" ~~ When Wei Liang heard this from a distance, he was stunned. "The destined person? Mo Lin is the destined person of the Purple Green Sword?" Wei Liang had no idea what the Purple Green Sword was. But judging from the reactions of these two people, the destined person must be a very important identity. This is a bit interesting. Mo Fengxiao was silent for a while, then sneered. "What about those who are destined?" Mo Fengxiao looked at Mo Lin, "Even if you are the destined person, you must die today." "Aren't you afraid of offending Fairy Yunxia?" Chang Xun asked. "Fairy Yunxia?" Mo Fengxiao sneered, "Who is she? My master, Xinzi Ruo, is number one in the East District. Fairy Yunxia? My master doesn't take her seriously at all." Shang Xun's expression suddenly changed. Mo Lin's expression also changed. What if Xinzi doesn't take Fairy Yunxia seriously? This means... Xin Ziruo is stronger than Fairy Yunxia? (End of chapter)
Great, my big penis was so awesome to Mo Lin at the beginning, but Mo Lin was so useless in the end. My rare ghosts and disaster ghosts became as common as grass on the ground. What about my vagina, which I boasted so awesomely at the beginning, turned out to be useless in the end? The good big penis directly turned into a ghost master, and then turned into a Taoist priest, and the Taoist priest turned into a red dust fairy? Originally, the Underworld was under the King of Hell, but now another cave master has emerged. How about, the author, you come up with a domain master, a realm master? The ghost will create another universe-level planet-level, as long as the author wants it I have everything, not to mention my Great Yin Division, which later became a combat unit. Now my Erlang Zhenjun is useless. Each one is more powerful than the other. I simply summoned a few fighting and victorious Buddhas and cleared the level in two days. It is best to summon the Jade Emperor again. The good ghosts turned into immortals and gods. Transform into a Buddha, even the Jade Emperor can't, just summon the Tathagata Buddha, use the Five Finger Mountain to suppress all those ghosts, it's a waste of the precious membership I spent 9.9 To buy, but the paid content is written like this, the free ones are better, I, the King of Hell, can't even defeat those ghosts, it's a miracle!
It feels like the author is in the underworld. The protagonist is a descendant of a heavenly master, but he can't even see Taoist formations, so what kind of successor is he? There is also a Taoist priest who is nosy, and the Taoist priest advises the protagonist not to kill people. Can't he see the karma of others? There are other "Two Talismans, Three Swords and Five Mansion Celestial Masters". If you are a Taoist priest, you can become a Celestial Master? Aren't all the Celestial Masters from Longhu Mountain? If you describe Taoist priests as being like monks, do you really understand Taoism and Taoist priests? If you don't understand something, look up more information. Since you want to write, then try to write better. The knowledge you learn will also enrich yourself. Also, the main character is too much of a mother-in-law, and it's hard to kill anyone.
The protagonist is brainless and only knows dog-eat-dog; the combat power is broken and the realm is randomly matched; logic is not good
The protagonist only knows revenge and revenge. A high-level protagonist who is chosen by the world has no talent at all. The brain IQ is as simple as that of an elementary school student. The paramecium brain has all kinds of tricks. I am definitely better than the protagonist with these tricks. He has no power, no strategy, and even no strength. It is exciting but not hard enough. The strategy is obviously not written by the author. In the book, power is broken. All regions of a country are dominated by Muggles. The world is full of fools. Villains who are not Paramecium can do whatever they want. I really don't know how they can survive for decades and hundreds of years. There is no check between the forces, and it doesn't matter if they go their own way. It's like a few children playing house. In the human world and in the ghost world, a stupid paramecium was chosen and given a few tricks to reach the top of the power. A mortal immortal can become a super-high-level immortal in a few years. You can let a Taoist cultivator who has been cultivating for decades go to eat sex. A thing that has been practicing for several years can fuck a god and an immortal. Just for fun, the gods are all living on dry food. You have to eat thousands of years of incense. The layout of the immortals who have lived for thousands of years will be done by you casually, and each one is single-threaded. A program created by a programmer is ten thousand times more complicated and reasonable than your layout of the three realms of humans, gods, and ghosts. The main character has a paramecium brain, the combat power system is easily broken, the world story is simple, and the logic is too poor. Please write more and make the plate bigger. How come one immortal and two immortals just let them do it casually? The protagonist is also a 2b. Can you add some strength and string together the world of this story instead of just one? Each dungeon is independent. Multiple strategic layouts are logically strung together. The four forces of immortals, Buddhas, ghosts, and men should have considerable strength. The unpredictable strategies. The protagonist explores the life arranged by various gods and saves the world by revealing the secrets little by little. This is how this kind of writing is done😹 Really, I have seen it a little bit now, and I have paid a lot of money. Sometimes I really can't stand it. Finally, I have to comment and give you some suggestions, because I found that you will only let the protagonist take revenge, and don't think about how to bury the clues. You just cap the combat power. It is too simple, and this is not how it is written without brains. Either you can feel more comfortable, have some combat IQ in leapfrogging battles, and rely on details to win, or you can go all the way to try to uncover the world chess game on you.
A bad book. I have read so many novels and I have never felt so frustrated reading them. 1. Collapse of combat power system 2. A hodgepodge, everything is added, but the result is not yet complete, including urban immortality, suspense, ghosts, etc. The more I read, the more confused I am and I don't know what I am writing. 3. The logic is difficult, leave a lot of questions, and then just go through them later. 4. When I read the previous article, I thought it was a cool article with a relatively naughty protagonist, but later on, I was forced to bring that book (the one for Mingbi), dragging the protagonist down to fight, and use money to do things. There are too many questions to bother talking about.
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Chapter 683: The Destined One? "The aura of the purple-green sword?" Mo Lin frowned, he had no idea what Shang Xun was talking about. Why does he have the aura of the purple-green sword on him? Isn't the purple-green sword in the hands of Fairy Yunxia? He had never touched the purple-green sword. "Who are you anyway?" Shang Xun's eyes became complicated. She stared at Mo Lin as if she were looking at a monster. The binding power of the Silver Cord Golden Bell suddenly weakened. Mo Lin felt this, but he didn't rush to break away. He knew very well that now was not the time to break free. He knew that the woman in front of him was hesitating. "It doesn't matter who I am." Mo Lin said coldly, "What matters is, why did you want to kill me?" "I said, if I kill you, I will be free." Chang Xun frowned. "What is freedom?" Mo Lin asked. Chang Xun was silent for a while. "Blood Pact." Shang Xun spit out two words. "My sister controlled me with a blood contract. Only by killing you can the blood contract be released." Blood contract? Mo Lin's pupils shrank slightly. Blood pact is an extremely overbearing method of control. Once controlled by the blood contract, one can only act according to the requirements of the blood contract. Otherwise... He will be killed by the blood contract. "Is your sister Fairy Yunxia?" Mo Lin asked. "You know too much." Chang Xun said coldly. "I also know that the purple-green sword was originally yours." Mo Lin stared at Shang Xun and spoke word by word. This is what Xu Qiaoqiao told him. At that time, Xu Qiaoqiao said that the real owner of the purple-green sword was not Fairy Yunxia, but someone else. That person should be the woman in front of me. Shang Xun's expression suddenly changed. She stared at Mo Lin, her eyes full of shock. "You... How did you know?" Shang Xun's voice was trembling. This is her secret. This is the biggest secret between her and her sister. The purple-green sword originally belonged to her. It was her sister who stole her purple-green sword. Wei Liang, who was far away, was stunned when he saw this scene. "Purple green sword? What is that?" Wei Liang couldn't understand at all. Although Wei Liang didn't know what the purple-green sword was, judging from Chang Xun's reaction, it must be a very precious thing. "Not many people know about this." Chang Xun stared at Mo Lin, "Who are you?" "My name is Mo Lin." Mo Lin said calmly. "Merlin?" Shang Xun's eyes changed slightly. She seemed to have heard of this name. "Are you that Mo Lin?" Chang Xun asked with a frown. "That Mo Lin?" Mo Lin was a little confused, "Have you heard of me?" "Yin Si Mo Lin." Chang Xun said coldly, "Mo Lin possesses the twin gods of Ye Qi and Nai He Qiao." When Wei Liang heard this, his pupils suddenly shrank. Of course he knew Mo Lin's identity. But he didn't expect that the crazy woman in front of him also knew Mo Lin's identity. This is a bit interesting. "It seems you know a lot." Mo Lin nodded. "My sister has been looking for you." Chang Xun said coldly, "She said you have something she wants." "What does she want?" Merlin asked. "I don't know." Shang Xun shook his head, "She didn't tell me." Mo Lin frowned, thinking about Shang Xun's words. Does Fairy Yunxia want something from him? What does Fairy Yunxia want in him? Mo Lin couldn't understand. "Why do you want to help your sister?" Mo Lin asked. "Because she promised me that as long as she kills you, she will return the purple-green sword to me." Chang Xun said coldly. Mo Lin sneered, "Do you believe her?" Chang Xun was silent. Of course she didn't believe her sister. The feud between her and her sister has been going on for many years. She knew her sister too well. Fairy Yunxia has never been a trustworthy person. "Your sister stole your purple-green sword and imprisoned you for so many years. Do you still believe her?" Mo Lin continued. Shang Xun's face became increasingly ugly. Every word Mo Lin said was like a knife piercing her heart. Yes. Why should she trust her sister? Her sister had never kept her word. ~~ Wei Liang, who was far away, heard the conversation between Mo Lin and Chang Xun and was completely confused. "Imprisoned? This woman was imprisoned by her own sister?" Wei Liang couldn't understand what Mo Lin and Shang Xun were talking about. But he could feel that there was a big story in it. "What exactly do you want to say?" Chang Xun asked with a frown. "What I want to say is that if you kill me, your sister will not return the purple-green sword to you." Mo Lin said calmly. Chang Xun was silent. She knew what Mo Lin said was right. Fairy Yunxia would never return the purple-green sword to her. She knew this from the beginning. But she had no other choice. She was controlled by her sister and had no ability to resist. Haha.. How sad. "Then what do you think we should do?" Chang Xun said coldly. "Let me go." Mo Lin said. "Let you go?" Shang Xun sneered, "Do you think I'm stupid?" "I didn't say it would be in vain." Mo Lin continued, "Do me a favor and I will help you get the Purple Green Sword back." Chang Xun was stunned for a moment. Wei Liang was also stunned for a moment. "What did you say?" Chang Xun asked with a frown. "I said, I will help you get back the purple-green sword." Mo Lin repeated. Chang Xun stared at Mo Lin, his eyes full of disbelief. "You help me get back the purple-green sword?" Shang Xun sneered, "Why do you do that?" "Because I am the destined person of the Purple Sword." Mo Lin said calmly. This is what Xu Qiaoqiao told him. Xu Qiaoqiao said that he could pull out the purple-green sword. Shang Xun's expression suddenly changed. "The Destined One?" Shang Xun's voice was trembling. The person destined for the Purple Green Sword is an existence that only exists in legends. The purple-green sword recognizes its owner and needs a destined person. Only those who are destined can truly control the power of the purple-green sword. She is not a destined person. Her sister is not destined either. Therefore, they were unable to fully utilize the power of the Purple Green Sword. "How do you know you are the destined one?" Chang Xun asked, staring at Mo Lin. "Someone told me." Mo Lin said calmly. "Who told you?" "You don't need to know." Mo Lin said coldly. Chang Xun frowned and fell into deep thought. If Mo Lin is really the destined person of the Purple Green Sword, then everything makes sense. No wonder Mo Lin has the aura of the purple-green sword on his body. That was the purple-green sword sensing its destined person. But this also raises another question... The Purple Green Sword has existed for thousands of years. For thousands of years, no destined person has ever appeared. Why Mo Lin? Who is he? A huge question arose in Chang Xun's heart. This man... Is definitely not simple. ... Wei Liang in the distance was completely stunned. "Destined person? Purple green sword? What is this?" Wei Liang couldn't understand what Mo Lin was talking about. But he could feel that Mo Lin seemed to have some important leverage. So he chose to stand quietly by the side, not disturbing the conversation between Mo Lin and Shang Xun. "Are you telling the truth?" Chang Xun asked with a frown. "I don't need to lie to you." Mo Lin said calmly, "If you kill me, you will get nothing. If you let me go, you may still have a chance to get the purple-green sword back." Chang Xun fell into a long silence. Mo Lin was right. She would gain nothing by killing Mo Lin. Her sister would never return the purple-green sword to her. But if Mo Lin is really the destined person of the Purple Green Sword... "How can I trust you?" Chang Xun asked. "You don't need to believe me." Mo Lin said coldly, "You just need to believe that I have no interest in the purple-green sword." Chang Xun was stunned. "You're not interested in the purple-green sword?" "No." Mo Lin shook his head, "The Purple Green Sword is of no use to me. I just want you to let me go." Chang Xun stared at Mo Lin and said nothing for a long time. At this moment, there was a sound of footsteps in the distance. Wei Liang's expression suddenly changed, "Someone is coming!" Mo Lin and Shang Xun turned to look at the same time. A figure is coming from a distance. The man was holding a gourd in his hand, and there were several treasures floating behind him. Pu fan, long sword, flower basket, flute... Mo Lin's pupils suddenly shrank. It's Mo Fengxiao! Trouble is coming. (End of chapter)
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It's so disgusting. They started to make the main character look like a jerk, but he turned out to be a piece of trash with a character problem. As for this character, he can still be an underworld boss. I can only say that all the NPCs in this book have been forcibly reduced to intelligence. It's like a hand with a bomb, but it turns out to be a single card. The most important thing is that the opponent also has a bomb, and it is played as a single card. This kind of IQ is really outrageous.
Although the author's protagonist is really cute and his actions are really cute. But I have also finished reading these five hundred chapters in the past few days. Although the fighting power is chaotic and the protagonist often makes me angry to death, I still hope that the author can make up for the regrets left by you. And I really hope you can write well and don't always write down anecdotes. In fact, you can change the copy. Don't just write about the human world. The strength of your protagonist is really hard to describe. I really think that in the entire book, only the protagonist's strength improves the slowest. Anyone who comes later can be more powerful than the protagonist. If the human world is so powerful, why would the protagonist still need it? In short, I really want those who died for the protagonist to have a good ending in the end. The protagonist should not be so cute, and the nonsense should not take up half of the novel.
I finished reading it in two days. It came from Douyin. My literary literacy is not high. I feel that the author is reading the comments carefully. Some people said before that the protagonist, the Virgin, does not kill people, but later, the protagonist is not the Virgin. It can be said that whoever pretends to do it. Some comments said that the protagonist is weak. Later, the author added a lot of patches to the protagonist. Various reinforcements, and although the combat system has generally collapsed long ago after the reinforcements, the protagonist's situation has never been smooth sailing and always has various reversals. It can be said that the short length of the plot causes some reversals to read very quickly, a bit like small waves, and some parts of the story have a feeling of ups and downs. , I can feel that the author has ideas, but it is true that there are less than 400 chapters in total, and many things have not been explained in time. It may be that the combat power has expanded too fast, and the author himself cannot keep up. In addition, I still like that there will be casualties around the protagonist. It is indeed uncomfortable to read, but from On the whole, if no one dies, it is indeed a mindless and cool novel. To sum up, if this is an invincible and refreshing novel, then the author's writing is really disgusting to the readers. But if his positioning is not an invincible and refreshing novel, then I would prefer him to compete against the sky. The protagonist does have a good chance to be the trump card, but his life is not smooth.
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⑩Same, I 🍅have read too much for free, and I can't get used to this kind of frustrating novel. The protagonist has strength, but talks a lot of nonsense when facing gangsters. It's frustrating to watch. You can be cautious, but don't get too carried away. I was attracted by the beginning on Douyin, but you just showed me the result? As long as the protagonist is decisive, I won't find this novel lj. (Representing only personal thoughts)
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Chapter 684 Another one? The wind howls! Mo Lin's face instantly became solemn. Why did this guy get out? Shouldn't he be searching for the secret of eternal life in it? Why did it come out so quickly? It's so abnormal. When Wei Liang saw Mo Fengxiao, his face instantly turned pale. "Who... Who is this?" Wei Liang could feel that the strength of the person coming was very terrifying. Even more terrifying than the woman named Shang Xun in front of him. I go... What kind of monster is this? Wei Liang swallowed unconsciously. "Merlin." Mo Fengxiao's voice was very calm. He slowly walked towards Mo Lin, with a playful smile on his face. "I didn't expect you to be alive." Mo Fengxiao's eyes swept over Shang Xun, and then fell on Mo Lin. "I thought you were killed by this woman." Chang Xun frowned and looked at Mo Fengxiao coldly. "Who are you?" "Me?" Mo Fengxiao smiled, "My name is Mo Fengxiao, Xin Ziruo's fourth disciple." Hearing the words Xin Ziruo, Shang Xun's eyes changed slightly. "Xin Ziruo?" "What? Do you know my master?" Mo Fengxiao asked. "I don't know her." Chang Xun said coldly, "But I have heard of her." "Oh?" Mo Fengxiao was a little surprised, "Have you heard of my master? Who are you?" Shang Xun didn't answer. She didn't want to talk nonsense to Mo Fengxiao. Mo Fengxiao didn't care, his eyes fell on Mo Lin again. "Molin, do you know why I'm here?" "Kill me." Mo Lin said coldly. "Smart." Mo Fengxiao nodded, "You killed the Eight Immortals and Ghosts and took away my master's identity as the lucky person. My master will always remember this account." Mo Lin frowned, "Your master took the identity of the lucky person from me. When did it become mine?" "That's not important." Mo Fengxiao shook his head, "The important thing is that you must die today." Wei Liang heard this from a distance and was trembling with fear. "This... This person also wants to kill Mo Lin?" Wei Liang didn't know what to do at all. First it was Shang Xun, and now there was Mo Fengxiao. Both of them want to kill Mo Lin. Mo Lin is still bound by the Silver Cord and Golden Bell and cannot escape at all. It's over. It's really over now. The blood loss went to grandma's house. Mo Fengxiao glanced at the silver-cable golden bell that bound Mo Lin, and his eyes changed slightly. "Silver cord and golden bell?" Mo Fengxiao frowned and looked at Shang Xun. "Why do you have this thing in your hand?" Shang Xun didn't answer. Mo Fengxiao sneered, "Are you from Fairy Yunxia?" Shang Xun's eyes suddenly turned cold. "I'm not hers." "Not hers?" Mo Fengxiao was a little surprised, "Why is that Silver Cord Golden Bell in your hand? As far as I know, the Silver Cord Golden Bell belongs to Fairy Yunxia." Shang Xun's face became increasingly ugly. The Silver Cord Golden Bell is indeed her sister's thing. Her sister gave it to her. The purpose is to let her kill Mo Lin with the Silver Cord and Golden Bell. "No matter what, Mo Lin is my prey." Mo Fengxiao said coldly, "You'd better not steal from me." "Your prey?" Shang Xun sneered, "I found him first." "So what?" Mo Fengxiao's tone became dangerous, "You want to rob me?" Chang Xun said nothing. She and Mo Fengxiao looked at each other, and the atmosphere became tense. When Mo Lin saw this scene, he was secretly relieved. The two men seemed to be at odds. He knew very well that this was his only chance. Mo Lin began to quietly use the power in his body, trying to break free from the shackles of the Silver Cord and Golden Bell. The binding power of the Silver Cord Golden Bell has indeed weakened a lot. Just when Chang Xun hesitated, the power of the Silver Cord Golden Bell began to weaken. If he could break free while the two men were confronting... "What are you doing?" Shang Xun's voice suddenly came. Mo Lin's movements stopped instantly. Chang Xun looked at Mo Lin coldly, "Don't even think about taking the opportunity to escape." Mo Lin frowned and said nothing. Was discovered. Mo Fengxiao sneered when he saw this scene. "It seems you haven't decided who will kill him yet." Mo Fengxiao walked towards Mo Lin, "Then let me do it." He raised his right hand, and a terrible ghostly energy surged out of him. The treasures of the Eight Immortals and Ghosts simultaneously erupted with a terrifying aura. When Wei Liang saw this scene, he turned pale with fright. "This... What kind of power is this? What a terrifying aura!" Wei Liang's heart skipped a beat. Shang Xun's eyes also became solemn. She could feel that Mo Fengxiao was indeed very strong. It was stronger than she expected. "Wait." Chang Xun suddenly spoke. Mo Fengxiao stopped and looked at Shang Xun with a frown. "What? You want to stop me?" "I didn't want to stop you." Chang Xun said coldly, "I just wanted to ask you something." "What's the matter?" "Do you know the person destined for the Purple Green Sword?" Chang Xun's words stunned Mo Fengxiao. "The person destined for the Purple Green Sword?" Mo Fengxiao frowned, "Why do you ask?" "I heard that the destined person of the purple-green sword can pull out the purple-green sword." Chang Xun said coldly, "Do you know who the destined person is?" Mo Fengxiao was silent for a while, then looked at Mo Lin. "What are you asking him for? Could it be..." Mo Fengxiao's eyes suddenly changed. "Is he the destined one?" Shang Xun didn't answer. Her silence was the best answer. Mo Fengxiao stared at Mo Lin with shock in his eyes. "Mo Lin is the destined person of the Purple Green Sword?" ~~ When Wei Liang heard this from a distance, he was stunned. "The destined person? Mo Lin is the destined person of the Purple Green Sword?" Wei Liang had no idea what the Purple Green Sword was. But judging from the reactions of these two people, the destined person must be a very important identity. This is a bit interesting. Mo Fengxiao was silent for a while, then sneered. "What about those who are destined?" Mo Fengxiao looked at Mo Lin, "Even if you are the destined person, you must die today." "Aren't you afraid of offending Fairy Yunxia?" Chang Xun asked. "Fairy Yunxia?" Mo Fengxiao sneered, "Who is she? My master, Xinzi Ruo, is number one in the East District. Fairy Yunxia? My master doesn't take her seriously at all." Shang Xun's expression suddenly changed. Mo Lin's expression also changed. What if Xinzi doesn't take Fairy Yunxia seriously? This means... Xin Ziruo is stronger than Fairy Yunxia? (End of chapter)
Great, my big penis was so awesome to Mo Lin at the beginning, but Mo Lin was so useless in the end. My rare ghosts and disaster ghosts became as common as grass on the ground. What about my vagina, which I boasted so awesomely at the beginning, turned out to be useless in the end? The good big penis directly turned into a ghost master, and then turned into a Taoist priest, and the Taoist priest turned into a red dust fairy? Originally, the Underworld was under the King of Hell, but now another cave master has emerged. How about, the author, you come up with a domain master, a realm master? The ghost will create another universe-level planet-level, as long as the author wants it I have everything, not to mention my Great Yin Division, which later became a combat unit. Now my Erlang Zhenjun is useless. Each one is more powerful than the other. I simply summoned a few fighting and victorious Buddhas and cleared the level in two days. It is best to summon the Jade Emperor again. The good ghosts turned into immortals and gods. Transform into a Buddha, even the Jade Emperor can't, just summon the Tathagata Buddha, use the Five Finger Mountain to suppress all those ghosts, it's a waste of the precious membership I spent 9.9 To buy, but the paid content is written like this, the free ones are better, I, the King of Hell, can't even defeat those ghosts, it's a miracle!
It feels like the author is in the underworld. The protagonist is a descendant of a heavenly master, but he can't even see Taoist formations, so what kind of successor is he? There is also a Taoist priest who is nosy, and the Taoist priest advises the protagonist not to kill people. Can't he see the karma of others? There are other "Two Talismans, Three Swords and Five Mansion Celestial Masters". If you are a Taoist priest, you can become a Celestial Master? Aren't all the Celestial Masters from Longhu Mountain? If you describe Taoist priests as being like monks, do you really understand Taoism and Taoist priests? If you don't understand something, look up more information. Since you want to write, then try to write better. The knowledge you learn will also enrich yourself. Also, the main character is too much of a mother-in-law, and it's hard to kill anyone.
The protagonist is brainless and only knows dog-eat-dog; the combat power is broken and the realm is randomly matched; logic is not good
The protagonist only knows revenge and revenge. A high-level protagonist who is chosen by the world has no talent at all. The brain IQ is as simple as that of an elementary school student. The paramecium brain has all kinds of tricks. I am definitely better than the protagonist with these tricks. He has no power, no strategy, and even no strength. It is exciting but not hard enough. The strategy is obviously not written by the author. In the book, power is broken. All regions of a country are dominated by Muggles. The world is full of fools. Villains who are not Paramecium can do whatever they want. I really don't know how they can survive for decades and hundreds of years. There is no check between the forces, and it doesn't matter if they go their own way. It's like a few children playing house. In the human world and in the ghost world, a stupid paramecium was chosen and given a few tricks to reach the top of the power. A mortal immortal can become a super-high-level immortal in a few years. You can let a Taoist cultivator who has been cultivating for decades go to eat sex. A thing that has been practicing for several years can fuck a god and an immortal. Just for fun, the gods are all living on dry food. You have to eat thousands of years of incense. The layout of the immortals who have lived for thousands of years will be done by you casually, and each one is single-threaded. A program created by a programmer is ten thousand times more complicated and reasonable than your layout of the three realms of humans, gods, and ghosts. The main character has a paramecium brain, the combat power system is easily broken, the world story is simple, and the logic is too poor. Please write more and make the plate bigger. How come one immortal and two immortals just let them do it casually? The protagonist is also a 2b. Can you add some strength and string together the world of this story instead of just one? Each dungeon is independent. Multiple strategic layouts are logically strung together. The four forces of immortals, Buddhas, ghosts, and men should have considerable strength. The unpredictable strategies. The protagonist explores the life arranged by various gods and saves the world by revealing the secrets little by little. This is how this kind of writing is done😹 Really, I have seen it a little bit now, and I have paid a lot of money. Sometimes I really can't stand it. Finally, I have to comment and give you some suggestions, because I found that you will only let the protagonist take revenge, and don't think about how to bury the clues. You just cap the combat power. It is too simple, and this is not how it is written without brains. Either you can feel more comfortable, have some combat IQ in leapfrogging battles, and rely on details to win, or you can go all the way to try to uncover the world chess game on you.
A bad book. I have read so many novels and I have never felt so frustrated reading them. 1. Collapse of combat power system 2. A hodgepodge, everything is added, but the result is not yet complete, including urban immortality, suspense, ghosts, etc. The more I read, the more confused I am and I don't know what I am writing. 3. The logic is difficult, leave a lot of questions, and then just go through them later. 4. When I read the previous article, I thought it was a cool article with a relatively naughty protagonist, but later on, I was forced to bring that book (the one for Mingbi), dragging the protagonist down to fight, and use money to do things. There are too many questions to bother talking about.
If the author doesn't update, I will update
Chapter 683: The Destined One? "The aura of the purple-green sword?" Mo Lin frowned, he had no idea what Shang Xun was talking about. Why does he have the aura of the purple-green sword on him? Isn't the purple-green sword in the hands of Fairy Yunxia? He had never touched the purple-green sword. "Who are you anyway?" Shang Xun's eyes became complicated. She stared at Mo Lin as if she were looking at a monster. The binding power of the Silver Cord Golden Bell suddenly weakened. Mo Lin felt this, but he didn't rush to break away. He knew very well that now was not the time to break free. He knew that the woman in front of him was hesitating. "It doesn't matter who I am." Mo Lin said coldly, "What matters is, why did you want to kill me?" "I said, if I kill you, I will be free." Chang Xun frowned. "What is freedom?" Mo Lin asked. Chang Xun was silent for a while. "Blood Pact." Shang Xun spit out two words. "My sister controlled me with a blood contract. Only by killing you can the blood contract be released." Blood contract? Mo Lin's pupils shrank slightly. Blood pact is an extremely overbearing method of control. Once controlled by the blood contract, one can only act according to the requirements of the blood contract. Otherwise... He will be killed by the blood contract. "Is your sister Fairy Yunxia?" Mo Lin asked. "You know too much." Chang Xun said coldly. "I also know that the purple-green sword was originally yours." Mo Lin stared at Shang Xun and spoke word by word. This is what Xu Qiaoqiao told him. At that time, Xu Qiaoqiao said that the real owner of the purple-green sword was not Fairy Yunxia, but someone else. That person should be the woman in front of me. Shang Xun's expression suddenly changed. She stared at Mo Lin, her eyes full of shock. "You... How did you know?" Shang Xun's voice was trembling. This is her secret. This is the biggest secret between her and her sister. The purple-green sword originally belonged to her. It was her sister who stole her purple-green sword. Wei Liang, who was far away, was stunned when he saw this scene. "Purple green sword? What is that?" Wei Liang couldn't understand at all. Although Wei Liang didn't know what the purple-green sword was, judging from Chang Xun's reaction, it must be a very precious thing. "Not many people know about this." Chang Xun stared at Mo Lin, "Who are you?" "My name is Mo Lin." Mo Lin said calmly. "Merlin?" Shang Xun's eyes changed slightly. She seemed to have heard of this name. "Are you that Mo Lin?" Chang Xun asked with a frown. "That Mo Lin?" Mo Lin was a little confused, "Have you heard of me?" "Yin Si Mo Lin." Chang Xun said coldly, "Mo Lin possesses the twin gods of Ye Qi and Nai He Qiao." When Wei Liang heard this, his pupils suddenly shrank. Of course he knew Mo Lin's identity. But he didn't expect that the crazy woman in front of him also knew Mo Lin's identity. This is a bit interesting. "It seems you know a lot." Mo Lin nodded. "My sister has been looking for you." Chang Xun said coldly, "She said you have something she wants." "What does she want?" Merlin asked. "I don't know." Shang Xun shook his head, "She didn't tell me." Mo Lin frowned, thinking about Shang Xun's words. Does Fairy Yunxia want something from him? What does Fairy Yunxia want in him? Mo Lin couldn't understand. "Why do you want to help your sister?" Mo Lin asked. "Because she promised me that as long as she kills you, she will return the purple-green sword to me." Chang Xun said coldly. Mo Lin sneered, "Do you believe her?" Chang Xun was silent. Of course she didn't believe her sister. The feud between her and her sister has been going on for many years. She knew her sister too well. Fairy Yunxia has never been a trustworthy person. "Your sister stole your purple-green sword and imprisoned you for so many years. Do you still believe her?" Mo Lin continued. Shang Xun's face became increasingly ugly. Every word Mo Lin said was like a knife piercing her heart. Yes. Why should she trust her sister? Her sister had never kept her word. ~~ Wei Liang, who was far away, heard the conversation between Mo Lin and Chang Xun and was completely confused. "Imprisoned? This woman was imprisoned by her own sister?" Wei Liang couldn't understand what Mo Lin and Shang Xun were talking about. But he could feel that there was a big story in it. "What exactly do you want to say?" Chang Xun asked with a frown. "What I want to say is that if you kill me, your sister will not return the purple-green sword to you." Mo Lin said calmly. Chang Xun was silent. She knew what Mo Lin said was right. Fairy Yunxia would never return the purple-green sword to her. She knew this from the beginning. But she had no other choice. She was controlled by her sister and had no ability to resist. Haha.. How sad. "Then what do you think we should do?" Chang Xun said coldly. "Let me go." Mo Lin said. "Let you go?" Shang Xun sneered, "Do you think I'm stupid?" "I didn't say it would be in vain." Mo Lin continued, "Do me a favor and I will help you get the Purple Green Sword back." Chang Xun was stunned for a moment. Wei Liang was also stunned for a moment. "What did you say?" Chang Xun asked with a frown. "I said, I will help you get back the purple-green sword." Mo Lin repeated. Chang Xun stared at Mo Lin, his eyes full of disbelief. "You help me get back the purple-green sword?" Shang Xun sneered, "Why do you do that?" "Because I am the destined person of the Purple Sword." Mo Lin said calmly. This is what Xu Qiaoqiao told him. Xu Qiaoqiao said that he could pull out the purple-green sword. Shang Xun's expression suddenly changed. "The Destined One?" Shang Xun's voice was trembling. The person destined for the Purple Green Sword is an existence that only exists in legends. The purple-green sword recognizes its owner and needs a destined person. Only those who are destined can truly control the power of the purple-green sword. She is not a destined person. Her sister is not destined either. Therefore, they were unable to fully utilize the power of the Purple Green Sword. "How do you know you are the destined one?" Chang Xun asked, staring at Mo Lin. "Someone told me." Mo Lin said calmly. "Who told you?" "You don't need to know." Mo Lin said coldly. Chang Xun frowned and fell into deep thought. If Mo Lin is really the destined person of the Purple Green Sword, then everything makes sense. No wonder Mo Lin has the aura of the purple-green sword on his body. That was the purple-green sword sensing its destined person. But this also raises another question... The Purple Green Sword has existed for thousands of years. For thousands of years, no destined person has ever appeared. Why Mo Lin? Who is he? A huge question arose in Chang Xun's heart. This man... Is definitely not simple. ... Wei Liang in the distance was completely stunned. "Destined person? Purple green sword? What is this?" Wei Liang couldn't understand what Mo Lin was talking about. But he could feel that Mo Lin seemed to have some important leverage. So he chose to stand quietly by the side, not disturbing the conversation between Mo Lin and Shang Xun. "Are you telling the truth?" Chang Xun asked with a frown. "I don't need to lie to you." Mo Lin said calmly, "If you kill me, you will get nothing. If you let me go, you may still have a chance to get the purple-green sword back." Chang Xun fell into a long silence. Mo Lin was right. She would gain nothing by killing Mo Lin. Her sister would never return the purple-green sword to her. But if Mo Lin is really the destined person of the Purple Green Sword... "How can I trust you?" Chang Xun asked. "You don't need to believe me." Mo Lin said coldly, "You just need to believe that I have no interest in the purple-green sword." Chang Xun was stunned. "You're not interested in the purple-green sword?" "No." Mo Lin shook his head, "The Purple Green Sword is of no use to me. I just want you to let me go." Chang Xun stared at Mo Lin and said nothing for a long time. At this moment, there was a sound of footsteps in the distance. Wei Liang's expression suddenly changed, "Someone is coming!" Mo Lin and Shang Xun turned to look at the same time. A figure is coming from a distance. The man was holding a gourd in his hand, and there were several treasures floating behind him. Pu fan, long sword, flower basket, flute... Mo Lin's pupils suddenly shrank. It's Mo Fengxiao! Trouble is coming. (End of chapter)
Tested for poison
It's so disgusting. They started to make the main character look like a jerk, but he turned out to be a piece of trash with a character problem. As for this character, he can still be an underworld boss. I can only say that all the NPCs in this book have been forcibly reduced to intelligence. It's like a hand with a bomb, but it turns out to be a single card. The most important thing is that the opponent also has a bomb, and it is played as a single card. This kind of IQ is really outrageous.
Although the author's protagonist is really cute and his actions are really cute. But I have also finished reading these five hundred chapters in the past few days. Although the fighting power is chaotic and the protagonist often makes me angry to death, I still hope that the author can make up for the regrets left by you. And I really hope you can write well and don't always write down anecdotes. In fact, you can change the copy. Don't just write about the human world. The strength of your protagonist is really hard to describe. I really think that in the entire book, only the protagonist's strength improves the slowest. Anyone who comes later can be more powerful than the protagonist. If the human world is so powerful, why would the protagonist still need it? In short, I really want those who died for the protagonist to have a good ending in the end. The protagonist should not be so cute, and the nonsense should not take up half of the novel.
I finished reading it in two days. It came from Douyin. My literary literacy is not high. I feel that the author is reading the comments carefully. Some people said before that the protagonist, the Virgin, does not kill people, but later, the protagonist is not the Virgin. It can be said that whoever pretends to do it. Some comments said that the protagonist is weak. Later, the author added a lot of patches to the protagonist. Various reinforcements, and although the combat system has generally collapsed long ago after the reinforcements, the protagonist's situation has never been smooth sailing and always has various reversals. It can be said that the short length of the plot causes some reversals to read very quickly, a bit like small waves, and some parts of the story have a feeling of ups and downs. , I can feel that the author has ideas, but it is true that there are less than 400 chapters in total, and many things have not been explained in time. It may be that the combat power has expanded too fast, and the author himself cannot keep up. In addition, I still like that there will be casualties around the protagonist. It is indeed uncomfortable to read, but from On the whole, if no one dies, it is indeed a mindless and cool novel. To sum up, if this is an invincible and refreshing novel, then the author's writing is really disgusting to the readers. But if his positioning is not an invincible and refreshing novel, then I would prefer him to compete against the sky. The protagonist does have a good chance to be the trump card, but his life is not smooth.
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