People Are in the Whole Law, but the System is in the Fox Demon

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There is nothing poisonous about it, but I feel that the fighting power of the fox demon is really not as good as that of Quanfa. I feel that the realm of the fox demon Great Demon Emperor is equivalent to the supreme monarch and the invincible monarch. If the power of heaven and earth is mobilized, it feels like a sub-emperor.

Just like this, it has nothing to do with the main plot, does not deepen the relationship between the male and female protagonists, and has nothing to do with supporting characters or subplots. One or two gags are interesting, or one every twenty or thirty chapters, but if you have a protagonist with a little brat look in two or three chapters, it seems to be the same in almost every chapter, and it looks like a bad gag. Style is your writing style, and it's something I should have chosen early on. But I like your setting very much, and I don't like this long nonsense. So I can only say it's a suggestion😇😇😇

The more I watch it, the more disgusting it becomes. The character of the protagonist is an idiot who is pretending. Holy Mother, it is disgusting. The more I write about it, the more disgusting it becomes. He is still an idiot, not even as good as Mo Fan. Mo Fan has just traveled for a long time and has no understanding of this plane. As for the protagonist, he is a hundred years younger in total. He knows this plane very well and still acts like an idiot. They also forcibly lower other people's IQs to highlight the protagonist's intelligence. This is really disgusting. I'm speechless. If I don't change what I wrote, the book will be ruined sooner or later. I still make jokes at every turn. There are jokes in almost every chapter, without considering whether it is appropriate or not. Many of the jokes are out of date. And then when there is a lot of content in one chapter, there are half a chapter of more jokes. I just cram the word count. It's really invincible.

It's too overwhelming. The totem force can only be upgraded to the intermediate level. There are too many bad jokes and it's too uncomfortable to read. It's in almost every chapter, but it doesn't matter much.

The more I read this book, the more bland it becomes. The women are not in love but it is all about love. It is far from the main plot. The plot is too slow and full of water. It is abandoned.

In the plot of Bo City, the male protagonist is a high-level one, but two years later, the male protagonist is a second-level high-level one? ? ? ? After the end of the Bo City plot, Mo Fan spent a year practicing before applying for the Pearl Academy. The author is also defiant. The male protagonist of the Bo City plot went straight to the advanced level, and then the timeline was messed up. Mo Fan waited for the new students to enroll. After a few chapters, there will be the freshman assessment. After the assessment, the male protagonist came to Dean Xiao's office and asked the male protagonist to go to the Imperial Capital Academy for exchanges? ? 666, It's been a year since you started writing randomly. I suggest the author review the whole method, sort out the timeline, and play less bad jokes. Every few chapters there are bad jokes that are forced to be funny. There are Xiao Shuishui, Tang Jiu, and Lanyin Jiba. They are a little offline. The emotional aspect is also written. What kind of ice teacher comes out to flirt, or is it Bai Tingting's cousin? ? Anyway, there are a lot of places to complain. In the early stage, in order to highlight the plot of Bo City, the author directly asked the male protagonist to quickly advance to a higher level. However, fearing that it would collapse, he quickly suppressed the male protagonist's cultivation level and directly suppressed it. By the way, the author had drafts of the book to write, and his cultivation level was gradually improved. After completing the three-step tower, it meant that I was at the second level of the summoning system. After dozens of chapters, I said that I was only at the first level of the intermediate level. I had to urge myself to practice quickly for fear of affecting Tu Shan Yaya's strength. After seeing it, I went back and looked through it. I thought I had read it wrong.

I just ate one Ding Yumian. The others were flirting with each other but refused to eat. Even if I put it in my mouth, I wouldn't eat it. If I hadn't eaten one Ding Yumian, I would have felt like the male protagonist was a eunuch. Every time the woman came to him for free, she would just say a few words and then disappear. There were various reasons not to eat, but I was really convinced.

I will start testing the waters on Wednesday and recommend it. It is very important to continue reading. Please continue to read! 😭😭😭😭😭

There are less than three or five jokes in one chapter. This book is so dense that it is difficult to read. It feels like the plot is not coherent. There are also many typos pointed out by book reviews. A few have been corrected, but most of the rest have not been corrected by the author. There are also a lot of punctuation marks, always three dots, which is very annoying to watch. I read a few more chapters and the more I read, the more I felt that the author's mental state was not stable.