Dressed as a Villain, I Became a Group Favorite by Breaking the Plot
by Dark Color
About This Novel
Lightning Protection: It's a cool novel without logic. The heroine has an average IQ after traveling through time. If you want to see how smart the heroine is from beginning to end, please take a detour! ! Qi Yue is wearing books! ! ! Here, she lost her mother when she was three years old, and her biological father was a big shot in the world of immortality, and he practiced in seclusion all year round. So when Qi Yue was nine years old, she was taken to the world of immortality. At this time, there are only ten years left before the development of the original plot. Ten years later, the modern white-collar heroine will travel back in time, and then start her counterattack journey with a golden finger to cultivate immortality. Qi Yue, as the vicious female supporting character in this story who prevents the male and female protagonists from getting together, will eventually meet her own tragic ending: she framed the female protagonist in the beast tide and was abandoned by the sect, and ultimately ended up being exploited by the evil cultivator. After participating in the God Transformation Ceremony and saving a half-demon, Qi Yue inadvertently dreamed of her own ending: Well... Eh! Well! It seems like... This plot has already gone astray before it even begins. In the book, the original owner was taken back to the sect when she was five years old, but she did not come to the sect until she was nine; the original owner had a teacher in the Hehuan Sect, but she did not; the original owner did not take a top-quality foundation-building pill until she was twenty-three years old to successfully build the foundation. As for her, Qi Yue lowered her head and looked at herself. She was born with an innate fire spirit body and a single fire spirit root. She also practiced the sect's heaven-level skills. With such conditions, she only established the foundation at the age of twenty-three. She was afraid that she would be beaten to death by the head brother!
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Official(14)Scraped 3d ago
About why the heroine takes Shulan and Shuxu to worship the immortal gate
1. Resolve cause and effect I've said it's complicated and you'll definitely have to debate it again, so I'll keep it simple. For example, if you take your relatives' children to work in other places, you can't just leave them at the station and ignore them. At least you have to find a place for two people to live. If you are kind enough, you can tell them how to find a job, and then let them find something to do on their own. It's their own fault that they have nothing to do, but you promised your relatives to take care of them, but you just left them at the station. If something happens, it's not your responsibility. 2. They were lucky and happened to meet the Immortal Sect's disciples Logically speaking, the heroine's father is a powerful person after all. After bringing people to Cultivation, he can also find a place to arrange them. However, the author personally feels that letting them join the Immortal Sect is the best option to get rid of them, and there is no need to worry about being criticized in the future if it is known. I put forward two assumptions here. If you think it is unreasonable, you can put forward it, but please do not attack me personally. Thank you! (No one is perfect, and I can't write to satisfy everyone. Even great writers are criticized, let alone a small author like me.) Hypothesis 1: The heroine abandons Shulan and Shuxu in Xianzheng City. They are two mortals who look pretty good. What do you think the ending will be? Hypothesis 2: The heroine arranges Shulan and Shuxu into a small family. Will they be happy after knowing Qiyue's identity?
Group or not group CP?
I want to see a boyish male protagonist grow into a mature monk with the female protagonist. Many male protagonists who cultivate immortality always give me the feeling of an elder, which is outrageous.
It's so messy, it seems like there is no framework, just write whatever comes to mind, it's baffling to read.
Why did the author jump around the timeline so randomly that he couldn't connect with the original one?
There is no plot, the play moves very quickly, and so many things have already happened without writing anything. How should I put it? It feels like I just write the beginning of one plot and then move on to the next plot. When I get to the next plot, I still don't know what happened. It's inexplicable.
...
I don't know if I have time to be confused. After all, I haven't seen it yet. Luo Liba's six chapters are just fighting in the house. Just rely on those two unpleasant concubines. Why are you talking nonsense to them? The heroine is too holy and not good to watch. 88
Why is the timeline so messy? Things that were not explained before suddenly pop up. It's so easy to get confused.
heroine
The heroine was taught a practice comparison, and she didn't say what techniques she practiced.
(●°u°●) At this moment, my heart is broken
(#°Д°) One mistake and he became a famous figure throughout the ages.
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Official(14)Scraped 3d ago
About why the heroine takes Shulan and Shuxu to worship the immortal gate
1. Resolve cause and effect I've said it's complicated and you'll definitely have to debate it again, so I'll keep it simple. For example, if you take your relatives' children to work in other places, you can't just leave them at the station and ignore them. At least you have to find a place for two people to live. If you are kind enough, you can tell them how to find a job, and then let them find something to do on their own. It's their own fault that they have nothing to do, but you promised your relatives to take care of them, but you just left them at the station. If something happens, it's not your responsibility. 2. They were lucky and happened to meet the Immortal Sect's disciples Logically speaking, the heroine's father is a powerful person after all. After bringing people to Cultivation, he can also find a place to arrange them. However, the author personally feels that letting them join the Immortal Sect is the best option to get rid of them, and there is no need to worry about being criticized in the future if it is known. I put forward two assumptions here. If you think it is unreasonable, you can put forward it, but please do not attack me personally. Thank you! (No one is perfect, and I can't write to satisfy everyone. Even great writers are criticized, let alone a small author like me.) Hypothesis 1: The heroine abandons Shulan and Shuxu in Xianzheng City. They are two mortals who look pretty good. What do you think the ending will be? Hypothesis 2: The heroine arranges Shulan and Shuxu into a small family. Will they be happy after knowing Qiyue's identity?
Group or not group CP?
I want to see a boyish male protagonist grow into a mature monk with the female protagonist. Many male protagonists who cultivate immortality always give me the feeling of an elder, which is outrageous.
It's so messy, it seems like there is no framework, just write whatever comes to mind, it's baffling to read.
Why did the author jump around the timeline so randomly that he couldn't connect with the original one?
There is no plot, the play moves very quickly, and so many things have already happened without writing anything. How should I put it? It feels like I just write the beginning of one plot and then move on to the next plot. When I get to the next plot, I still don't know what happened. It's inexplicable.
...
I don't know if I have time to be confused. After all, I haven't seen it yet. Luo Liba's six chapters are just fighting in the house. Just rely on those two unpleasant concubines. Why are you talking nonsense to them? The heroine is too holy and not good to watch. 88
Why is the timeline so messy? Things that were not explained before suddenly pop up. It's so easy to get confused.
heroine
The heroine was taught a practice comparison, and she didn't say what techniques she practiced.
(●°u°●) At this moment, my heart is broken
(#°Д°) One mistake and he became a famous figure throughout the ages.
