Swallows on the Eaves

Swallows on the Eaves

by Bitter Pomelo Does Not Drink Lychee Tea

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About This Novel

She will break the bird with ten thousand feathers that he thinks is the most difficult thing, and she will also wish to drop a star, and if she wants, she can blow up the kitchen. Who would risk their own lives and dive to the depths of the sea many times? "I knew he would be here immediately." The boy under the moonlight will compose her own love song. The grand ceremony of raising silver, the legend of Raphael...

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Reader 152240018445202227247mo ago

Small suggestions

I really like this book. I hope the plot will be developed faster. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled to be more than 1,500 words and less than 2,000 words (I know that the author has participated in an essay competition, and there is a requirement that it should not exceed 2,000 words). The characters can also be fuller and more three-dimensional⊙∀⊙!

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Reader 152240018445202227247mo ago

Suspension notice

First of all, I am a good friend of the author. She has been in a bad mental state recently and asked me to explain the situation. ↓↓↓ 1. She worked very hard on this book, but accidentally canceled her account for some reason, so don't think that the author voluntarily quit the online book world (I can't think of words to describe it, please don't complain, thank you). 2. She changed her account and of course her pen name, and is writing a book again. Please check out her new work, thank you!

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